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While I'm not huge on changing the cannon before the avengers get together, I still like the story so far. I'm also iffy on the dimensional chat but I am curious to see where it goes.
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keep up the work auther pleas don't abandon this fanfiction pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees
the story is just getting better and batter . mr auther keep up the good work and why ther isnt an option fo power ston vote and thank u you
i have to reviem my work right .......... ....................................................................................................
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As a huge fan of 'Naruto' and ' Assassin's Creed's, I am gonna have to give this story a 5 star review. Keep I other good work, Mr. Author!!
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I like this so far. I mean I read some fanfiction. where the mc can beat a fuking kage when he is a baby. the hell with this. I hope you continue
Imma rate 5 cause i love assasins creed and ezio is my personal favorite out of all the others....and he would be perfect in this world..........need more chappiesss p.s use grammarly for grammar mistakes....or something similar
2 chapters only but i already like it ....................................................................................................
First of all: I like the idea and story so far. But: imo the reaction of Ezio to the speech at school (Will of Fire) was kinda unexpected. I mean that guy leads a group of Assassin's with a few but strict rules, fighting against those that seek control. So it felt unnatural to me that he would agree with the concept of 'Will if Fire' without first questioning what this concept really means / how it could be exploited. I hope this story will be continued (no updates for 2 years) or rewritten (if so pls let us know autor-san) as it is really unique.
揭示劇透 Ahhhh,,,,,noooooowwww,,,,,why,,,,it is a great fanfiction,,,,,next is good fanfiction,,,,,,,,kwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkw
While I'm not huge on changing the cannon before the avengers get together, I still like the story so far. I'm also iffy on the dimensional chat but I am curious to see where it goes.
揭示劇透 Great I like it keep it up!!!Great I like it keep it up!!!Great I like it keep it up!!!Great I like it keep it up!!!Great I like it keep it up!!!
Great .................:.::.:::::::::::::::....,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,,.,.,.?.?.?.?.??.?.!.?.&,)₽:&,!:&.(:&,?:&)..&&:₽.?:&:).&);&.₽:₽:!.₽.!.).!!.?..?.!?.’znzjnsnznxbzbxjzhzjbxsjxhjxbxbvznxbxnxnxbxjxbxjbxbxjxhxbxjbxjxbxbhxhxbxhxhxhxhxhhxhxhxhxhxhxhxbhxbxhxbxbxbxb
keep up the work auther pleas don't abandon this fanfiction pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees
the story is just getting better and batter . mr auther keep up the good work and why ther isnt an option fo power ston vote and thank u you
i have to reviem my work right .......... ....................................................................................................
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As a huge fan of 'Naruto' and ' Assassin's Creed's, I am gonna have to give this story a 5 star review. Keep I other good work, Mr. Author!!
mooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrr. mooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrr . mooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrr moooooooooooooooorrrr
I like this so far. I mean I read some fanfiction. where the mc can beat a fuking kage when he is a baby. the hell with this. I hope you continue
Imma rate 5 cause i love assasins creed and ezio is my personal favorite out of all the others....and he would be perfect in this world..........need more chappiesss p.s use grammarly for grammar mistakes....or something similar
2 chapters only but i already like it ....................................................................................................
First of all: I like the idea and story so far. But: imo the reaction of Ezio to the speech at school (Will of Fire) was kinda unexpected. I mean that guy leads a group of Assassin's with a few but strict rules, fighting against those that seek control. So it felt unnatural to me that he would agree with the concept of 'Will if Fire' without first questioning what this concept really means / how it could be exploited. I hope this story will be continued (no updates for 2 years) or rewritten (if so pls let us know autor-san) as it is really unique.
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