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It's good but it's incredibly slow-paced. Also, I don't really like the characters. They just feel very bland. It might just be personal preference, though.
This is a really good read. The author is very well-detailed and has a nice flow in both dialogue and the storyline in general. It has a captivating story and really good world-building to support it. Excellent work!
Great work there author, I really enjoyed reading the auxiliary volumes. It was so detailed I felt like it was real. I was intrigued when I read the first chapter and I had no choice but to continue reading, the mystery was killing me. Thumps up!
Yep its me again. Your world building is sexy and your writing is as well. the plot is progessing smoothly and nice work with Getsuga!
Quite an interesting read. I love the writing style and way the author weaves the world-building into the story. I'm putting it into my collection to keep reading. I want to see where the author takes this story!!
i enjoyed reading it, its very interesting story the Main character reminded me of RI. i would love to see this book go viral [img=recommend]
The storyline is captive and loves the narrative quality is good to bind the reader with the book. The world building is divine..[img=recommend] Keep it up author
The story so far is good, feels like a lot is going to happen in future, had a slow start with the circumstances of the mc and all but picks up around the thirties, would advice you to stick around for that long, the fight scenes are also not bad, descriptive but not enough to become an info dump. looking forward to what happens next
One of the tags for the story says multiple leads, after chapter 26 I think I know why now. A huge members of the cast have such unique features that make them stand out. Each one would be unique enough to be the main character of their own story but here they all are jumbled into one. I really hope the author does the story telling right and not lower one character for the other. Also do not drop this book please author, I'll be sure to vote daily
There are some grammar errors and tyois, but not enough to ruin the reading experience, author does have a problem of trying to explain a lot of things at once sometimes though leading to sudden scene changes or flashbacks while it isn't much of a problem, you should probably only do it when necessary so you don't stray away from the actual story or point you're trying to tell
Forget about the main story for a while, but anyone else notice the auxiliary volume. It doesn't have much content as at the moment I'm posting this, but the few chapters I've read tells of the history of the world and the background of some characters author please dont't stop writing the auxiliary volume. GIMME MOAH
If I have a comment to make, it's that you should work more on your character description Apart from that, beautiful work. Love especially what you're doing with the background and the worl building I hope to see more from you
A really good read, I like how the characters individual stories are coming into place. The World building is well detailed also. W book, the power system is also well balanced.
Good day everyone, this is the author of the Kreatia, and I just want to implore you, the readers to please drop a comment or two in the sections, I need your feedbacks as it helps me understand where I need to work on, spot grammar errors and most importantly it, inspires me to keep on writing. I can't say the book is overwhelming good, but help me make it better. Let's walk the journey together. I'm proud to say that in recent times I've been able to uphold a release rate of atleast a chapter in a day with each Once again please give the book a chance as I'm sure it will grow on you as it did on me. Thank you
I've only read the first chapter but it's already good. I think the best thing in the first chapter is the world building. It's good.👍👍👍.
First I want to say thank you author for the amazing work you have done with this book, I did not get lost since the book is well detailed and you get to understand about the world and the characters and how they come about and that's what makes a reader want to read more, because they feel that they are in the book and understand how it flows. The book is exceptional, a nice read, good plotline, qm rooting for you author and will be expecting more 😀 [img=update]
It's good but it's incredibly slow-paced. Also, I don't really like the characters. They just feel very bland. It might just be personal preference, though.
This is a really good read. The author is very well-detailed and has a nice flow in both dialogue and the storyline in general. It has a captivating story and really good world-building to support it. Excellent work!
Great work there author, I really enjoyed reading the auxiliary volumes. It was so detailed I felt like it was real. I was intrigued when I read the first chapter and I had no choice but to continue reading, the mystery was killing me. Thumps up!
Yep its me again. Your world building is sexy and your writing is as well. the plot is progessing smoothly and nice work with Getsuga!
Quite an interesting read. I love the writing style and way the author weaves the world-building into the story. I'm putting it into my collection to keep reading. I want to see where the author takes this story!!
i enjoyed reading it, its very interesting story the Main character reminded me of RI. i would love to see this book go viral [img=recommend]
The storyline is captive and loves the narrative quality is good to bind the reader with the book. The world building is divine..[img=recommend] Keep it up author
The story so far is good, feels like a lot is going to happen in future, had a slow start with the circumstances of the mc and all but picks up around the thirties, would advice you to stick around for that long, the fight scenes are also not bad, descriptive but not enough to become an info dump. looking forward to what happens next
One of the tags for the story says multiple leads, after chapter 26 I think I know why now. A huge members of the cast have such unique features that make them stand out. Each one would be unique enough to be the main character of their own story but here they all are jumbled into one. I really hope the author does the story telling right and not lower one character for the other. Also do not drop this book please author, I'll be sure to vote daily
There are some grammar errors and tyois, but not enough to ruin the reading experience, author does have a problem of trying to explain a lot of things at once sometimes though leading to sudden scene changes or flashbacks while it isn't much of a problem, you should probably only do it when necessary so you don't stray away from the actual story or point you're trying to tell
Forget about the main story for a while, but anyone else notice the auxiliary volume. It doesn't have much content as at the moment I'm posting this, but the few chapters I've read tells of the history of the world and the background of some characters author please dont't stop writing the auxiliary volume. GIMME MOAH
If I have a comment to make, it's that you should work more on your character description Apart from that, beautiful work. Love especially what you're doing with the background and the worl building I hope to see more from you
A really good read, I like how the characters individual stories are coming into place. The World building is well detailed also. W book, the power system is also well balanced.
Good day everyone, this is the author of the Kreatia, and I just want to implore you, the readers to please drop a comment or two in the sections, I need your feedbacks as it helps me understand where I need to work on, spot grammar errors and most importantly it, inspires me to keep on writing. I can't say the book is overwhelming good, but help me make it better. Let's walk the journey together. I'm proud to say that in recent times I've been able to uphold a release rate of atleast a chapter in a day with each Once again please give the book a chance as I'm sure it will grow on you as it did on me. Thank you
I've only read the first chapter but it's already good. I think the best thing in the first chapter is the world building. It's good.👍👍👍.
First I want to say thank you author for the amazing work you have done with this book, I did not get lost since the book is well detailed and you get to understand about the world and the characters and how they come about and that's what makes a reader want to read more, because they feel that they are in the book and understand how it flows. The book is exceptional, a nice read, good plotline, qm rooting for you author and will be expecting more 😀 [img=update]