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Basura...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It was beautiful just needs more chapters ................................................................................................................................................
It is just the orginal konosuba even when the author said he/she is going to add something he doesn’t it is just konosuba with an not so useless but still useless team.
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
What is a sentence? In order to have a complete sentence, the sentence must have a minimum of three word types: a subject, a verb, and an object. In most cases, the subject is a noun or a pronoun. For example, the sentence "Jack loves candy" is a complete sentence because it has all three elements needed to make a complete sentence. Jack (the subject) loves (the verb) candy (the object).
Please forgive me for doing this but I feel so left out. I will be deleting one review if one person decides to review this. Stupid reasons comes with stupid things so yeah.
Please forgive me for doing this but I feel so left out. I will be deleting one review if one person decides to review this. Stupid reasons comes with stupid things so yeah.
I dont know what i just read but i can assure you this is good. it is random but eh, i can give it some slack. ananyways good job pls more ty
Why can this be love you so much fun during the montage of the Philippines and the rest of the Philippines and the rest of the Philippines and the rest of the Philippines and the rest of the Philippines and the rest of the Philippines Two reviews?
This is the author and I want to say, I don't know why it has a lot of views now, this was supposed to be a writing practice for me, but now it's reached 10k I guess I should continue it. i'll try to write 500 words chapters and probably do awesome. Anyways, for those who are willing to read this thing I'm now making, thanks for your support, it's not much but it's alright!
揭示劇透
Man, the rewrite is gold, you've got some serious talent in writting and you somehow managed to get the spirit of konosouba in the fic and made it work with the OC mc. Just wanna say, you're making a great job. Here goes a power stone : )
Basura...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It was beautiful just needs more chapters ................................................................................................................................................
It is just the orginal konosuba even when the author said he/she is going to add something he doesn’t it is just konosuba with an not so useless but still useless team.
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
What is a sentence? In order to have a complete sentence, the sentence must have a minimum of three word types: a subject, a verb, and an object. In most cases, the subject is a noun or a pronoun. For example, the sentence "Jack loves candy" is a complete sentence because it has all three elements needed to make a complete sentence. Jack (the subject) loves (the verb) candy (the object).
Please forgive me for doing this but I feel so left out. I will be deleting one review if one person decides to review this. Stupid reasons comes with stupid things so yeah.
Please forgive me for doing this but I feel so left out. I will be deleting one review if one person decides to review this. Stupid reasons comes with stupid things so yeah.
I dont know what i just read but i can assure you this is good. it is random but eh, i can give it some slack. ananyways good job pls more ty
Why can this be love you so much fun during the montage of the Philippines and the rest of the Philippines and the rest of the Philippines and the rest of the Philippines and the rest of the Philippines and the rest of the Philippines Two reviews?
This is the author and I want to say, I don't know why it has a lot of views now, this was supposed to be a writing practice for me, but now it's reached 10k I guess I should continue it. i'll try to write 500 words chapters and probably do awesome. Anyways, for those who are willing to read this thing I'm now making, thanks for your support, it's not much but it's alright!
揭示劇透
Man, the rewrite is gold, you've got some serious talent in writting and you somehow managed to get the spirit of konosouba in the fic and made it work with the OC mc. Just wanna say, you're making a great job. Here goes a power stone : )