3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
To be honest I am feeling shameless but.....but it's my first f/f so there is nothing wrong...... the first mistake is always free.....
its just sucks its bad ........................................................................................................................................
is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
To be honest I am feeling shameless but.....but it's my first f/f so there is nothing wrong...... the first mistake is always free.....
its just sucks its bad ........................................................................................................................................