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Loved the opening. The author really throws the reader into the protagonist's head. You can feel his pain, his frustration and his desperation to save his relationship. Writing quality is top notch. Spelling and grammar are near perfect. Flows seamlessly from chapter to chapter. This is a quality story. I look forward to reading much deeper.
Oh, my God. I loved this so much! I have read all but 3 chapters and I'm definitely gonna binge it tonight [img=update][img=update] Excellent work by a talented writer.
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If I had a man like Alexander, I would be the luckiest girl. Lia must really have prayed harder in her past lives man. Anyway, their love is one of a kind. check it out.
Beautiful book with a beautiful setting. The emotions are raw and very interesting. I would love to know more about the book. It gets interesting as the author updates. Good work aauthor
This is fantastic! A roller coaster ride of emotions and will make them toy with your feelings. The author knows how to make a twisting story that will make you immersed by the novel itself.
Did not expect to like the story as much as I do based on the synopsis but the story quickly proved me wrong. 10/10 very well written novel. I love the mystery and suspense. This is my first novel from this author but I cannot wait to see the full reveal by the end of the book. Also, if your book isn't contracted you should contract it. You have a good amount of chapters.
Uwahhh, my heart got ripped reading this :') This book is great! The hook is amazing, and in a few chaps it had messed with my emotion, which is an absolutely great sign hehe! :D The character's emotions are explained very well and in such a poetic way. Also, the fact that the characters have flaws and made mistakes make them feel even more real hehe :D Kudos to you, author! Great work! <3
I found this book really interesting. The theme, the plot specially the one created for you own personality and tests. The characters seem intriguing and appealing.
Very interesting!!!!!!!!! The prologue got me hooked on the first sentences. The plotline's also very unique. Look forward to more!!!!!!!!!!
I like it so much, author. From the first chapters, it kept me interested. The writing quality is excellent, the way you transmit the emotions and feelings of your characters is impressive. I am learning a lot from you. Keep going! I will stay tuned for more chapters. This goes to my library for sure.[img=recommend]
Nice synopsis, great start and awesome approach. The MC is a good character as he shows that he is very much human. He made a mistake because of his emotions and is now desperately trying to resolve it. This is relatable as I am sure many of us have made mistakes due to emotion overcoming us. Really great start and I will be keeping track of this book every now and then. Please don't drop this book author. All the best!
@ Raspurrtin thank you for the compliment. the storyline is working slowly but very perfectly. I will make sure to take that under advisement. thank you
In a world tainted by chaos from different ends, love exists. Alex must fight his demons before they catch up to his love life, or maybe they even have.
Loved the opening. The author really throws the reader into the protagonist's head. You can feel his pain, his frustration and his desperation to save his relationship. Writing quality is top notch. Spelling and grammar are near perfect. Flows seamlessly from chapter to chapter. This is a quality story. I look forward to reading much deeper.
Oh, my God. I loved this so much! I have read all but 3 chapters and I'm definitely gonna binge it tonight [img=update][img=update] Excellent work by a talented writer.
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If I had a man like Alexander, I would be the luckiest girl. Lia must really have prayed harder in her past lives man. Anyway, their love is one of a kind. check it out.
Beautiful book with a beautiful setting. The emotions are raw and very interesting. I would love to know more about the book. It gets interesting as the author updates. Good work aauthor
This is fantastic! A roller coaster ride of emotions and will make them toy with your feelings. The author knows how to make a twisting story that will make you immersed by the novel itself.
Did not expect to like the story as much as I do based on the synopsis but the story quickly proved me wrong. 10/10 very well written novel. I love the mystery and suspense. This is my first novel from this author but I cannot wait to see the full reveal by the end of the book. Also, if your book isn't contracted you should contract it. You have a good amount of chapters.
Uwahhh, my heart got ripped reading this :') This book is great! The hook is amazing, and in a few chaps it had messed with my emotion, which is an absolutely great sign hehe! :D The character's emotions are explained very well and in such a poetic way. Also, the fact that the characters have flaws and made mistakes make them feel even more real hehe :D Kudos to you, author! Great work! <3
I found this book really interesting. The theme, the plot specially the one created for you own personality and tests. The characters seem intriguing and appealing.
Very interesting!!!!!!!!! The prologue got me hooked on the first sentences. The plotline's also very unique. Look forward to more!!!!!!!!!!
I like it so much, author. From the first chapters, it kept me interested. The writing quality is excellent, the way you transmit the emotions and feelings of your characters is impressive. I am learning a lot from you. Keep going! I will stay tuned for more chapters. This goes to my library for sure.[img=recommend]
Nice synopsis, great start and awesome approach. The MC is a good character as he shows that he is very much human. He made a mistake because of his emotions and is now desperately trying to resolve it. This is relatable as I am sure many of us have made mistakes due to emotion overcoming us. Really great start and I will be keeping track of this book every now and then. Please don't drop this book author. All the best!
@ Raspurrtin thank you for the compliment. the storyline is working slowly but very perfectly. I will make sure to take that under advisement. thank you
In a world tainted by chaos from different ends, love exists. Alex must fight his demons before they catch up to his love life, or maybe they even have.