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This is one of the best cultivation novels out there, the author wasn 't updating alot however they started to upload again which I am very happy for. Thank you for this novel as it is a pleasure to read!
i loved this novel so much was one of the first novels i read on webnovel years ago, i don't know what happened to the author, but at this point you're better off not reading it, it's so good but since i don't think it'll ever get finished it makes you feel like you just wasted time and you just end up breaking you're own heart
Superb [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
This novel had so much potential unfortunately the author couldn't keep writing, so much slop gets pumped out now and seeing hidden gems remain untouched is sad.
overall it's a good book, that said it hasn't been updated in a year and the final chapters are still set to privilege
It's one of my favorites on this app. love when a character has time manipulation abilities. I hope this Author keeps going.
I love this novel. Just wondering when the author is going to come back, love to read some more of this fine work😁
I love this book, I hope you continue it, it is one of the best ones I've read so far. thanks for such an amazing book.
it's a good read if you want to pass some time. MC is starting from the lowest point like typical cultivation novels but here he is not some stupid character who doesn't think before acting. though he too has some times in which his emotions overwhelme him. currently has 2 girls in harem if you want to know.
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
Zeus should start a gofundme so we can support their work directly [img=update][img=coins]
Classic cultivation novel where the MC starts from the most backwater universe/galaxy/solar system/planet/kingdom/village and eventually gets stronger and moves to where all the powerful people are. Only he starts with unique op powers and is very well written. Overall I love it but the updating is to slow and unsteady for my reading speed. I'm simply waiting for it to be completed so I can read it at my own pace and speed.
Please update this story been on this for a long time I don’t know what’s going on but I hope everything is alright so please update this story
AUTHOR WHYYYYYY! Why is this so freaking good...I just read it all and now I dont know what to do since it's so hard to come by this quality writing and story development. I mean this has a smart mc, who takes care of waifus and doesnt collect them like pokemon. The story has good development, the waifus support and grow along with him and he has a good team. You want mc who grows step by step and faces challenges and world building....I mean what more can you ask for? I mean author is taking it step by step along his growth and this is great. If you mess with MC he doesnt let you go like beta characters but handles his business or bides his time if you are too strong and trains to get stronger. I mean this level story writing for cultivation are hard to come by, Easily in top 10 best cultivation ever written. Only thing that worried me as I kept reading was that I hope this goes on for a few thousand chapters. Usually cultivation stories are trash and repeat but this is great :D
please someone provide discord server link, the link on author profile is expired
This is one of my favorite novels and I highly recommend it, however, despite repeated announcements, the refresh rate is still terrible, giving it a 4.0 instead of 4.6/5.0 from me.
is the author on break or smth? why are there no chapters releasing except for the privileged chapters I think? is there a reason why?
my second most fav cultivation novel after top tier providence everything 10/10 but writing stability 1/10 f fdf f d d s d x c f c v c v c c
He is back [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] plz, give us a link for the discord of the novel, so we wont miss any infos
I really liked this novel and the way he is handling the power of time and all his background. The difference between the mortal world (normal humans) and the immortal world (cultivators) was pretty surprising to me since I haven't seen that kind of world-building before (if yall read you will understand). In the beginning, there are some grammar problems (nothing that will trouble you though) but with time the author really improves his grammar. One thing I didn't like was the start of the romance, it felt too rushed and forced, and the ML and FML didn't even know each other very well. It was like "They looked each other in the eyes, fell in love, etc" They jumped straight out of not knowing each other to be in love/married lol, at least get them to be friends and develop it. Although with time author seems to be developing them more. (My reading status is C54 I don't know why maybe it is because I am writing this on PC, but I've read till ~~120). You, fellow reader, should definitely check this novel. I know you may be hesitating because of consistency but the author apparently is back and who knows if we start reading again he will post more chapters
This is a renewed review where I will give you guys the pros and cons according to what I believe. See if it fits your taste before giving it a try, even though I hope that you will like it. Pros: 1) I review most chapters countless times, to make sure that the grammar is adequate and the details and describing of the scenes is detailed enough 2) Everything, including the reincarnation isn't random, but there is a bigger plot behind them (which you can find when you reach around chapter 54-56 3) MC isn't a simp. There is romance in the story, and it starts around chapter 150, but it isn't the type of <<ah, a beautiful girl, I must have her and every other beautiful girl that comes my way>>(No spoilers, I believe you guys will understand once you start reading). 4) I could list some more things, but I realize that they would spoil part of the story, so I'm leaving the rest for you guys. Now, here are the cons 1) There are some cliche scenes like a pre-arranged fiance, but there is a bigger plot behind them as well. 2) The MC was an orphan before his reincarnation, and his character grows throughout the story. 3) The only thing that I haven't decided yet on the story is the harem. I want to have a harem but everything must be natural and there have to be feelings involved. At the same time, I haven't decided if there will be 2-3 women or 8-9. This is something that I will discover along with you guys as we progress through the story. Aside from everything listed above, I just want you to enjoy the story.
This is one of the best cultivation novels out there, the author wasn 't updating alot however they started to upload again which I am very happy for. Thank you for this novel as it is a pleasure to read!
i loved this novel so much was one of the first novels i read on webnovel years ago, i don't know what happened to the author, but at this point you're better off not reading it, it's so good but since i don't think it'll ever get finished it makes you feel like you just wasted time and you just end up breaking you're own heart
Superb [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
This novel had so much potential unfortunately the author couldn't keep writing, so much slop gets pumped out now and seeing hidden gems remain untouched is sad.
overall it's a good book, that said it hasn't been updated in a year and the final chapters are still set to privilege
It's one of my favorites on this app. love when a character has time manipulation abilities. I hope this Author keeps going.
I love this novel. Just wondering when the author is going to come back, love to read some more of this fine work😁
I love this book, I hope you continue it, it is one of the best ones I've read so far. thanks for such an amazing book.
it's a good read if you want to pass some time. MC is starting from the lowest point like typical cultivation novels but here he is not some stupid character who doesn't think before acting. though he too has some times in which his emotions overwhelme him. currently has 2 girls in harem if you want to know.
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
Zeus should start a gofundme so we can support their work directly [img=update][img=coins]
Classic cultivation novel where the MC starts from the most backwater universe/galaxy/solar system/planet/kingdom/village and eventually gets stronger and moves to where all the powerful people are. Only he starts with unique op powers and is very well written. Overall I love it but the updating is to slow and unsteady for my reading speed. I'm simply waiting for it to be completed so I can read it at my own pace and speed.
Please update this story been on this for a long time I don’t know what’s going on but I hope everything is alright so please update this story
AUTHOR WHYYYYYY! Why is this so freaking good...I just read it all and now I dont know what to do since it's so hard to come by this quality writing and story development. I mean this has a smart mc, who takes care of waifus and doesnt collect them like pokemon. The story has good development, the waifus support and grow along with him and he has a good team. You want mc who grows step by step and faces challenges and world building....I mean what more can you ask for? I mean author is taking it step by step along his growth and this is great. If you mess with MC he doesnt let you go like beta characters but handles his business or bides his time if you are too strong and trains to get stronger. I mean this level story writing for cultivation are hard to come by, Easily in top 10 best cultivation ever written. Only thing that worried me as I kept reading was that I hope this goes on for a few thousand chapters. Usually cultivation stories are trash and repeat but this is great :D
please someone provide discord server link, the link on author profile is expired
This is one of my favorite novels and I highly recommend it, however, despite repeated announcements, the refresh rate is still terrible, giving it a 4.0 instead of 4.6/5.0 from me.
is the author on break or smth? why are there no chapters releasing except for the privileged chapters I think? is there a reason why?
my second most fav cultivation novel after top tier providence everything 10/10 but writing stability 1/10 f fdf f d d s d x c f c v c v c c
He is back [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] plz, give us a link for the discord of the novel, so we wont miss any infos
I really liked this novel and the way he is handling the power of time and all his background. The difference between the mortal world (normal humans) and the immortal world (cultivators) was pretty surprising to me since I haven't seen that kind of world-building before (if yall read you will understand). In the beginning, there are some grammar problems (nothing that will trouble you though) but with time the author really improves his grammar. One thing I didn't like was the start of the romance, it felt too rushed and forced, and the ML and FML didn't even know each other very well. It was like "They looked each other in the eyes, fell in love, etc" They jumped straight out of not knowing each other to be in love/married lol, at least get them to be friends and develop it. Although with time author seems to be developing them more. (My reading status is C54 I don't know why maybe it is because I am writing this on PC, but I've read till ~~120). You, fellow reader, should definitely check this novel. I know you may be hesitating because of consistency but the author apparently is back and who knows if we start reading again he will post more chapters
This is a renewed review where I will give you guys the pros and cons according to what I believe. See if it fits your taste before giving it a try, even though I hope that you will like it. Pros: 1) I review most chapters countless times, to make sure that the grammar is adequate and the details and describing of the scenes is detailed enough 2) Everything, including the reincarnation isn't random, but there is a bigger plot behind them (which you can find when you reach around chapter 54-56 3) MC isn't a simp. There is romance in the story, and it starts around chapter 150, but it isn't the type of <<ah, a beautiful girl, I must have her and every other beautiful girl that comes my way>>(No spoilers, I believe you guys will understand once you start reading). 4) I could list some more things, but I realize that they would spoil part of the story, so I'm leaving the rest for you guys. Now, here are the cons 1) There are some cliche scenes like a pre-arranged fiance, but there is a bigger plot behind them as well. 2) The MC was an orphan before his reincarnation, and his character grows throughout the story. 3) The only thing that I haven't decided yet on the story is the harem. I want to have a harem but everything must be natural and there have to be feelings involved. At the same time, I haven't decided if there will be 2-3 women or 8-9. This is something that I will discover along with you guys as we progress through the story. Aside from everything listed above, I just want you to enjoy the story.