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Great story with awesome writing, only critical downsides are the lack of updates with the last one being 3 months ago. I understand that you had to take a hiatus due to school issues but please update soon!!!
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This has to be one the more inventive RWBY fanfic i have read and is really good The character development is pretty good and the world is while technically a fanfiction it does not feel like one all the time and you are also really good at righting it so good job and hope you keep posting chapters
I'll give you a 5-stars just because of this... - *Clap!**Clap!**Clap!**Clap!**Clap!* *Clap!**Clap!**Clap!**Clap!**Clap!* *Clap!**Clap!**Clap!**Clap!**Clap!*
I really really, like this story, but the updating stability is a huge turn off when it comes to a novel like this, and your final few chapters seem to make it look like its getting shorter and shorter as time goes on, ive added it to my library in hopes that it will begin updating more often and with longer chapters. But otherwise the story is really good! all these small details your adding to the lore are making it feel like an entire new kind of RWBY i enjoyed reading it alot!
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The story is incredible. The whole problem with the rose-xiaolong family sounds like something that can deteriorate the quality of the story later, but so far you've handled it very well, congratulations on the great story and thank you for bringing it here on webnovels.
i really want to see where this goes. now i am one to hold a grudge so i really hope Ruby doesn't forgive her family😡, there are too many stories that have the MC just forgive them for the plot. i also hope she has a personalized sword like Qrow's Scythe or a Whip-sword or some thing unique🤔 and maybe she can steal Blake from Yang as revenge😈 other than that its pretty good for 5 chapters👍👍👍👍👍
Generally really hard to find a interesting RWBY fanfic so five stars will there be romance and if yes will it be Yuri and will she still go to Hunter academy and be apart of team RWBY?
Great story with awesome writing, only critical downsides are the lack of updates with the last one being 3 months ago. I understand that you had to take a hiatus due to school issues but please update soon!!!
揭示劇透 This has to be one the more inventive RWBY fanfic i have read and is really good The character development is pretty good and the world is while technically a fanfiction it does not feel like one all the time and you are also really good at righting it so good job and hope you keep posting chapters
I'll give you a 5-stars just because of this... - *Clap!**Clap!**Clap!**Clap!**Clap!* *Clap!**Clap!**Clap!**Clap!**Clap!* *Clap!**Clap!**Clap!**Clap!**Clap!*
I really really, like this story, but the updating stability is a huge turn off when it comes to a novel like this, and your final few chapters seem to make it look like its getting shorter and shorter as time goes on, ive added it to my library in hopes that it will begin updating more often and with longer chapters. But otherwise the story is really good! all these small details your adding to the lore are making it feel like an entire new kind of RWBY i enjoyed reading it alot!
Finally a generic idea sight me up ...................................................................................................................................
The story is incredible. The whole problem with the rose-xiaolong family sounds like something that can deteriorate the quality of the story later, but so far you've handled it very well, congratulations on the great story and thank you for bringing it here on webnovels.
i really want to see where this goes. now i am one to hold a grudge so i really hope Ruby doesn't forgive her family😡, there are too many stories that have the MC just forgive them for the plot. i also hope she has a personalized sword like Qrow's Scythe or a Whip-sword or some thing unique🤔 and maybe she can steal Blake from Yang as revenge😈 other than that its pretty good for 5 chapters👍👍👍👍👍
Generally really hard to find a interesting RWBY fanfic so five stars will there be romance and if yes will it be Yuri and will she still go to Hunter academy and be apart of team RWBY?