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I've been a fan of solo leveling and even finished it's novel. At first I was intrigued since this type of stories are what I am into however as I continue on reading I keep on feeling this deja vu until the game system and quest arrived. Everything was fine until the exercise part and the punishment explanation. That's when I knew that I got into this because it's very very similar.... absolutely very similar(identical) to solo leveling. With few changes it was like I'm reading a fanfic version instead.
This is just a rip off of solo leveling. To read further in this blatant copy of solo leveling you have to use coins, which is unreal because it has no originality whatsoever. So far from these 20 chapters it has been a copy pasta of Solo Leveling. Don't waste coins on this copy and paste novel.
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To similar to solo leveling up to the 20th chapter And people or at least i hope so won’t be stupid enough to pay coins or fast pass for a solo like book especially when it start at the 21th chapter instead of 41th
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Not worth it to use fast past and coins to unlock more chapters, felt like reading a watered down version of solo leveling, so many errors on the chapters so disappointing
Got some talent! The author can absolutely write a good story. I do not understand why others would put this low rates. Keep it up! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja!
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Trash at best. The story is too scattered to be worth power stones as it is. MC seems like he'll advance quickly, but the juicy bits of the story get interrupted with side characters and 'intrigue' bits.
Hello, I'm the Author of this trashy story. For those who are new here and are gonna read this. Allow me to rate this myself, the Author. Writing quality: 1 star, this story has poor grammar quality. But, I've been trying to improve my English writing skills(English isn't my native language). And, I guess, I have improved, like, the tiniest bit, maybe, maybe not. I also realized that it's super hard to create an action novel, with my writing skills. Stability Update: 2 star maybe, I woke up everyday at dawn, just to continue this story. That's how badly I want to end this story. Story Development: This is my first time writing a novel and didn't study how to write one. So, I'll leave it to you guys. The same goes for the character design and world background. After reading Solo Leveling, I was like, 'Oh, I want to write something like this'. But, as it turns out, I was just copying it. Chapter 1 up to Chapter 30, I think, the grammar's not that good, but still understandable. As the others said, this story is too similar to Solo Leveling with bad grammar. A lot of readers have dropped this story, so if you're not interested please look for another interesting, top quality novel. This story isn't suited for your taste. Thanks :)
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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too similar to solo leveling, not to be rude and downplay the author's efforts and stuff but I would like it to be a little unique and not too similar to other stories
the author was too lazy to think about his book and he simply remade "solo leveling" for himself. I think we are considered idiots. if I could put it below 1 star, then I would have done so.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
this novel chapter locked faster than any other, you only got free 20 chapters. now I'm not here to review the novel, i just wanted to rant a bit and drop 1 star
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I read to chapter 12 and I have to say the story, so far, is way too similar so Solo Leveling to be a coincidence, now im not saying that the author straight up „stole“ more like that he let him self be inspired alot...
I got 7 chapters before I couldn't read it anymore. MC was selfish, lied to his friends, and even though he was the 'weakest' he still managed to be the one who made the group survive, even though he supposedly completely useless. Also somehow the weakest person there managed to still a key in front of 2 other higher leveled people. That makes no sense at all.
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Same thing as solo leveling........................................................................................................................
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I've been a fan of solo leveling and even finished it's novel. At first I was intrigued since this type of stories are what I am into however as I continue on reading I keep on feeling this deja vu until the game system and quest arrived. Everything was fine until the exercise part and the punishment explanation. That's when I knew that I got into this because it's very very similar.... absolutely very similar(identical) to solo leveling. With few changes it was like I'm reading a fanfic version instead.
This is just a rip off of solo leveling. To read further in this blatant copy of solo leveling you have to use coins, which is unreal because it has no originality whatsoever. So far from these 20 chapters it has been a copy pasta of Solo Leveling. Don't waste coins on this copy and paste novel.
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To similar to solo leveling up to the 20th chapter And people or at least i hope so won’t be stupid enough to pay coins or fast pass for a solo like book especially when it start at the 21th chapter instead of 41th
well I'm just gonna come out and say that sung jin woo would like to talk. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnmnnnnn aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Not worth it to use fast past and coins to unlock more chapters, felt like reading a watered down version of solo leveling, so many errors on the chapters so disappointing
Got some talent! The author can absolutely write a good story. I do not understand why others would put this low rates. Keep it up! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja! Aja!
interesting story but a bit too similar to other books. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Trash at best. The story is too scattered to be worth power stones as it is. MC seems like he'll advance quickly, but the juicy bits of the story get interrupted with side characters and 'intrigue' bits.
Hello, I'm the Author of this trashy story. For those who are new here and are gonna read this. Allow me to rate this myself, the Author. Writing quality: 1 star, this story has poor grammar quality. But, I've been trying to improve my English writing skills(English isn't my native language). And, I guess, I have improved, like, the tiniest bit, maybe, maybe not. I also realized that it's super hard to create an action novel, with my writing skills. Stability Update: 2 star maybe, I woke up everyday at dawn, just to continue this story. That's how badly I want to end this story. Story Development: This is my first time writing a novel and didn't study how to write one. So, I'll leave it to you guys. The same goes for the character design and world background. After reading Solo Leveling, I was like, 'Oh, I want to write something like this'. But, as it turns out, I was just copying it. Chapter 1 up to Chapter 30, I think, the grammar's not that good, but still understandable. As the others said, this story is too similar to Solo Leveling with bad grammar. A lot of readers have dropped this story, so if you're not interested please look for another interesting, top quality novel. This story isn't suited for your taste. Thanks :)
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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the author was too lazy to think about his book and he simply remade "solo leveling" for himself. I think we are considered idiots. if I could put it below 1 star, then I would have done so.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
this novel chapter locked faster than any other, you only got free 20 chapters. now I'm not here to review the novel, i just wanted to rant a bit and drop 1 star
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I read to chapter 12 and I have to say the story, so far, is way too similar so Solo Leveling to be a coincidence, now im not saying that the author straight up „stole“ more like that he let him self be inspired alot...
I got 7 chapters before I couldn't read it anymore. MC was selfish, lied to his friends, and even though he was the 'weakest' he still managed to be the one who made the group survive, even though he supposedly completely useless. Also somehow the weakest person there managed to still a key in front of 2 other higher leveled people. That makes no sense at all.
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Same thing as solo leveling........................................................................................................................