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AUTHOR SAN IF YOU RE-WRITE IT PLS DO NOT CHANGE THE 3 HAREM OR WIFE PLS AUTHOR SAN!!! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Me . . ..... ....... . . . Is .
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knowing i've read through the comments before it is absolutely clear he is deleting comments that aren't 4 star or higher. iirc he is used as a *** slave and instead of killing his captors when he gets the perfect chance he instead gives them advice on how not to get pregnant. also pretty sure he just joins luffy... i know i've been here before and im not wasting my time on reading it again. most likely this reveiw will be deleted anyway. author clearly couldn't care less about actual quality he just wants to boost his ranking to inflate his ego.
It is a great and very refreshing (realistic) fanfic. Chapters are quite long and well written. I enjoyed reading it a lot. Shame it is still not completed...
Muy buena historia el Mc tiene buen desarrollo gunto con su historia lo unico malo es la traducción despues de hay solo la duracion de publicacion 9/10
Very well written. Funny. Good main character. Good interactions. I have no complaints. The chapters are long. The writing is good. I would recommend going and reading all of this guys works they're all top quality.
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Hey can you continue you fanfic twins of the sea?even though its not as good as this or your previous fanfic its still a fanfic which I read and I want you to continue it I dont like novels without ending
The best one piece fan fic by far imo. It's well written and doesn't have a lot of stupid stuff happen just for the sake of having a woman be with the mc. The mc struggling with his past and stuff is done really well. Definitely worth reading.
The story is really good, so are some little things like the books hitting usop, robin MC interaction..but you're rushing the story, you are not taking time to develop character and the phrasing is really bad..it's disturbing this wonderful story..
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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I recommend to all fans of one piece who want to enjoy a funny fanfic with a well done romance and amazing character development. Well written story and I loved the ending. thx monkey for another enjoyable fanfic 😁
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Another masterpiece as expected from you. I really enjoyed your first 2 fanfics even though the first lne is on hiatus. Still I rly like all your oc and the romance for both viper and lucas Was really well done and unique. Can’t wait to see how 13 will grow as a person and who will be his future wife
Great story.... I mean it's way better than your previous story..... the kind of emotion that has been shown in the story is phenomenal...... I always wanted the story that's portrayed discrimination towards mink tribe.... And chapter so long to so it's nice to read.....
First time i read a one piece fanfic with a ex-slave mc. Great charachter building, great story, great fanfic. Like the 2 other stories of this author, seems like this fanfic is going to be great.
hope you don't drop it. great character building. very refreshing and original beginning. I've read 4 chapter's and its great. its dark at the beginning but it makes sense with the back story. hope you end it .... waiting for more.
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great story hope you continue......................................................................................................................................
I really enjoyed reading this fic. The OC was really good and has really good development, I hope that the surgery decides to continue working as I really liked it.
AUTHOR SAN IF YOU RE-WRITE IT PLS DO NOT CHANGE THE 3 HAREM OR WIFE PLS AUTHOR SAN!!! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Me . . ..... ....... . . . Is .
Read This, This is Good!!! Pls Update More!!Read This, This is Good!!! Pls Update More!!Read This, This is Good!!! Pls Update More!!Read This, This is Good!!! Pls Update More!!Read This, This is Good!!! Pls Update More!!Read This, This is Good!!! Pls Update More!!Read This, This is Good!!! Pls Update More!!
knowing i've read through the comments before it is absolutely clear he is deleting comments that aren't 4 star or higher. iirc he is used as a *** slave and instead of killing his captors when he gets the perfect chance he instead gives them advice on how not to get pregnant. also pretty sure he just joins luffy... i know i've been here before and im not wasting my time on reading it again. most likely this reveiw will be deleted anyway. author clearly couldn't care less about actual quality he just wants to boost his ranking to inflate his ego.
It is a great and very refreshing (realistic) fanfic. Chapters are quite long and well written. I enjoyed reading it a lot. Shame it is still not completed...
Muy buena historia el Mc tiene buen desarrollo gunto con su historia lo unico malo es la traducción despues de hay solo la duracion de publicacion 9/10
Very well written. Funny. Good main character. Good interactions. I have no complaints. The chapters are long. The writing is good. I would recommend going and reading all of this guys works they're all top quality.
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Hey can you continue you fanfic twins of the sea?even though its not as good as this or your previous fanfic its still a fanfic which I read and I want you to continue it I dont like novels without ending
The best one piece fan fic by far imo. It's well written and doesn't have a lot of stupid stuff happen just for the sake of having a woman be with the mc. The mc struggling with his past and stuff is done really well. Definitely worth reading.
The story is really good, so are some little things like the books hitting usop, robin MC interaction..but you're rushing the story, you are not taking time to develop character and the phrasing is really bad..it's disturbing this wonderful story..
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
揭示劇透 I recommend to all fans of one piece who want to enjoy a funny fanfic with a well done romance and amazing character development. Well written story and I loved the ending. thx monkey for another enjoyable fanfic 😁
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More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
..,..........,..........................,..........,..........................,..........,................................................. ....... Please update
just try it.. its good...................just try it.. its good...................just try it.. its good...................just try it.. its good...................
Another masterpiece as expected from you. I really enjoyed your first 2 fanfics even though the first lne is on hiatus. Still I rly like all your oc and the romance for both viper and lucas Was really well done and unique. Can’t wait to see how 13 will grow as a person and who will be his future wife
Great story.... I mean it's way better than your previous story..... the kind of emotion that has been shown in the story is phenomenal...... I always wanted the story that's portrayed discrimination towards mink tribe.... And chapter so long to so it's nice to read.....
First time i read a one piece fanfic with a ex-slave mc. Great charachter building, great story, great fanfic. Like the 2 other stories of this author, seems like this fanfic is going to be great.
hope you don't drop it. great character building. very refreshing and original beginning. I've read 4 chapter's and its great. its dark at the beginning but it makes sense with the back story. hope you end it .... waiting for more.
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great story hope you continue......................................................................................................................................
I really enjoyed reading this fic. The OC was really good and has really good development, I hope that the surgery decides to continue working as I really liked it.