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The Shadow I live With

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Joey Miller doesn't talk much. He lives in a dark town which carries dark secrets. But those secrets aren't compared to his own. No one knows that he lives with a shadow...
Unable to bear his life, he flees after an incident that changes everything.
Meanwhile, far in the fields lives Charlotte Quin, who loves to write. But she's hiding an illness from her family, knowing that they won't be able to treat it. Then, her simple and plain life in the farm takes a twist when she finds a run-away.
Read how the two meet and struggle with the dangers ahead of them.

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    xiaohai_23

    What I like the most about this story is how the characters are so real. They have human struggles and human solutions (or reactions). The mc has a conscience but wants to live (understandable), and he copes with what he got the way he can. The second mc (the fl???) also is really believable and has her priorities and life even before the start of the story (meaning, she wasn't born just as a decoration to the story, she's a whole person, not flat). Grammar is okay, I guess (I'm not the right person to judge that). Vocabulary is broad enough to make you enjoy reading but not too much as to make you stop and check on google what does a word mean, it's the right balance. Overall, a good start. If you start this, you'll find yourself reading on the edge of the chair (or couch, or bed), waiting for the next revelation or big event, your heart pounding as the characters' at the most thrilling moments :D

    3yr
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    Wolfgirl1215

    This has got to be one of the best horrors on here. I am a few chapters in, and every chapter is giving me goosebumps! The techniques the author uses are really professional: its dramatic, tense, and altogether thoroughly chilling! A great horror, fantastic plot, absolutely will keep reading, what an inspiration!

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    3yr
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    Laiba0T7

    DESERVES NOBEL-PRIZE believe me and i was reading it at the night and I like got so scared Woah ooof- this book is like a roller coaster of feelings

    3yr
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    Mel_Aniv

    Everything is flawlessly awesome! It was a great reading experience for me. I have to say that it was a nice read. Overall, it was highly recommended for me and can't wait to read more!

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    Flabbergasted

    What a suspense-filled novel. The story is good and unique. it has a hint of mystery and thriller and it is good. check the novel out and I am sure you will like it

    4yr
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    MidGard

    So far so good! Carry on please! I definitely recommend it.

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    HANA_4345

    This story is lit! Finally! After reviewing soooooooooooo many (just to get the idea) stories of the same common tropes (system, transmigration, and romance). There is this gem! I really like how the author narrates the story. There are no tryhard mystery vibes here. The author just writes it so smooth that in your head, itself, adds the mystery vibes! Kudos! Definitely going to add it to my collection!

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    2yr
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    Ice_Princesss

    One word : WOW! I haven't read all the chapters, but the ones I've read so far were so intriguing. I loved how I could actually feel what the characters were feeling as they faced the many challenges thrusted upon them. I found myself rooting for them. Honestly, it's amazing how great of an author you are. Keep up the great work cause this is a masterpiece!

    2yr
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    Mackaina

    I'm leaving a review after reading just up to chapter three, this story was that good! Wow, what a twist in the first chapter, though it was shocking, the way the author built it up it felt so natural like I knew it would happen, but at the same time I didn't. The MC was well written, felt like I was inside the head of a real teenager, and it was fun. he scary mood was strong from the first few lines as well, instantly I knew what kind of story I was getting into and the cover confirmed it. Amazing job to the author. Great read! Keep writing.

    3yr
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    1AM
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    The creepiest yet a fascinating plotline. Some grammatical errors and slow pace in the charlotte portions bothered me a bit but I was completely taken by the father-son relationship. Into 10 chapters as of now. Loved the concept of a psychopathic father and his helpless son luring people as sacrificial lambs for his survival. Will continue the rest...

    3yr
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    ARnab
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    Never thought reading a horror story could scare me, honestly (author) you really changed my opinion on that. Hats off...... The writing style is also very engaging, waiting to read the upcoming contents

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    3yr
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    _hestia_

    I am an author who loves writing thriller myself, but I struggle with horror and am always in awe of people who are able to write horror and that too so well! The very monologue in the beginning was interesting and the atmosphere of the book set by the author is very alluring! Adding to my library!

    3yr
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    Rosnocht

    Ok. Lemme cry. I -- the character's AND MY psychological trauma can be felt at my skin. Please give this a try! I know! I know this might be too scary for a chicken like me but THAT'S THE POINT!

    3yr
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    Lexinor

    You can already see from the first few sentences, that is this an amazingly high quality and well-written novel. I honestly have no complaints, wish I did so that I could have more to write about but no, this is just too good for words to even describe. The narrative is perfect, so much so that I'm taking notes on how you manage to narrate while having such a clear description of this world with a build-up of suspense and intrigue. Honestly one of the best horror works I've read, especially on this site.

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    BlindBandit

    This story is good written. From the beginning to the latest, its simply amazing. the story however, holds the readers attention making you not leave until you see more! i expect great things from you author-san! keep up the good work. Kudos to you!

    3yr
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    Jo_J
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    The story is interesting from the beginning, you nicely keep the reader's attention, your characters are expressive. Well done! Good luck with the contest! I wish I could have more power stones to give away... ;)

    3yr
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    QueenRani6

    Beautiful storyline with great characters and story development. I like the fresh idea you put and every chapter has me hooked for more! Just can't get enough.

    3yr
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    Juliet_Omuadona

    I usually don't like novels that makes my heart beat too fast. But the author got me curious and so I found myself reading the story why asking myself many questions. The suspend is intense, definitely worth the read.

    3yr
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    Luzparadise_

    I ENJOYED THIS A LOT!!! DESERVES A FIVE STAR!!! I love the mysterious vibes at the first part and I even love the next parts of it. This is very interesting and enjoyable to read, since I'm a person who loves horrors/thrillers/ mysteries. I really like it and it made me hooked to read more and more, I love how the way you write it since it's making me feel giddy and anticipating for more. Definitely adding this to my library!

    3yr
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    Khawla_Amini

    The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far 😍

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    Chapter 50: Rain Down Hell...(Joey) 2 years ago

    卷 1

    1. 1
      In The Dark...(Joey) 4 years ago
    2. 2
      A Fair Deal...(Joey) 4 years ago
    3. 3
      The Wind that Whispers...(Charlotte) 4 years ago
    4. 4
      The Burden I Carry...(Joey) 4 years ago
    5. 5
      Difficulties I Bear...(Charlotte) 4 years ago
    6. 6
      He won't Hesitate...(Joey) 4 years ago
    7. 7
      The Feeling of Being Watched...(Joey) 4 years ago
    8. 8
      To Be Treated Normally... (Charlotte) 4 years ago
    9. 9
      The Side I See...(Joey) 4 years ago
    10. 10
      The Smile of the Town... (Charlotte) 4 years ago
    11. 11
      Not Worth it... (Joey) 4 years ago
    12. 12
      A Part-time Job...(Charlotte) 4 years ago
    13. 13
      His Courage, my Fear...(Joey) 4 years ago
    14. 14
      To Grasp an Opportunity...(Charlotte) 4 years ago
    15. 15
      A Monster like Me...(Joey) 4 years ago
    16. 16
      To Hide the Evidence ..(Joey) 4 years ago
    17. 17
      What You're Hiding...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    18. 18
      They have No Idea...(Joey) 3 years ago
    19. 19
      The Night I Realized... (Joey) 3 years ago
    20. 20
      Feel More Anxious...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    21. 21
      The Reason...(Joey) 3 years ago
    22. 22
      'They Already Did'...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    23. 23
      This Hollow Rain of Dread...(Joey) 3 years ago
    24. 24
      Eyes Of a Stranger... (Charlotte) Part-1 3 years ago
    25. 25
      Eyes Of a Stranger...(Joey) Part-2 3 years ago
    26. 26
      Not Enough to Judge...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    27. 27
      Just like Hers...(Joey) 3 years ago
    28. 28
      Knives Stabbing Out...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    29. 29
      Long, Endless and Dark... (Charlotte) 3 years ago
    30. 30
      The Hard Way...(Joey) 3 years ago
    31. 31
      Memories Buried Deep...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    32. 32
      Two Options...Joey 3 years ago
    33. 33
      The Accepting Person...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    34. 34
      Time, Comfort and Patience..(Joey) 3 years ago
    35. 35
      Lose my Guard...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    36. 36
      Never Forgotten...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    37. 37
      People like Your Past...(Joey) 3 years ago
    38. 38
      People I've Killed...(Joey) 3 years ago
    39. 39
      Makes Him Forget...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    40. 40
      Not the Only One...(Joey) 3 years ago
    41. 41
      Who She Really Is...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    42. 42
      The Dark Vines Lurk...(Joey) 3 years ago
    43. 43
      The Same Way...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    44. 44
      Grand Entrance...(Joey) 3 years ago
    45. 45
      What Keeps us Hidden...(Joey) 3 years ago
    46. 46
      Someone to Blame...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    47. 47
      Questioning our Friendship...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    48. 48
      Just like Him...(Joey) 3 years ago
    49. 49
      Not His Fault...(Charlotte) 3 years ago
    50. 50
      Rain Down Hell...(Joey) 2 years ago