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🔥🔥the character set up is amazing The English is quite interesting 🤔 I haven’t spotted any grammatical errors. The plot of the story is quite interesting and very very impressive. This book is more about female empowerment not just that but also shows the proper examples of it. This book is about a girl stuck in a life she believes is real but later on turns out things were not exactly as it seems. Not only are there hidden facts which cause suspense and leaves us at the edge of our seats but there are also common facts and events that were properly explained well All and all it’s quite interesting
The story development is absolutely impeccable. Everything is so much in sync and the floor. I have no words mhan you can write Bl_ck_lotus I don’t even know where in the world you find the ideas nor the words because it’s just so amazing. The world background and character design is amazing the way the characters features and facial emotions are all written down in words is beyond me. And might I say the names of the characters especially Stormi is just a whole vibe 😂😂 I’m really really loving this book.
🔥🔥the character set up is amazing The English is quite interesting 🤔 I haven’t spotted any grammatical errors. The plot of the story is quite interesting and very very impressive. This book is more about female empowerment not just that but also shows the proper examples of it. This book is about a girl stuck in a life she believes is real but later on turns out things were not exactly as it seems. Not only are there hidden facts which cause suspense and leaves us at the edge of our seats but there are also common facts and events that were properly explained well All and all it’s quite interesting
The story development is absolutely impeccable. Everything is so much in sync and the floor. I have no words mhan you can write Bl_ck_lotus I don’t even know where in the world you find the ideas nor the words because it’s just so amazing. The world background and character design is amazing the way the characters features and facial emotions are all written down in words is beyond me. And might I say the names of the characters especially Stormi is just a whole vibe 😂😂 I’m really really loving this book.