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Love it! Plot's great and as everyone else says, it updates frequently XD. Your work keeps improving too. Good job author and keep it up! Will be sticking with this one.
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mc is not smart. Someone with an IQ of 185, acting without thinking about the behaviors. mc mentality is garbage. The author has confused the tag villain with the tag hero. As they say in the other comments, mc IQ is 100. The writer removes the tag villain. The novel annoys you all the time.
Absolutely awful. I understand the cool aspects of having a system but the MC literally accomplishes nothing on his own at all. When ever he bites off more than he can chew the system intervenes with inexplicable powers. It’s awful
The author stste that the mc has 185 IQ but until chapter 22 the mc is the most annoying and stupid. So i need to drop this novel because i cannot stand the mc stupidity and the story development. You can try to read if it suitable for you
Diamond_Air Love it! Plot's great and as everyone else says, it updates frequently XD. Your work keeps improving too. Good job author and keep it up! Will be sticking with this one.
I stayed true to my words and read past 40 chaps it was still bad(for me at least but it wasn't good either (MC is a chump and I mean the type that should have been given the name chump or at least his initials he rides the system and Is spoon fed everything his character development is nil so far and his IQ there are just random numbers author thought of really I can't recommend it to any one but it ain't bad past chapter 40 just in no way good
Did this get dropped? Why is there golden tickets if the hasn't been a chapter in over 3 months? ..........................................
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The story is great and all but it lacks proper world building. The MC is supposed be intelligent according to the author but MC acts like emotionaly unstable idiot. The flow of the story is a bit lacking and the MC some how kills s level creatures even though he himself is low leveled and what heck is it about an s level taxi driver! And the constant exited yelling of the MC gets on your nerve while reading. The overall Idea and concept of the story is great but presentation is lacking
honestly the plot armour in the beginning is way to much i mean if it was extended maybe add a couple of brush strokes here and there so to speak so its not just dragon"grrr ima eat you i scence power in you" jay" oh noooo" .dragon"ill give you a last wish what is it" jay "well i had wished to be the strongest but your gonna eat me" dragon"your now my Canadat i choose you jaychu jay*proceeds to power up* not joking went about like that i mean its just it doesnt feel right it doesnt feel good its there to be there and i feel like my brain cells died later you find out about the fake taxey driver but still its like well ok then whatever after all the other plot armour but most will abandon it before then ima read some more im alittle past 60 as of right now ill comment if i keep reading it if not ill just leave it here
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the story is terrible then becomes a good binge read at 70 I'm at chap 70 dont take me seriously except about it b1ein trash be fore 70 kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
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what in fuqs name is this good shit how in ja jamaicans black ass did i miss this banger like wow nice ey continue with this shit like please
The MC of this story has an iq of 185, but mind you. This story does not deal in regular iq levels, einstein pshhh who is that 10 iq for him. Smartest person to ever exist, ehhh u will get a 12. Its on the same scale as deji with his monstrous 189 iq. As a wise man once said His IQ is “Dumb High.” Its so high that he absorbs your brain cells while you are reading the book forcing you to lose them.
Let me be honest with this story the 1st 30 chapter is a very tough on the reading as a lot of grammatical sentence continuity and spelling mistakes. With chapters being short for the 1st 50 or so on top of the generic plot/character progression. I would hold off until the writer gets an editor to proof read his current chapters and go back through and edit the existing ones because their are sentences that don't make sense.
I have not read the story yet so dont know how it is but to me the cover look good the promblem is that the sword looks line pastic and the hammer a litte fake i am not saying i am artis cause i am not but to me that how it looks.
It’s an okay book but the chapters are way to short to he considered a chapter. I’ll keep reading but I’m wasting my coins and coupons on this Fanfic
Sorry author but simply can’t keep promise to write review after chapter 40. Being inspired by other novel is great, however you almost copied the first few chapters will all the action included; it felft more like information dump than proper introduction to story. Early chapters lacks worldbuidling or emotions of MC, just some brief *thinking*. I personally think you went a little overboard with how the system works for MC. Almost perfect way to survive without doing much. Hope it gets better at later stages. Would love to see more review of peaople who are on ongoing chapters.
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Writing could be improved. Author really said Fk main’s iq and replaced it with a dementia person’s brain. lololololololololololololololololol
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Yo I stoped at the Part where it was free. I really like this book. is there any websited i can read this On? Maybe thE creator woIld let me read it For free🤨🤨🤨. all jokes asside this is a good book.
my overall review on this novel is 3.0 might change in the future once I catch up with the latest chapter. I'm currently on ch 39 as of writing this review. World background is simple but i feel that as I read more it will be better characters are also simple hopefully will develop more.. story development im liking it overall I think this will be a good read novel and not gonna be a waste of time. aside from some mistakes on wordings/typos( that are really acceptable in my opinion) I just want to point out to the author that it's really annoying to read the last 2 paragraphs of the previous chapter t on the next chapter, I feel that you are doing that to extend your word count and that's reallllllyyyyyy aaaannnoooyyiinnnggg. as I've said I'm just currently on chapter 39 as of writing this review and have available 126 chapters. I just wished that the once Mr author reads this review he will stop doing that after ch 126 or so. keep it up author and thanks for a good read DISCLAIMER: I'M NOT A PRO READER SO MY REVIEW IS ONLY TOWARDS THE NOVEL AND THE AUTHOR. DO NOT TAKE MY REVIEW AS A REFERENCE. READ IT AND BE YOUR OWN JUDGE. well so far the novel is ok.
The story is great and all but it lacks proper world building. The MC is supposed be intelligent according to the author but MC acts like emotionaly unstable idiot. The flow of the story is a bit lacking and the MC some how kills s level creatures even though he himself is low leveled and what heck is it about an s level taxi driver! And the constant exited yelling of the MC gets on your nerve while reading. The overall Idea and concept of the story is great but presentation is lacking
The story is well-paced but there were some instances about the MC that really confused me as a reader. But still, it's a well-written story despite the grammar errors. And I am curious to know how the story goes.
揭示劇透 Love it! Plot's great and as everyone else says, it updates frequently XD. Your work keeps improving too. Good job author and keep it up! Will be sticking with this one.
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mc is not smart. Someone with an IQ of 185, acting without thinking about the behaviors. mc mentality is garbage. The author has confused the tag villain with the tag hero. As they say in the other comments, mc IQ is 100. The writer removes the tag villain. The novel annoys you all the time.
Absolutely awful. I understand the cool aspects of having a system but the MC literally accomplishes nothing on his own at all. When ever he bites off more than he can chew the system intervenes with inexplicable powers. It’s awful
The author stste that the mc has 185 IQ but until chapter 22 the mc is the most annoying and stupid. So i need to drop this novel because i cannot stand the mc stupidity and the story development. You can try to read if it suitable for you
Diamond_Air Love it! Plot's great and as everyone else says, it updates frequently XD. Your work keeps improving too. Good job author and keep it up! Will be sticking with this one.
I stayed true to my words and read past 40 chaps it was still bad(for me at least but it wasn't good either (MC is a chump and I mean the type that should have been given the name chump or at least his initials he rides the system and Is spoon fed everything his character development is nil so far and his IQ there are just random numbers author thought of really I can't recommend it to any one but it ain't bad past chapter 40 just in no way good
Did this get dropped? Why is there golden tickets if the hasn't been a chapter in over 3 months? ..........................................
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idiot Mc!!idiot Mc!!idiot Mc!!idiot Mc!!idiot Mc!!idiot Mc!!idiot Mc!!idiot Mc!!idiot Mc!!idiot Mc!! idiot Mc!!idiot Mc!!idiot Mc!!idiot Mc!!
good stuff 👏👍👌 %^$^%^%^%^%%^%^%!/^%^%^%^^%%%%^%%%‰^^%%%%%%^$$$^$^$$%$$$$$$$$$$$$^$^$^$^^^^$^$^$^$^%#^#^#%#%#^#^#^#^#%#%#%#%#%^#^#^#^#^#^^#^#^#
The story is great and all but it lacks proper world building. The MC is supposed be intelligent according to the author but MC acts like emotionaly unstable idiot. The flow of the story is a bit lacking and the MC some how kills s level creatures even though he himself is low leveled and what heck is it about an s level taxi driver! And the constant exited yelling of the MC gets on your nerve while reading. The overall Idea and concept of the story is great but presentation is lacking
honestly the plot armour in the beginning is way to much i mean if it was extended maybe add a couple of brush strokes here and there so to speak so its not just dragon"grrr ima eat you i scence power in you" jay" oh noooo" .dragon"ill give you a last wish what is it" jay "well i had wished to be the strongest but your gonna eat me" dragon"your now my Canadat i choose you jaychu jay*proceeds to power up* not joking went about like that i mean its just it doesnt feel right it doesnt feel good its there to be there and i feel like my brain cells died later you find out about the fake taxey driver but still its like well ok then whatever after all the other plot armour but most will abandon it before then ima read some more im alittle past 60 as of right now ill comment if i keep reading it if not ill just leave it here
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the story is terrible then becomes a good binge read at 70 I'm at chap 70 dont take me seriously except about it b1ein trash be fore 70 kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
fsgdfsd fsdfdfef efwefew ff wefwe fefwefwefwefwefwefweff wefewfew few fewfew wfwefwefwefew fwef werqwwqe wqeqweqwe qweqweqw eqwe qweqwe qwewqewqeq
what in fuqs name is this good shit how in ja jamaicans black ass did i miss this banger like wow nice ey continue with this shit like please
The MC of this story has an iq of 185, but mind you. This story does not deal in regular iq levels, einstein pshhh who is that 10 iq for him. Smartest person to ever exist, ehhh u will get a 12. Its on the same scale as deji with his monstrous 189 iq. As a wise man once said His IQ is “Dumb High.” Its so high that he absorbs your brain cells while you are reading the book forcing you to lose them.
Let me be honest with this story the 1st 30 chapter is a very tough on the reading as a lot of grammatical sentence continuity and spelling mistakes. With chapters being short for the 1st 50 or so on top of the generic plot/character progression. I would hold off until the writer gets an editor to proof read his current chapters and go back through and edit the existing ones because their are sentences that don't make sense.
I have not read the story yet so dont know how it is but to me the cover look good the promblem is that the sword looks line pastic and the hammer a litte fake i am not saying i am artis cause i am not but to me that how it looks.
It’s an okay book but the chapters are way to short to he considered a chapter. I’ll keep reading but I’m wasting my coins and coupons on this Fanfic
Sorry author but simply can’t keep promise to write review after chapter 40. Being inspired by other novel is great, however you almost copied the first few chapters will all the action included; it felft more like information dump than proper introduction to story. Early chapters lacks worldbuidling or emotions of MC, just some brief *thinking*. I personally think you went a little overboard with how the system works for MC. Almost perfect way to survive without doing much. Hope it gets better at later stages. Would love to see more review of peaople who are on ongoing chapters.
揭示劇透 Writing could be improved. Author really said Fk main’s iq and replaced it with a dementia person’s brain. lololololololololololololololololol
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Yo I stoped at the Part where it was free. I really like this book. is there any websited i can read this On? Maybe thE creator woIld let me read it For free🤨🤨🤨. all jokes asside this is a good book.
my overall review on this novel is 3.0 might change in the future once I catch up with the latest chapter. I'm currently on ch 39 as of writing this review. World background is simple but i feel that as I read more it will be better characters are also simple hopefully will develop more.. story development im liking it overall I think this will be a good read novel and not gonna be a waste of time. aside from some mistakes on wordings/typos( that are really acceptable in my opinion) I just want to point out to the author that it's really annoying to read the last 2 paragraphs of the previous chapter t on the next chapter, I feel that you are doing that to extend your word count and that's reallllllyyyyyy aaaannnoooyyiinnnggg. as I've said I'm just currently on chapter 39 as of writing this review and have available 126 chapters. I just wished that the once Mr author reads this review he will stop doing that after ch 126 or so. keep it up author and thanks for a good read DISCLAIMER: I'M NOT A PRO READER SO MY REVIEW IS ONLY TOWARDS THE NOVEL AND THE AUTHOR. DO NOT TAKE MY REVIEW AS A REFERENCE. READ IT AND BE YOUR OWN JUDGE. well so far the novel is ok.
The story is great and all but it lacks proper world building. The MC is supposed be intelligent according to the author but MC acts like emotionaly unstable idiot. The flow of the story is a bit lacking and the MC some how kills s level creatures even though he himself is low leveled and what heck is it about an s level taxi driver! And the constant exited yelling of the MC gets on your nerve while reading. The overall Idea and concept of the story is great but presentation is lacking
The story is well-paced but there were some instances about the MC that really confused me as a reader. But still, it's a well-written story despite the grammar errors. And I am curious to know how the story goes.
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