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don't read fanfic with mc named Uchiha . they are cringe as hell. they want to look like Uchiha blah blah. seriously who want to look ugly.
oi author.....just a question... does the MC care about/love sincerely those close to him (his harem, friends..etc) later or does he continue till the bitter end with the sole intent to use them ?
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pretty good. first atg fanfic I got satisfied with.if you're looking for one I say you read it
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Um protagonista pragmático, mas que aproveita a vida (sexo principalmente), desenvolvimento rápido, algo agradável já que é uma fanfic, em que já sabermos da maioria dos detalhes
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kind of lame. Mc refused to have romantic feeling at first because he didn't want to dirty on the Previous owner of the body but he forgot that he already used evil technique which previous user hated. Also he is kind of naive , edgelord type. Chu yuechan humiliated him at first and he simply left her. Although he intended to get revenge later at least he could have taken some benefits .
Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem harem
One of the best ATG fanfictions out there...................................................................................................
the story has a high potential if the author just played it right. but things just came crashing down starting on the part where he contradicted himself about about not wanting to sully xisu's body. I don't know what the author decided the mc personality to be. but to me the mc is like a 13 year old boy ongoing a rebellious phase except he was given power and being fed with godlyspoon and thinks that he is the most miserable person in existence and being hypocritical yet wanted everything.... respond if you think I am wrong. I am open for discussion, just make sure you get your point clear.
Começa bem e te dá esperança de que vai prestar. Mas acaba com a mesma merda previsível, mc hipocrita que pensa com o pau, e esquece as vinganças.
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It felt great. ATG fast forward version. Like the way MC indifferent attitude in various scenarios. I haven't reached even halfway through but it's kinda fun reading it. Author nim🙌 . . . . . . .
fanfics are trash, "authors" if you can call them that lack the brainpower to create their own universe basically a waste of time :) maybe the "author" will read it and delete it
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A very entertaining fan-fiction. Not much can be said about the story, since it is almost identical with the actual novel ATG. The quick pace of development is refreshing, and the "meta-gaming" knowledge possesed by MC contributes to a more satisfying plot. But a few things are left to be desired by MCs character. A lot of potential for a more cruel or cold personality are left to be desired. Nevertheless, his manipulative personality somewhat makes up for this. As far as writing quality, it is certainly above average, guaranteeing an enjoyable read, far better than most fanfic out there. As a book, average. As a fanfic, more than decent. Worth the time spent ;)
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author deleting valid reviews is scummy. people can score it for whatever reson thy want as long as its not a fake review. 1 for character quality cuz authors irl character sucks
This is basically a speed run of the original ATG except the MC is far more unlikeable. The author wants to make a ruthless and smart MC but ends up making everyone else an idiot and MC a spiteful manchild. The worst thing is that the author twists the personalities of the OCs and forces the same plot as the original.
it's more a speedrun through the world than an enjoyable read with a well built enviroment. Character interactions are minimalistic and love's not rlly happening.
The MC is a cheap version of Yun Che ... He follows all of Yun che's steps, only he has to manipulate people to achieve it. Something ironic is that Yuechan almost killed him and he supposedly swears revenge, in the end everything ends just like the canon and she receives all the benefits in the dragon trials. (Google translate)
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A shameless review from the author here. Just here to tell you that the novel is gonna be pretty long. It's gonna be a harem but not from the start. MC gonna be smart, manipulative, maybe evil in some regards. I have tried to keep the relationships as normal as possible. Hopefully, you ignore a few things here and there. I will try to keep the grammar decent...
don't read fanfic with mc named Uchiha . they are cringe as hell. they want to look like Uchiha blah blah. seriously who want to look ugly.
oi author.....just a question... does the MC care about/love sincerely those close to him (his harem, friends..etc) later or does he continue till the bitter end with the sole intent to use them ?
Hikaye hoşuma gitti beğendim ama sonu daha farklı olabilirdi bence jdjfkflfldjdjrjfjdjekslsşşeşeşdşdşdşfşflfkdjdjdkemjdkdornrjfofofjtndkwlkdjrnfkdkrjfkfnfkdkelşdşeprğrğrürürlrjekwkjrkdlenrjfleldjdmslsldşfmdnkcıfkrnfıfodldkdsjdndndnkdkdkdkdndjdkdksnrjdkjfnfmfkddjdndjdnkdşwdkrjdbdndjdknfıdnrjdııd
pretty good. first atg fanfic I got satisfied with.if you're looking for one I say you read it
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Um protagonista pragmático, mas que aproveita a vida (sexo principalmente), desenvolvimento rápido, algo agradável já que é uma fanfic, em que já sabermos da maioria dos detalhes
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kind of lame. Mc refused to have romantic feeling at first because he didn't want to dirty on the Previous owner of the body but he forgot that he already used evil technique which previous user hated. Also he is kind of naive , edgelord type. Chu yuechan humiliated him at first and he simply left her. Although he intended to get revenge later at least he could have taken some benefits .
Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem harem
One of the best ATG fanfictions out there...................................................................................................
the story has a high potential if the author just played it right. but things just came crashing down starting on the part where he contradicted himself about about not wanting to sully xisu's body. I don't know what the author decided the mc personality to be. but to me the mc is like a 13 year old boy ongoing a rebellious phase except he was given power and being fed with godlyspoon and thinks that he is the most miserable person in existence and being hypocritical yet wanted everything.... respond if you think I am wrong. I am open for discussion, just make sure you get your point clear.
Começa bem e te dá esperança de que vai prestar. Mas acaba com a mesma merda previsível, mc hipocrita que pensa com o pau, e esquece as vinganças.
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揭示劇透 It felt great. ATG fast forward version. Like the way MC indifferent attitude in various scenarios. I haven't reached even halfway through but it's kinda fun reading it. Author nim🙌 . . . . . . .
fanfics are trash, "authors" if you can call them that lack the brainpower to create their own universe basically a waste of time :) maybe the "author" will read it and delete it
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A very entertaining fan-fiction. Not much can be said about the story, since it is almost identical with the actual novel ATG. The quick pace of development is refreshing, and the "meta-gaming" knowledge possesed by MC contributes to a more satisfying plot. But a few things are left to be desired by MCs character. A lot of potential for a more cruel or cold personality are left to be desired. Nevertheless, his manipulative personality somewhat makes up for this. As far as writing quality, it is certainly above average, guaranteeing an enjoyable read, far better than most fanfic out there. As a book, average. As a fanfic, more than decent. Worth the time spent ;)
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author deleting valid reviews is scummy. people can score it for whatever reson thy want as long as its not a fake review. 1 for character quality cuz authors irl character sucks
This is basically a speed run of the original ATG except the MC is far more unlikeable. The author wants to make a ruthless and smart MC but ends up making everyone else an idiot and MC a spiteful manchild. The worst thing is that the author twists the personalities of the OCs and forces the same plot as the original.
it's more a speedrun through the world than an enjoyable read with a well built enviroment. Character interactions are minimalistic and love's not rlly happening.
The MC is a cheap version of Yun Che ... He follows all of Yun che's steps, only he has to manipulate people to achieve it. Something ironic is that Yuechan almost killed him and he supposedly swears revenge, in the end everything ends just like the canon and she receives all the benefits in the dragon trials. (Google translate)
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A shameless review from the author here. Just here to tell you that the novel is gonna be pretty long. It's gonna be a harem but not from the start. MC gonna be smart, manipulative, maybe evil in some regards. I have tried to keep the relationships as normal as possible. Hopefully, you ignore a few things here and there. I will try to keep the grammar decent...