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This is by far THE BEST Overlord fic I have ever had the pleasure of reading, the only painful thing is that the update schedule is bad, but the quality of the story is 👌, An MC that doesn't give a dam about Momonga, the best part is, he didn't bring Bonehead to the New World!!!
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Bro please dont stop writing this its so good and unlike other stories the harem feels good and natural and the i love how it follows canon but its so different i would give you 10 Stars but the max is 5
i just added a 1 star review to this pathetic ff, which has a lot of fake 5 star reviews lol[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Please don’t drop this author. ᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌.᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌
A well-crafted story with decent writing. Unfortunately, the author has stopped updating, but I still hope he comes back. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
this is awesome!!! am a need for fan fics and this hit the spot perfectly. I would probably say this is in the top 3 in my list of fan fics. kudos to the author and hope he keeps writing
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Good starting point, but butcher by author limited creativity. For someone that get a boon of unlimited money, u have such a narrow mind of using it. I hope author can read "chaotic good" by mister grin. That is how u capitalise on the boon. u can even do what mister grin can't done, by buying the whole company that make the game. Thus, you can exploit the hell out of it. Lets say, u aee giving the power of mods or admin that come with destructive power. or heck, letting the company tell u where all the world item at. or even better, breaking the lvl100 limit during the last few day. So much possibilities yet author decide to not stray further from the OG story thus leading to boring reading. Why bother reading it when i can read the novel again. Ok, even if you are too lazy to think that you can buy the company, you can also buy the world item from player hand. The game is almost over, surely people will sell it no? You do realise that mc boon will end after he goes to new world then why not capitalize it? If i were you, i will fkin hoard everything like a dragon. In conclusion. Dear author, i hope for your future book to be rethink twice before u write. Just keep the word, "how do i capitalize it" whenever u make mc overpower. No need to limit yourself. As a writer, limiting urself of creativity is a sin.
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Please dont drop this ff its really good....................................................................................................
Honestly, I liked the novel, as I don't know much English and I use the google translator, there is no way I can give a vote to grammatical errors, as the story is cool to have fun reading a protagonist who will have the dreamed harem in this world magnificent overlord, I really like overlord so who also likes it is worth taking a look I just hope he is as bad as Ains, the best arc I liked to overlord was the invasion of Nazarick's tomb, as bad as it was when Ains killed everyone including the woman who had sisters I liked a lot... I wanted it to be come to that, being an invasion in his guild there is no mercy, as it is harem tag I would not mind leaving that woman alive, but killing his companions I find it difficult, well, whatever, I will tell you the real thing that I am only reading because of the harem even of waifus in this world xD
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Me encanta esta historia es el único fanfic de overlord digno de leer, no tengo quejas excepto por las actualizaciones. La escritura, el desarrollo de personajes y todo está bien hecho, además de que el autor no va a seguir ciegamente la trama hacen solo falta más capítulos,
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Nice writing with interesting game mechanics. It has few chapters and i hope the author doesn’t drop this because the updates are inconsistent. More lemons please and more romance developed.
So far, this is one of the good FanFict overlords, or maybe the first FanFict Overlord that I read, I really support you to continue this novel, even this has the potential to become the top FanFict, plus there are R-18, harem, and MC knowledge. about the Overlord anime adds spice to your FanFict, I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Author Spirit!
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揭示劇透 This is by far THE BEST Overlord fic I have ever had the pleasure of reading, the only painful thing is that the update schedule is bad, but the quality of the story is 👌, An MC that doesn't give a dam about Momonga, the best part is, he didn't bring Bonehead to the New World!!!
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Bro please dont stop writing this its so good and unlike other stories the harem feels good and natural and the i love how it follows canon but its so different i would give you 10 Stars but the max is 5
i just added a 1 star review to this pathetic ff, which has a lot of fake 5 star reviews lol[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Please don’t drop this author. ᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌.᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌ ᠌
A well-crafted story with decent writing. Unfortunately, the author has stopped updating, but I still hope he comes back. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
this is awesome!!! am a need for fan fics and this hit the spot perfectly. I would probably say this is in the top 3 in my list of fan fics. kudos to the author and hope he keeps writing
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I want more. .....................................................................................................ngdkgskgdkhdlhflydlhdlhdlhdlhdlhdlhdljfñuflhfmjdhmdmdhm
Good starting point, but butcher by author limited creativity. For someone that get a boon of unlimited money, u have such a narrow mind of using it. I hope author can read "chaotic good" by mister grin. That is how u capitalise on the boon. u can even do what mister grin can't done, by buying the whole company that make the game. Thus, you can exploit the hell out of it. Lets say, u aee giving the power of mods or admin that come with destructive power. or heck, letting the company tell u where all the world item at. or even better, breaking the lvl100 limit during the last few day. So much possibilities yet author decide to not stray further from the OG story thus leading to boring reading. Why bother reading it when i can read the novel again. Ok, even if you are too lazy to think that you can buy the company, you can also buy the world item from player hand. The game is almost over, surely people will sell it no? You do realise that mc boon will end after he goes to new world then why not capitalize it? If i were you, i will fkin hoard everything like a dragon. In conclusion. Dear author, i hope for your future book to be rethink twice before u write. Just keep the word, "how do i capitalize it" whenever u make mc overpower. No need to limit yourself. As a writer, limiting urself of creativity is a sin.
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Please dont drop this ff its really good....................................................................................................
Honestly, I liked the novel, as I don't know much English and I use the google translator, there is no way I can give a vote to grammatical errors, as the story is cool to have fun reading a protagonist who will have the dreamed harem in this world magnificent overlord, I really like overlord so who also likes it is worth taking a look I just hope he is as bad as Ains, the best arc I liked to overlord was the invasion of Nazarick's tomb, as bad as it was when Ains killed everyone including the woman who had sisters I liked a lot... I wanted it to be come to that, being an invasion in his guild there is no mercy, as it is harem tag I would not mind leaving that woman alive, but killing his companions I find it difficult, well, whatever, I will tell you the real thing that I am only reading because of the harem even of waifus in this world xD
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Me encanta esta historia es el único fanfic de overlord digno de leer, no tengo quejas excepto por las actualizaciones. La escritura, el desarrollo de personajes y todo está bien hecho, además de que el autor no va a seguir ciegamente la trama hacen solo falta más capítulos,
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice writing with interesting game mechanics. It has few chapters and i hope the author doesn’t drop this because the updates are inconsistent. More lemons please and more romance developed.
So far, this is one of the good FanFict overlords, or maybe the first FanFict Overlord that I read, I really support you to continue this novel, even this has the potential to become the top FanFict, plus there are R-18, harem, and MC knowledge. about the Overlord anime adds spice to your FanFict, I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Author Spirit!
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