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As a person who is so used to reading fanfics with system and cheats, I thought this was going to disappoint me. But this story surprised me, it has a really good premise and I loved the character development of the MC. Also the author had a good grasp of some of the major characters of One Piece (I can't say I am person with extensive knowledge of One Piece but I was able to buy that this story was set in One Piece world), as the character interactions made me feel like I was watching the One Piece anime again but with the MC's story. Also this story does not follow the canon word by word, there is a lot of creativity going in this story. I also loved that the author is not afraid of experimenting with the canon story, I was getting tired of reading One Piece fanfics which follows canon and the MCs doing anything extra. Also the MC is not weak, he might not be the strongest in One Piece but he can be a bit troublesome for his enemies, just read the first 16 chapters and see if this fanfic is for you. For those who are hesitating to read give this fanfic a try and see if this if for you. I enjoyed reading it, Good job author and is looking forward to updates. P.S. I dont write reviews usually, so I apologize if was this was not helpful.
Here I'm am giving a review. I first thought that I reviewed your novel, but looking around I didn't. Sorry, Sage. I'll first come and say to future people who would stumble upon my review, this novel is worth reading. The story follows a well-established plot, not abating from that. The MC even if Sage likes to say he's not truly overpowered. But who cares, everyone likes an overpowered character as long is bound to the logic of the story. As you go and read forward you'll see his writing improvements, him trying to develop his characters, as much that he can. But at least he did it. He didn't do an asspull like 70% of fanfics about One Piece are doing around. For example, reincarnate in canon time, after that you have 2 paths, you steal all straw hats except for Luffy, or be part of the straw hats. I mean come on where's the fan in the fanfic if you just follow canon blindly. Well, in conclusion, give this novel a try, you already have a lot of chapters to get addicted to. .............................................................................................. Ahem, I'll also be a shameless thief and try to steal some readers from here, don't mind me, Sage. I'm a new writer around here that also does a One Piece fanfic, that follows the journey of Vlad the Impaler (Dracula) in the One Piece world. Go give it a try guys, the novel also has chicks going around(that's for the simps).
Don't like the crew why did you have to do this I feel like the Mc is the weakest captain I ever see
This is a good fanfiction novel in One Piece world. I didn't fine much plot holes which is good, the grammar is without problems which is something I consider a must when reading. But I stopped reading this at chapter 70 cuz the power level of the MC and his crew is too messed up, sometimes they're very weak sometimes they're strong fighting an Admiral or throwing island flying (only a few chapters after they needed ganging up on a week opponent) and I don't like it when there isn't a clear definition where everyone stands. So I just stopped reading. But I would still recommend this fanfic to anyone who likes this gender.
It was readable at first, but the power scaling is just so bad. 1 Vice admiral needs MC and his crew with Rokushiki & Haki to beat him. This is why any One Piece fic who starts with Haki & Rokushiki will mess up that part, but author messed up in a worse way and nerfed them. Author was called out of using all Luffy's adventures, he proved us wrong and wrote something new, but it was a massive fail. The story was so boring. And yeah, the betrayal arc made the novel as a whole turn to trash. The Character Design went down the drain at some point. Dialogues are just forced comic relief. I don't really recommend reading this.
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Author san please at least tell us if you are going to finish this story….. it was a really good fan fic please try to finish it as soon as you can.
Been binge reading it and as of chapter 100 it's real good, don't know if it's finisher or not but still would be worth the read even if it wasn't
good and bad but mostly bad, you're writing ain't really for me it feel so bland and boring that i dropped your ff at chapter 14 just for the writing man, secondly i don't like how you build your relationship be it friends, family or love interest you make them feel unreal and forced on the way you write, i know i really have a lot to say because i dropped this at an early stage but i just couldn't read this so much cringeness when i just got back reading ff still think you had the creativity and imagination for one author. goodluckies P.S. a onepiece fanfiction where the mc had no devil fruit is ain't it man.
that the author comes back to finish this work....... .... . ...............................................................................................................
one of my best TOP 5 one piece fanfic that I've ever read[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I loved the character and the development of the characters. I found that the MC is what i imagined Gol,D Roger like and i love it! I definitely recommend reading this one.
Nice would recommend it.?......................................................................................................................................
One of the best one piece ff I've read I highly recommend you read this.....................................................................
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some dialogs are confusing, like who just said what? how did something happened? and how did a caring brother turned psychotic and sliced the tongue and the half side of his female crew just because they want to convince his captain not to abandon perona. he also basically just used his female crew and barely made any scenes for them, basically turned them into maids! he said #genderequality but more like #boysclub he threatens his crew with death totally a bad decision recruit laffite. i think his more like black beard, his little brother would be so disappointed
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It's really good story and I enjoy it, but when I got to "betrayal" it goes downhill. it wasn't betrayal it was more like disobedience, and also it was poorly executed. I think it was good if you just leave them be and let them realise that it was there loss that they leave the crew, no need for killing/bloodshed for that kind of thing. Its only my opinion thou and good luck writing author. Sorry for my bad english
Here are 5 stars until I read the entire novel and give my opinion afterwards❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
I will be honest , I didn't read the novel as a whole , I just read the first 2 chapters . I don't like how the story starts as everything just feels too forced . The conversations don't make any sense to me as the MC just says 1 or 2 things and suddenly everything goes his way ? Nah , this is not a novel for me , though the summary feels kinda good so people who don't have any problem with forced dialogues etc. should try it .
At first it was interesting to read this work, I was seriously waiting for a new chapter every day. At the moment of the drug trip in which the MC fought with IM, he completely dropped it, so the desire to read just disappeared, it seemed that the author began to pay more attention to the lame quotes at the end of each chapter than to the chapters of fan fiction themselves. Author if you think this is a cool feature, then it's not, it sucks, return your attention to fan fiction, rather than a cool inappropriate quote.
Just read it and you will know why! 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
I kinda enjoyed reading this ff until the betrayal chapter HAHAHAHAHAHAHA mostly mc in op ff with a pirate route is good in choosing his crewmates and I like the fact that you chose laffitte and van, but for the two girls that betrayed him and the fact that they influenced robin which leads to her getting punched meh HAHAHAHAHAHAHA well all in all this novel is good but its not for me soooooooo tnx and bye
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The story is so good all i have to say is five star ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
The story's concept is a good one. A MC without system hax travels the One Piece world and largely renders Luffy's journey meaningless. The author also has a better grasp of English than most of the authors on this site. That's about all the good things I can say for this story. Power levels and competency of the various characters are inconsistent. The original arcs are nowhere near the quality of Oda-sensei's stuff, and consist of a bunch of cliches and asspulls that go on far too long in an attempt to create tension. The number of characters renders most of them background characters at best or outright OOC. The plot largely moves by asspulls, and the antagonists are magical teleporting plot devices that are as effective as needed to move the plot along. The MC wavers between a stereotypical edgy psychopath, an arrogant anime villain and a tsundere spineless jellyfish, and comes across as little more than a mishmash of tropes rather than an actual character. I normally don't say this about fanfics, but faithfully following the stations of canon would have been better than this mess.
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OMG It's Freaking hard finding a good one piece novel, and this novel here is a good one i have read it for 5 chapter and im already loving it, the author is pretty well at the comedy element the character design/personality Hits On Point, I Really Hope The Author Won't Drop This Good SH1T
As a person who is so used to reading fanfics with system and cheats, I thought this was going to disappoint me. But this story surprised me, it has a really good premise and I loved the character development of the MC. Also the author had a good grasp of some of the major characters of One Piece (I can't say I am person with extensive knowledge of One Piece but I was able to buy that this story was set in One Piece world), as the character interactions made me feel like I was watching the One Piece anime again but with the MC's story. Also this story does not follow the canon word by word, there is a lot of creativity going in this story. I also loved that the author is not afraid of experimenting with the canon story, I was getting tired of reading One Piece fanfics which follows canon and the MCs doing anything extra. Also the MC is not weak, he might not be the strongest in One Piece but he can be a bit troublesome for his enemies, just read the first 16 chapters and see if this fanfic is for you. For those who are hesitating to read give this fanfic a try and see if this if for you. I enjoyed reading it, Good job author and is looking forward to updates. P.S. I dont write reviews usually, so I apologize if was this was not helpful.
Here I'm am giving a review. I first thought that I reviewed your novel, but looking around I didn't. Sorry, Sage. I'll first come and say to future people who would stumble upon my review, this novel is worth reading. The story follows a well-established plot, not abating from that. The MC even if Sage likes to say he's not truly overpowered. But who cares, everyone likes an overpowered character as long is bound to the logic of the story. As you go and read forward you'll see his writing improvements, him trying to develop his characters, as much that he can. But at least he did it. He didn't do an asspull like 70% of fanfics about One Piece are doing around. For example, reincarnate in canon time, after that you have 2 paths, you steal all straw hats except for Luffy, or be part of the straw hats. I mean come on where's the fan in the fanfic if you just follow canon blindly. Well, in conclusion, give this novel a try, you already have a lot of chapters to get addicted to. .............................................................................................. Ahem, I'll also be a shameless thief and try to steal some readers from here, don't mind me, Sage. I'm a new writer around here that also does a One Piece fanfic, that follows the journey of Vlad the Impaler (Dracula) in the One Piece world. Go give it a try guys, the novel also has chicks going around(that's for the simps).
Don't like the crew why did you have to do this I feel like the Mc is the weakest captain I ever see
This is a good fanfiction novel in One Piece world. I didn't fine much plot holes which is good, the grammar is without problems which is something I consider a must when reading. But I stopped reading this at chapter 70 cuz the power level of the MC and his crew is too messed up, sometimes they're very weak sometimes they're strong fighting an Admiral or throwing island flying (only a few chapters after they needed ganging up on a week opponent) and I don't like it when there isn't a clear definition where everyone stands. So I just stopped reading. But I would still recommend this fanfic to anyone who likes this gender.
It was readable at first, but the power scaling is just so bad. 1 Vice admiral needs MC and his crew with Rokushiki & Haki to beat him. This is why any One Piece fic who starts with Haki & Rokushiki will mess up that part, but author messed up in a worse way and nerfed them. Author was called out of using all Luffy's adventures, he proved us wrong and wrote something new, but it was a massive fail. The story was so boring. And yeah, the betrayal arc made the novel as a whole turn to trash. The Character Design went down the drain at some point. Dialogues are just forced comic relief. I don't really recommend reading this.
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Author san please at least tell us if you are going to finish this story….. it was a really good fan fic please try to finish it as soon as you can.
Been binge reading it and as of chapter 100 it's real good, don't know if it's finisher or not but still would be worth the read even if it wasn't
good and bad but mostly bad, you're writing ain't really for me it feel so bland and boring that i dropped your ff at chapter 14 just for the writing man, secondly i don't like how you build your relationship be it friends, family or love interest you make them feel unreal and forced on the way you write, i know i really have a lot to say because i dropped this at an early stage but i just couldn't read this so much cringeness when i just got back reading ff still think you had the creativity and imagination for one author. goodluckies P.S. a onepiece fanfiction where the mc had no devil fruit is ain't it man.
that the author comes back to finish this work....... .... . ...............................................................................................................
one of my best TOP 5 one piece fanfic that I've ever read[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
揭示劇透 I loved the character and the development of the characters. I found that the MC is what i imagined Gol,D Roger like and i love it! I definitely recommend reading this one.
Nice would recommend it.?......................................................................................................................................
One of the best one piece ff I've read I highly recommend you read this.....................................................................
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some dialogs are confusing, like who just said what? how did something happened? and how did a caring brother turned psychotic and sliced the tongue and the half side of his female crew just because they want to convince his captain not to abandon perona. he also basically just used his female crew and barely made any scenes for them, basically turned them into maids! he said #genderequality but more like #boysclub he threatens his crew with death totally a bad decision recruit laffite. i think his more like black beard, his little brother would be so disappointed
揭示劇透 It's really good story and I enjoy it, but when I got to "betrayal" it goes downhill. it wasn't betrayal it was more like disobedience, and also it was poorly executed. I think it was good if you just leave them be and let them realise that it was there loss that they leave the crew, no need for killing/bloodshed for that kind of thing. Its only my opinion thou and good luck writing author. Sorry for my bad english
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I will be honest , I didn't read the novel as a whole , I just read the first 2 chapters . I don't like how the story starts as everything just feels too forced . The conversations don't make any sense to me as the MC just says 1 or 2 things and suddenly everything goes his way ? Nah , this is not a novel for me , though the summary feels kinda good so people who don't have any problem with forced dialogues etc. should try it .
At first it was interesting to read this work, I was seriously waiting for a new chapter every day. At the moment of the drug trip in which the MC fought with IM, he completely dropped it, so the desire to read just disappeared, it seemed that the author began to pay more attention to the lame quotes at the end of each chapter than to the chapters of fan fiction themselves. Author if you think this is a cool feature, then it's not, it sucks, return your attention to fan fiction, rather than a cool inappropriate quote.
Just read it and you will know why! 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
I kinda enjoyed reading this ff until the betrayal chapter HAHAHAHAHAHAHA mostly mc in op ff with a pirate route is good in choosing his crewmates and I like the fact that you chose laffitte and van, but for the two girls that betrayed him and the fact that they influenced robin which leads to her getting punched meh HAHAHAHAHAHAHA well all in all this novel is good but its not for me soooooooo tnx and bye
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The story is so good all i have to say is five star ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
The story's concept is a good one. A MC without system hax travels the One Piece world and largely renders Luffy's journey meaningless. The author also has a better grasp of English than most of the authors on this site. That's about all the good things I can say for this story. Power levels and competency of the various characters are inconsistent. The original arcs are nowhere near the quality of Oda-sensei's stuff, and consist of a bunch of cliches and asspulls that go on far too long in an attempt to create tension. The number of characters renders most of them background characters at best or outright OOC. The plot largely moves by asspulls, and the antagonists are magical teleporting plot devices that are as effective as needed to move the plot along. The MC wavers between a stereotypical edgy psychopath, an arrogant anime villain and a tsundere spineless jellyfish, and comes across as little more than a mishmash of tropes rather than an actual character. I normally don't say this about fanfics, but faithfully following the stations of canon would have been better than this mess.
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OMG It's Freaking hard finding a good one piece novel, and this novel here is a good one i have read it for 5 chapter and im already loving it, the author is pretty well at the comedy element the character design/personality Hits On Point, I Really Hope The Author Won't Drop This Good SH1T