Reviews of In the World of Sword and Magic as Space Marine by ElJonson - Webnovel

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Filthy_acts

MC just wastes his bullets which he only has 100 of

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The_Swedish_Knight

............................. greatest stuff ever...

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Russian_Ace

this novel couldn't be any worse. genuinely. if it was written it complete gibberish and illegible atleast I wouldn't have had to read so many chapters to find out it was insulting, lazy copy pasted isekai slop puppeting the skin of warhammer to get clicks. the combination of the handful of reviews being dissapointed in the novel while the others were botted 5 star spam should've tipped me off but I invested way too much time in this novel still. if you've ever read one of those cringe ass isekai spam novels where the mc always acts in the exact same way to the point you can't distinguish any of them then you've read this novel already. except it's not just copy paste low effort slop, it's also parasitically attached itself to the warhammer community in an attempt to suckle anything it can scrape off them. the protagonist is not a space marine, not by any descriptions. he's tall I guess but other than that you could literally just squint and you wouldn't be able to make out any differences between this and those dissapointing spammed out isekai stories everyone's sick of. the mc has armour, so do most of them. he has guns I guess? but so does the default template, these ones are just reskinned a little. that's literally about it... the only 2 possible things you could say are space marine related are his weapons and armour both of which could easily be substituted for basic gear with no change to the story.

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Gnome_Warlord

very good would love to read the continuation if/when it comes out

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DementionMan_626

Amazing book, such a shame it ended so early.

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Dasavar
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I don't understand the want to get back to this reality, like who loves their parents after they've moved out and has a life they enjoy that much more than having actual powers and the body of a being beyond olympians?

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Aady_Shrestha

Definitely one of the best 40 K fan fix I have ever read. The story is great and compelling, and everything comes together in the end. Just ignore the epilogue and this fanfic is perfect.

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DragLord

hello, i'm looking for warhammer fanfic and this caught my eye, but i saw the update it's long so i'm still on the fence to read it, what's your update time range?

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Elon_Husk

I started reading this fanfic with no knowledge on Warhammer 40k lore, and now im hooked on Warhammer 40k.

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DiscoDream

This feels like a very rough outline for a story. I feel like I'm reading bullet points for what's supposed to be happening instead of an actual story.

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Nefistoteles

Without a doubt a good novel, quite entertaining The plot moves quickly but coherently and is very entertaining. The biggest fault that can be attributed to this work is that in my opinion it is too rushed and the same story could have been told better with about 50 more chapters. Having said that and in summary, it is a good novel and I recommend it.

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Spartan3636

I enjoyed reading this story far more than I expected to, I hope this story will continue to receive updates and that I will read more stories made by this Author when I have the time.

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VERMITHOR

this space marine is a disgrace ..........

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orangegummy

why bother transmid person when u strip his humanity why not wrote about a space marine guy that somehow come to fantasy world in the first place so he act like one without care why bother let a human from earth come a change him like that

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Frizepize

I'M BACK AFTER YEARS OF NOT READING THIS DUE TO REASON BEING SHOWING THE POSSIBLE FINALE AND WRITING, AND I DON'T KNOW WHYYY..... MOSTLY ON I DON'T KNOW WHY PARTBUT THR GOOD THING IS I'M BACCCLLKL

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BookNewbie

as gamer and fan of 40k lorecraft. this peek my interest but im wise enough to check the comment section and read some fellow 40k fanatic negative review. it save me time i trust my kin. -The Emperor guide my blade

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Monster22

I only have one thing to say for the author BLOOD FOE THE BLOOD GOD

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I_LIKE_SWORDS

You have a pretty good idea for a fanfic, but the problem that you have is the way you execute it. He is given a body of an Astartes, one of greatest prides of the Emperor, and yet he acts... cowardly... are you perhaps touched chaos?

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Luddic_Path

Masterpiece The update though painfully slow, :( Well qyality over quantity and all that jazz

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Linus279

The biggest problem is the story development because everything is extremely predictable. Every battle is like oh I have a complete advantage against my foes bam forces of chaos.

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Tyruss_1175

I am sorry but as a gamer and warhammer fan this is absolutely horrible to read. The MC is experienced gamer and warhammer fan. He is in the body of friking SPACE MARINE ... absolute killing machine and he uses limited resources on goblins. They cant hurt him in any way possible but he just decide to use grenade to kill few of them ... not a big group or anything ... just few of them because reasons... in short this should not be read by anyone who is fan of warhammer at all with absolutely basic knowledge of lore and/or basic common sense.

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one_punch_op

I don't care about the update stability, the author is very dedicated to the book and I love everything I have read so far. This is just one of the books everyone should try as it has a nice balance. The start seems generic but as you read more and more it becomes better and you just can't stop reading... So give it try

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rtrdggrfddd

)lllllllll) Leif cynic cynical NTN is do is

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heli
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i read some other 40k fan fic with this and i had to place this on a back burner because the other book pooled me morr, but when i returned to this, it is surely a book i would read more of.

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Absolute_Qlipoth

I can only say For the emperor!!!!!!!!!

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The_Swedish_Knight

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.mmmmmmmmmmmm..m.m...m.m..mmmm......mmmmmmmmmmm..........mmmmmmmmmm,.,.,,,, hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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The_Swedish_Knight

I like it. But it seem only one new chapter once a week I wish at the very least 3 or 4 once a week __________________________________________________________________________

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Trafford

Ok... the first thing to say, is this novel is really, really, really a hidden gem on this page. Rarely will you come across a 40K fanfic that is well done, especially one like this. I really wonder how much it will develop, and when the MC will return to the 41st Millenium, but I can say, it is a very good story. Romance is very slow, but on the contrary, it is realistically done and nothing is rushed or anything. The plot takes a place in a fantasy world that is inspired probably by Warhammer Fantasy and DnD and is giving the entire story a nice feeling. I would recommend this for every 40K fan out there to give it a try.

2yr
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Sorrias

Good fic but HORRIBLE grammar seriusçy the author wrote more than 100 chapters but he continues to make the most STUPID mistakes............

2yr
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Lao_Stev

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Filthy_acts

MC just wastes his bullets which he only has 100 of

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The_Swedish_Knight

............................. greatest stuff ever...

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Russian_Ace

this novel couldn't be any worse. genuinely. if it was written it complete gibberish and illegible atleast I wouldn't have had to read so many chapters to find out it was insulting, lazy copy pasted isekai slop puppeting the skin of warhammer to get clicks. the combination of the handful of reviews being dissapointed in the novel while the others were botted 5 star spam should've tipped me off but I invested way too much time in this novel still. if you've ever read one of those cringe ass isekai spam novels where the mc always acts in the exact same way to the point you can't distinguish any of them then you've read this novel already. except it's not just copy paste low effort slop, it's also parasitically attached itself to the warhammer community in an attempt to suckle anything it can scrape off them. the protagonist is not a space marine, not by any descriptions. he's tall I guess but other than that you could literally just squint and you wouldn't be able to make out any differences between this and those dissapointing spammed out isekai stories everyone's sick of. the mc has armour, so do most of them. he has guns I guess? but so does the default template, these ones are just reskinned a little. that's literally about it... the only 2 possible things you could say are space marine related are his weapons and armour both of which could easily be substituted for basic gear with no change to the story.

1mth
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Gnome_Warlord

very good would love to read the continuation if/when it comes out

2mth
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DementionMan_626

Amazing book, such a shame it ended so early.

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Dasavar
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I don't understand the want to get back to this reality, like who loves their parents after they've moved out and has a life they enjoy that much more than having actual powers and the body of a being beyond olympians?

3mth
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Aady_Shrestha

Definitely one of the best 40 K fan fix I have ever read. The story is great and compelling, and everything comes together in the end. Just ignore the epilogue and this fanfic is perfect.

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DragLord

hello, i'm looking for warhammer fanfic and this caught my eye, but i saw the update it's long so i'm still on the fence to read it, what's your update time range?

5mth
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Elon_Husk

I started reading this fanfic with no knowledge on Warhammer 40k lore, and now im hooked on Warhammer 40k.

5mth
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DiscoDream

This feels like a very rough outline for a story. I feel like I'm reading bullet points for what's supposed to be happening instead of an actual story.

6mth
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Nefistoteles

Without a doubt a good novel, quite entertaining The plot moves quickly but coherently and is very entertaining. The biggest fault that can be attributed to this work is that in my opinion it is too rushed and the same story could have been told better with about 50 more chapters. Having said that and in summary, it is a good novel and I recommend it.

6mth
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Spartan3636

I enjoyed reading this story far more than I expected to, I hope this story will continue to receive updates and that I will read more stories made by this Author when I have the time.

8mth
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VERMITHOR

this space marine is a disgrace ..........

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orangegummy

why bother transmid person when u strip his humanity why not wrote about a space marine guy that somehow come to fantasy world in the first place so he act like one without care why bother let a human from earth come a change him like that

11mth
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Frizepize

I'M BACK AFTER YEARS OF NOT READING THIS DUE TO REASON BEING SHOWING THE POSSIBLE FINALE AND WRITING, AND I DON'T KNOW WHYYY..... MOSTLY ON I DON'T KNOW WHY PARTBUT THR GOOD THING IS I'M BACCCLLKL

12mth
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BookNewbie

as gamer and fan of 40k lorecraft. this peek my interest but im wise enough to check the comment section and read some fellow 40k fanatic negative review. it save me time i trust my kin. -The Emperor guide my blade

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Monster22

I only have one thing to say for the author BLOOD FOE THE BLOOD GOD

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I_LIKE_SWORDS

You have a pretty good idea for a fanfic, but the problem that you have is the way you execute it. He is given a body of an Astartes, one of greatest prides of the Emperor, and yet he acts... cowardly... are you perhaps touched chaos?

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Luddic_Path

Masterpiece The update though painfully slow, :( Well qyality over quantity and all that jazz

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Linus279

The biggest problem is the story development because everything is extremely predictable. Every battle is like oh I have a complete advantage against my foes bam forces of chaos.

2yr
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Tyruss_1175

I am sorry but as a gamer and warhammer fan this is absolutely horrible to read. The MC is experienced gamer and warhammer fan. He is in the body of friking SPACE MARINE ... absolute killing machine and he uses limited resources on goblins. They cant hurt him in any way possible but he just decide to use grenade to kill few of them ... not a big group or anything ... just few of them because reasons... in short this should not be read by anyone who is fan of warhammer at all with absolutely basic knowledge of lore and/or basic common sense.

2yr
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one_punch_op

I don't care about the update stability, the author is very dedicated to the book and I love everything I have read so far. This is just one of the books everyone should try as it has a nice balance. The start seems generic but as you read more and more it becomes better and you just can't stop reading... So give it try

2yr
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rtrdggrfddd

)lllllllll) Leif cynic cynical NTN is do is

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heli
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i read some other 40k fan fic with this and i had to place this on a back burner because the other book pooled me morr, but when i returned to this, it is surely a book i would read more of.

2yr
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Absolute_Qlipoth

I can only say For the emperor!!!!!!!!!

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The_Swedish_Knight

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.mmmmmmmmmmmm..m.m...m.m..mmmm......mmmmmmmmmmm..........mmmmmmmmmm,.,.,,,, hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

2yr
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The_Swedish_Knight

I like it. But it seem only one new chapter once a week I wish at the very least 3 or 4 once a week __________________________________________________________________________

2yr
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Trafford

Ok... the first thing to say, is this novel is really, really, really a hidden gem on this page. Rarely will you come across a 40K fanfic that is well done, especially one like this. I really wonder how much it will develop, and when the MC will return to the 41st Millenium, but I can say, it is a very good story. Romance is very slow, but on the contrary, it is realistically done and nothing is rushed or anything. The plot takes a place in a fantasy world that is inspired probably by Warhammer Fantasy and DnD and is giving the entire story a nice feeling. I would recommend this for every 40K fan out there to give it a try.

2yr
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Sorrias

Good fic but HORRIBLE grammar seriusçy the author wrote more than 100 chapters but he continues to make the most STUPID mistakes............

2yr
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Lao_Stev

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