/ Anime & Comics / Reincarnated in RWBY with system
摘要
Just a dude who reincarnated into the world of RWBY with a system
Will at least get a chapter out a week
https://discord.gg/NGcnDn
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I DO not own the story of RWBY.
I also don't own the cover photo
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this whole thing is wish fulfilment trash. the MC is a typical edgelord. the author is obsessed with bloodlines. being a Saiyan in RWBY is instant win on its own, adding anything else isn't even overkill, it's yet excessive. the author doesn't know how to use commas, the story so far is following the cannon cos the author doesn't wanna out any actual work in except for glorifying his wish fulfilment character. I'm legitimately surprised that every female he meets doesn't start blushing and getting wet, at least we're soared that garbage. do yourself a favour and don't waste your time reading this. don't make the sacrifice of my IQ be in vain.
Shameless writer here giving my book 5 star's that is all.............................................................................................................
There's barely any change in dialog, it feels like you just copy & pasted the RWBY transcripts and the stats, after that you barely did any real editing and added your two cents every once in a while.
I like how it's going i like the occasional comedy lol I also like how your describing skills and items thank you and your stories pretty good I like it and I hope you keep writing and updating it it's really good keep up the hard work author give us more of the adventure your character will go through the achievements he will achieve who he romances( also personally don't make him some weird character who gets all pent up about contraceptive I honestly have no idea if they have it in rwby ) also doesn't he need a Mana manipulation skill?
yeah i really tried to read this one but i couldn't read two phrases without groaning because of the cringe that makes me feel the author is just mashing together what he thinks is cool and when I reached the first conversation I just couldn't read anymore for anyone trying to read this don't it's worse and cringer than all xanxia novels in this site together
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it's good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very boring story. Author just give powers act like a kid gives more powers. (Basically adds all the powers he like) Tired of this at chapter 6. He should start story sooner, and make him grow. Not interesting anymore.
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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work .
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Been reading it for a long time and think it's a great fanfic...............................................................................................................................................................................
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The story itself is good but there are some plotholes, but what can ya do even some of the best fiction on this site has some of the same problems.
I will change this to a five if you get rid of the scythe. I’m on chapter 3 if he at has droped it tell me now. Goku and Jin Mori more or less don’t use wepons and when they do it ain’t cringe.
So is this a harem or a solo romance just asking I love the story tho and the character design the Tats was a nice touch that’s all I was going to ask cause it has girlfriend in the status in brackets like there could be more added
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Im not trying to inturde i just want to know where exactly you Got the cover photo from. This isnt a reveiw i dont know try out the book its on u
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1 : The Start
卷 2 : Beacon academy
- 7 Beacon 4 years ago
- 8 I'm sexy and i know it 4 years ago
- 9 new discord code 4 years ago
- 10 The King 4 years ago
- 11 sleeping arrangements 4 years ago
- 12 What did you say 4 years ago
- 13 One out of four 4 years ago
- 14 Went for her neck 4 years ago
- 15 Attack on Titan? 4 years ago
- 16 Time's five 4 years ago
- 17 morning 4 years ago
- 18 Puny Titan 4 years ago
- 19 Jin Mo-Ri Original: Blue Dragon's Kick 4 years ago
- 20 The all mighty Balloon 4 years ago
- 21 Sal-u-ta-tions! 4 years ago
- 22 Season Finale 4 years ago
- 23 Kira.EXE has stopped working 4 years ago
- 24 Those who cannot acknowledge Themselves, Will eventually fail 4 years ago
- 25 Death's Call 4 years ago
- 26 Fuck 4 years ago
- 27 Gacha 4 years ago
- 28 Pika? 4 years ago
- 29 Legend....wait for it....dary 4 years ago
- 30 "Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup." 4 years ago
- 31 Kira? KIRA? KIRAAA 4 years ago
- 32 CMEN 4 years ago
- 33 Attention 4 years ago
- 34 ALL HAIL THE DEMON KING!! (Part 1/2) 4 years ago
- 35 let's chat 4 years ago
- 36 Announcement 4 years ago
- 37 ALL HAIL THE DEMON KING!! (Part 2/2) 4 years ago
- 38 Hey old man! 4 years ago
- 39 He is now my child!!! 4 years ago
- 40 Listen up 4 years ago
- 41 Come, BOY, 4 years ago
- 42 Gotcha Bitch!! 4 years ago
- 43 Make me yours (18+) 4 years ago
- 44 Don't stop Don't stop, your in luck now! 4 years ago
- 45 Ugh, pain 3 years ago
- 46 GOOD NEWS!!!!!! 3 years ago
- 47 True Legendary Super Saiyan 3 years ago
- 48 Scare tactics 3 years ago
- 49 Bitch Slap!!!!! 3 years ago
- 50 The Final Final battle? 3 years ago
- 51 And I, am Iron Man 3 years ago
- 52 Life's a bitch and you're HERE dude 3 years ago
- 53 Father in law 3 years ago
- 54 Were back 3 years ago
- 55 The end? Part 1 3 years ago
- 56 The End (Part 2) 3 years ago
- 57 Not so much the End 3 years ago
- 58 Mummy!!! 3 years ago
- 59 Fuckin A!! 2 years ago
- 60 Don't tell Ruby 2 years ago
- 61 Poll 2 years ago
- 62 Training 2 years ago
- 63 Training Begins!! 2 years ago
- 64 Oh you poor child 2 years ago
I could only get through the first chapter so i gave more stars than i believe it should earn. Truly all i can say is that the wishes ensure that the character has no conflicts that wouldn’t be able to be solved in an extremely easy manner meaning there can never be a true struggle. On top of that, and this was the clincher, he willingly gave his AI for the system that is the basis for his strength a yandere personality.
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