MARVEL: RANDOM SYSTEM

LV 12

Dayside

Honest to god garbage. The grammar isn't the worst I've ever seen but it's still quite bad. The characters so far have 0 substance. All the does is train and do his stupid ass gatcha. The author clearly tries to make this very comedic but it comes out forced. It's very cringe as well.

LV 4

sunschao

not bad at all, tho the mc doesn't seem to be using his abilities properly .................................................................................

LV 4

Movezbatch

Proof of the fact that people are desperate for marvel fanfics. This is literally garbage. From grammar to character interactions this shit look like written by a 12 year old with 0 effort. Talks feels weird and everything is stupid. Mc is so fucking stupid it not even funny.

LV 6

Weirdo

I have read it and definitely noy the best. But I'm willing to give it a good old second chances. If only author didn't Nerf him or at least fully use the ability he have... I don't know if author Nerf or is it author him/herself that didn't know how to use it properly...

LV 13

StellarJade

Yet another Marvel System novel that is utter garbage. This is what the 8 in like 2 months? Looking foward to you dropping this in 20 chapters like all the other authors.

LV 14

Brezer

garbage . engrish is terrible. I really have no idea why I am taking time to even post a review for this. I guess to save you time from reading this.

LV 11

Roh594

I really like the fanfic i gave low ratings because i want to take a wait and see attitude to see whether you just drop this novel out of the blue i seen several authors do similar with nice fanfics like your so sorry author

LV 3

enryuuuuu3

TRASH .

LV 2

Nunya

I'm really sorry but I really need to be honest here... You need to improve your grammar, by, like, a ton. I understand that the first chapter was just some "BS nonsense" to start the story, but it does clue us in on how you'll be structuring the story, world, and characters in the following chapters, and from what I read, it's just a constant flow of info that doesn't seem real. The trick is to try and put yourself in the skin of the characters, then you can try to begin to make the story sound like you're living it, and by extension makes us, the readers, feel like we're the MC. The grammar, alone, would already do a LOT of good to the story, but the real bitch is in the rest. It's hard to write, but this is what separates the ones who care from those who just write whatever for no reason. If you read this, I hope you take it well. I'd like to see it get better, because, in itself, the premise is pretty neat. Also, never forget, you can ALWAYS edit already uploaded chapters. So, it's never too late to go back and check if you can improve something, be it grammar, spelling, or otherwise.

LV 4

Sage_DeimosBr

man, this fanfic is very good ... congratulations, you are...... ................................................................................................ ................................................................................................

LV 14

MrStealYourOnahole

It had a lot of potential but sadly the author wasted it. The system while not new the implementation/rules are unique. It giving the MC random stuff once a month is a great idea. Not only does it give an explanation about where the MC power came from(like usual), it also gives the author another way to pace the story. The author even gave the MC a way to get more powerful,but he decided to say f that lets give him the result of that training through the system making the training redundant. That's the main problem I have with the MC. The characters are bare bones at best, they are given the same amount of care as people give attention to janitors. For a reference I've spent more time writing this review than the author has spent on the characters(besides MC). altogether it needs a good rewrite with this as a what not to do **:you might of noticed how i didn't talk about the authors writing quality well i'm not its a waste of time and energy coming to a fanfic expecting anything more than one or two novels being above decent quality.I also didn't talk about the world background because there is no world background to talk about.

LV 4

MrChopra

keep it up 👍🐷🐵🙊🙊🐒🐒🐒🙊🐒🐦🐒🧦📞📽📽📽📽📽📽📽📽📽☎️☎️☎️☎️☎️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️🦹‍♀️

LV 2

Fire_Duck

I really liked this story so far 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

LV 14

idle_enthusiast

generic wish full filings fanfic with system and op power with no basis and integrity.what you expect? real plot? is basically a sandbox game in creative mode.

LV 3

aragthi

Don't know if I'm imagining it but the quality of the writing went way down in the previous 2 chapters. I still like the idea of a luck based hero that will get more powerfull the longer he is active.

LV 4

utter_curiosity

You sir had my interest but now you got my attention............................................. ....................

LV 3

aragthi

Like the idea for the story and how its developing. You have to work on the grammar, it doesn't have to be perfect but some of the sentences on this chapter made no sense. Also pay attention to the use of He and She to differentiate character genders, its all over the place.

LV 5

Decimation

Thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon and keep up and don't drop and waiting for new chapters to read. Great work so keep up.

LV 1

Theadesy22

don't read this please it is for your own good