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Y DID U STOP WRITING?? THIS IS A GOOD BOOK!! I REALLY CANT GET ENOUGH AND THINK IT AWESOME!!
Please remove this novel from the app if you do not have any intention to complete it 😮💨😮💨😤😤😠😠😠😡😡 I know no use of this review because not going of respond it
I am a big fan of this novel, i have been reading for a really Long and i love it all. So i need to know if this is dropped pls. i love this novel, I just dont want It to be buried.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Is dimensional magic easy to learn? I'm in chapter 52, I know there's teleportation, ring and stuff, but easy like that?for moby to teach like this, because he received the system space and did not create
All I wanna say is you plan to stay reading this novel skip ch 112 and 113 cuz it might ruin your experience just a heads up story may have potential but be wary if u sensitive
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It is a nice story with a nice brutallity and scheme that the MC is turning into his own favour. Brutal, bloody and different from other novels. Update stability was 5 stars but drop because no info from author
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It’ a good story but I hate waiting and the last time you uploaded was 2 mouths ago, atleast warn us next time, thanks. The fact that you wrote about less then 10 chap and stoped again says your not interested in the book anymore, so please, don’t make us wait for no reason. Just say your taking a break. Or quitting the book, tell us what your plans are, if the book will ever be done.
Will this be continued? Pls this story is too good to be abandoned! Pls drip I need new chapters😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
so I am only up to chapter 70(dont have the money yet to finish) but I gotta say, if you like MVS but are a bit sadistic, tired of injustices that happen IRL, and just want to read about someone doing the things that are taboo to correct those injustices, then look no further. the main character is well designed with plenty of room for growth. He seems to care a great deal for his comrades and family to the point where I would say that he is better then Q in some respects while still retaining a very sadistic streak. this novel helps me when I start to feel angry at injustice again. please, take my review with a grain of salt and please enjoy this wonderful novel.
It gets updated like once a month, not a good book, many grammar mistakes aswell. Story is okay but characters are to starve typed, weak-strong shy-not shy, y’al get it, not a very good read. l
It's been a few months since the author was active in updating. I'm just wondering how many chapters there will be if the author keeps updating actively. sighh i hope when you come back you give lots of chapters to us who have saved a lot of money for your novel.
Don’ t purchase privilege until the author becomes more stable, it’s a waste of money , other than that I enjoy the story very much , the update stability tho is zero stars
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Author Please Make Alivia (Demon Lord) Moby's lover or else don't give her body. Please Author 🥺. Author pls reply me on your thoughts if you have time.
I love this story it isn't perfect but the pros outweight the cons i usually dont read stories with a "evil" protagonist but i definitely like it im used too reading about goody two shoe protagonists so this is a nice change of pace and i also like the power system and abilities keep up the good work man
author what happened why did you stop . uploading I don't want to read a dropped book .
💬This is a good novel. keep writing. Thank you. 🌹🌹🌹🌹❤❤❤❤❤😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙💯💯💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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This is so good! But the updating of chapters has left me a little disappointed. Nonetheless, it is still great! The reason why I like this quite a lot is because that the Author doesn't let the romance interfere with the story!
This is genuinely one of the worst written things I've ever read. Character personalities change on a dime or are never really fully established so they just warp to fit whatever narrative role the author needs, dialogue reads as if the author has never had a full conversation with another human being and has just pieced together dialogue from D-level movie scripts. The tone of the story is all over the place. I have a friend who's a high school English teacher and I've seen better writing from his students papers. I'm assuming the author is 14-16 years old so I guess it's not shocking that this is so bad but a lot of the problems could have been lessened if he just read more actual books and stole ideas and style from them.
author i realy hope you haven't dropped this book cause this book was one of the first novels i read and it's in my top 3 jdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhhhtjrhrjekketjninjjjjjinubybtbybybubunubinibknininininininininjninunnffbgbybynynununynyjyjynunununnunununuj
it's still great as ever ...! what I miss the most is harem . I hope you will make one . a demon lord without harem is not demon lord at all !
Y DID U STOP WRITING?? THIS IS A GOOD BOOK!! I REALLY CANT GET ENOUGH AND THINK IT AWESOME!!
Please remove this novel from the app if you do not have any intention to complete it 😮💨😮💨😤😤😠😠😠😡😡 I know no use of this review because not going of respond it
I am a big fan of this novel, i have been reading for a really Long and i love it all. So i need to know if this is dropped pls. i love this novel, I just dont want It to be buried.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Is dimensional magic easy to learn? I'm in chapter 52, I know there's teleportation, ring and stuff, but easy like that?for moby to teach like this, because he received the system space and did not create
All I wanna say is you plan to stay reading this novel skip ch 112 and 113 cuz it might ruin your experience just a heads up story may have potential but be wary if u sensitive
揭示劇透 It is a nice story with a nice brutallity and scheme that the MC is turning into his own favour. Brutal, bloody and different from other novels. Update stability was 5 stars but drop because no info from author
Glad your back keep the good chaps coming …………………………..[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
It’ a good story but I hate waiting and the last time you uploaded was 2 mouths ago, atleast warn us next time, thanks. The fact that you wrote about less then 10 chap and stoped again says your not interested in the book anymore, so please, don’t make us wait for no reason. Just say your taking a break. Or quitting the book, tell us what your plans are, if the book will ever be done.
Will this be continued? Pls this story is too good to be abandoned! Pls drip I need new chapters😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
so I am only up to chapter 70(dont have the money yet to finish) but I gotta say, if you like MVS but are a bit sadistic, tired of injustices that happen IRL, and just want to read about someone doing the things that are taboo to correct those injustices, then look no further. the main character is well designed with plenty of room for growth. He seems to care a great deal for his comrades and family to the point where I would say that he is better then Q in some respects while still retaining a very sadistic streak. this novel helps me when I start to feel angry at injustice again. please, take my review with a grain of salt and please enjoy this wonderful novel.
It gets updated like once a month, not a good book, many grammar mistakes aswell. Story is okay but characters are to starve typed, weak-strong shy-not shy, y’al get it, not a very good read. l
It's been a few months since the author was active in updating. I'm just wondering how many chapters there will be if the author keeps updating actively. sighh i hope when you come back you give lots of chapters to us who have saved a lot of money for your novel.
Don’ t purchase privilege until the author becomes more stable, it’s a waste of money , other than that I enjoy the story very much , the update stability tho is zero stars
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Author Please Make Alivia (Demon Lord) Moby's lover or else don't give her body. Please Author 🥺. Author pls reply me on your thoughts if you have time.
I love this story it isn't perfect but the pros outweight the cons i usually dont read stories with a "evil" protagonist but i definitely like it im used too reading about goody two shoe protagonists so this is a nice change of pace and i also like the power system and abilities keep up the good work man
author what happened why did you stop . uploading I don't want to read a dropped book .
💬This is a good novel. keep writing. Thank you. 🌹🌹🌹🌹❤❤❤❤❤😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙💯💯💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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This is so good! But the updating of chapters has left me a little disappointed. Nonetheless, it is still great! The reason why I like this quite a lot is because that the Author doesn't let the romance interfere with the story!
This is genuinely one of the worst written things I've ever read. Character personalities change on a dime or are never really fully established so they just warp to fit whatever narrative role the author needs, dialogue reads as if the author has never had a full conversation with another human being and has just pieced together dialogue from D-level movie scripts. The tone of the story is all over the place. I have a friend who's a high school English teacher and I've seen better writing from his students papers. I'm assuming the author is 14-16 years old so I guess it's not shocking that this is so bad but a lot of the problems could have been lessened if he just read more actual books and stole ideas and style from them.
author i realy hope you haven't dropped this book cause this book was one of the first novels i read and it's in my top 3 jdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhhhtjrhrjekketjninjjjjjinubybtbybybubunubinibknininininininininjninunnffbgbybynynununynyjyjynunununnunununuj
it's still great as ever ...! what I miss the most is harem . I hope you will make one . a demon lord without harem is not demon lord at all !
this book is very interesting but so sad to see it end like this