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An ordinary girl that you can find anywhere die in a plane crash. She got reborn in MHA with the power of 3 different stand granted by a mysterious female voice. Will she use it for her own goals or help others with her new found power.
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This ff is almost 90% the same as the ff "Throne of Time". The only difference is: 1.the opening story is different. 2.be the spirit of origin aka Mio Takamiya. Pretty much all the story in this ff is the almost copy of the hrone of time.
Just rating my Fanfic, nothing else. If you like it, rate it and add to your library. i hope you guys enjoy it, even if you dont. Im a fan of Jojo and mha.
It's good, give it a try, but the formatting of the story is made for a long one, so expect more. The MC is likable, All might doesn't shout in every sentence and the real thing about just dropping into the world.
Alright my honest review: Writing Quality: 4 stars while it is good the story seems forced which takes away a star, good other than that. Stability of Updates: 3 stars the updates are sporadic and can't tell when the next update will be out. Story Development: 2 stars the story feels forced and I know all stories are like that but it feels as if the story is being pulled towards an outcome and it ruins the surprise of a novel. Character Design: 1 star although it seems good, the mc isn't cold hearted or aloof not even happy, it seems as if her entire life is for this exact purpose, like every novel, but this one seems more out in the open more of a direct version that people even barely able to read the plot is able to find the direction, although it started out good as soon as we see all might it's like a bell rung and we knew where it's going. Now onto the story, the story although good in concept is watered down by the authors love for jojo, I personally love jojo but having her fight scenes have ora ora and all is not helping when people who have watched jojo see this. I like the choices of stands but the way she uses it and how you portray it is cringy, the motorcycle, barrage noises are what are the most useless. The other parts are great but it feels forced. World Background: 4 stars what can I say it's MHA.
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Good storyk I ike it, and it seem that you finally create your actual fanfic not copying Throne of time. I hope you improve more on the future and not copying.
I really remender Throne of Time and Kurumi when I read and then I really like. I wonder what rhythm the story will take in the future, if it will follow the canon, if the characters will have significant chances... And if her will stay like observer and passive character...
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Its really good, but sadely this ruined throne of time for me because i kept relating everything to this and couldn’t get immersed in the story.
I like your fanfic. From the moment I started reading it, I finished it in one go and could only complain that there aren't enough chapters released yet. I like how sheacts and the way you created the character of Mio. So as for the stars 1. Writing quality: Perhaps it's because I'm bad at english but everything wasread well and there weren't any problems understanding what was written so good job on this part. 2. Updating stability: As I said I've read everything in one go so I could only go with the app saying the author release 2 chapters per week so I can't give more info but (btw author, if you want to release more chapter I'm all for it! Haha) 3. Story development: I've hear people say it was similar to another novel, couldn't tell since I didn't read the other one. The novel is perfectly paced in my opinion, although there are some points I don't get by exemple what's up with the villains she meet up and why is she giving boood etc? Well, I guess we'll understand later. Personally, I like it so continue the great work :). 4. Character design: Well, it's a fanfic so the characters are already mostly there but I like the character of Mio you created (well, the appearence and power are from other animes) the way you develop the conversation is interesting to me. 5. World background: Well, it's a fanfic so there's not much to create here. So overall, thanks for the chapters and thanks for writing this great fanfic and I hope to see more soon :)
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揭示劇透 I just noticed that I already have four other reviews in this fanfic.. its weird. Most of the time you can only write one review. Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler
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yeah. the moment i read "turning a random flower into a pen" i immediately gave up. gold experience's power is to give life, not to make life into inanimate objects.
writing quality is good story development is stolen from throne of time mc doesnt have a peraonality update happen once every full moon its a fanfic so the world background has to be good
Its good it just that the story is almost the same as another MHA fanfic novel soooo ye should change tha…,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
honestly this is an amazing book and so much time goes into writing it but author-San please focus more on our protagonists' power progression instead of only focusing on the story. sure you dont have to say exactlly which stand and where she gets it but it's also interesting that feeling of excitement whenever she gets a new power instead of "yeah since like 2 months have passed I already have another power" and gloss over her growth.
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卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 Welcome to MHA 4 years ago
- 2 First day problem 4 years ago
- 3 A early meeting 4 years ago
- 4 Heroic Spirit 4 years ago
- 5 New Beginning 4 years ago
- 6 New home? Part 1 4 years ago
- 7 New home? part 2 4 years ago
- 8 Future plan and visit 4 years ago
- 9 The Big Three and mistake were made 4 years ago
- 10 Timeskip 4 years ago
- 11 Meeting Izuku 4 years ago
- 12 Training part 1 4 years ago
- 13 Training part 2 4 years ago
- 14 Test of U.A. Part 1 4 years ago
- 15 test of U.A. part 2 4 years ago
- 16 Test of U.A. part 3 3 years ago
- 17 U.A. Exam part 1 3 years ago
- 18 U.A. exam part 2 3 years ago
- 19 First day as a teacher 3 years ago
- 20 Class1-A 3 years ago
- 21 Quirk test part 1 3 years ago
- 22 Quirk test part 2 3 years ago
- 23 Sadistic Mio? 3 years ago
- 24 Ground Beta 3 years ago
- 25 kocchi Wo Miro! 3 years ago
- 26 Butterflies are harmless right? 3 years ago
- 27 Warm up’s over boys, Time for the real fight! 3 years ago
- 28 Discussion 3 years ago
- 29 A little chat 3 years ago
- 30 Come to light part 1 3 years ago
- 31 Come to the light part 2 3 years ago
- 32 Little change of the story 3 years ago
- 33 U.S.J part 1 3 years ago
- 34 U.S.J part 2 3 years ago
- 35 U.S.J part 3 3 years ago
- 36 U.S.J part 4 3 years ago
卷 2 : Season 2
- 37 Season 2 3 years ago
- 38 Preparation for U.A Festival 3 years ago
- 39 Mio dreams came true 3 years ago
- 40 Days of training 3 years ago
- 41 The tournament day and maid service 3 years ago
- 42 The start of the tournament 3 years ago
- 43 Obstacle course 3 years ago
- 44 cavalry match 3 years ago
- 45 Filler (cuz that’s what everyone wants) 3 years ago
- 46 Break before 1 vs 1 3 years ago
- 47 Having fun with the vampire 3 years ago
- 48 Ceremony 3 years ago
- 49 Mio VS a music instrument? 3 years ago
- 50 My hero name? 3 years ago
- 51 Hero Names 3 years ago
Kind of like throne of time. Hhhhhhhh day grub gum from Bill comb con con fun heck CNN TFT full dm bet of TV bio of gym is by