Naruto’s Strongest Twin - The Battle Hungry Saiyan (DBZ Dragon Ball)

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DaoistUKlG2H

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VisionaryWorld

Shamelessssssss review by the one and only! I have a couple things I want to point out now. -no harem -alternate universe/timeline -op chars/mc although the skill gap in each rank is greatly higher potential, let’s say a genin before is equal to mid-high chunin or low jonin level -Slower buildup until about chapter 50, I plan on writing a lengthy novel so I decided the foreshadowing was worth going into -be my best/worst critic, it makes me a better author ! -the system progression is sloppily planned but once I rewrite the first arc everything will make sense in the long run

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LastGod

this could have been REALLY amazing but it makes no sense. This MC fought on par with minato and then was sweating from a short 1 hr spar with naruto. it has no understanding of strength tiers and someone with his level of stamina would not be breathing hard after fighting a genin. then thier is the really bad and immature dialog MC talks like hes 5 and so does every other character.

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Keyaruga_Tsuki

not gonna lie, I haven't read the story but I just wanted to voice my thoughts.---> What even is the point of people born into naruto with a dragon ball system.Like the power leveling is so different.Id be surprised if u didn't clap everyone there as soon as u went supersayian 1 or 2.Even great ape.Tbh stories like this won't ever gain traction.I want to read a dragon ball fanfic not a Naruto one.