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Starts out fine but then takes a turn. Rose gets disowned by her family which I do not think would ever happen. As much as the family are purebloods Molly Weasley would never give up her children. She literally killed Bellatrix for almost hurting Ginny. Super forced and against the characters natural personalities.
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Starts out fine but then takes a turn. Rose gets disowned by her family which I do not think would ever happen. As much as the family are purebloods Molly Weasley would never give up her children. She literally killed Bellatrix for almost hurting Ginny. Super forced and against the characters natural personalities.
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