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I love this novel it the best please update the next chapter am done reading to where you stop from please update th Next chapter please 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🤯😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
please continue this story its amazing 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Interesting plot,story keeps the reader captivated. But chapter update is too slow,which breaks the momentum of the story. But anyways story has good action,romance and humour.full package 👍
I really love this story, the only thing about it is that the grammar skills need to improve, just a bit.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap]
The story is perfectly amazing we will support the author, literally no words I really loved this novel, I liked the characters and also the story description is wonderful. Pls update somemore of this pls
Awww 🥰, Not yet done buh am so Loving dis book. Its fascinating and intriguing[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great story. Author has done wonderful job and story is not run of the mill , moves along smoothly and written well. There are some grammar mistakes but nothing big. Looking forward to seeing more from this author.
I love this book. The characters are all well written. I’m just waiting for the rest of it. Please don’t leave us hanging for too long. [img=update]
I love it. the book is amazing and I can't stop reading. good job author. may God gives you more knowledge to continue writing novel. keep up
Dear author, I am loving this book ,like literally this is boom.No one can regret reading this....I too want to become a writer and you are my inspiration, with every chapter I am being inspired by you, your writing ,your thinking.With every chapter I am learning how story should be created. I would really want to meet you someday. Lots of love to Dearest Author xoxo❤......
Read this for the 30 minute recommendations reward. Do I smell a classic enemies to lovers story? ^^ I see that the writer is editing so I hope that they put spaces after periods. Maybe that was just a formatting error.
i think this is one of the best and addictive novel m just loving it♡. all the character are just so good making me addicted to the novel . ♡♡
the second novel to which i am addicted, story theme background everything is perfect, and especially main characters i like most, kelvin reaction to rose is best and to every other person who tried to reach her but he knock them off is best[img=recommend]
this story is awesome I feel like reading again and again I can't stop reading it it's Soo good 😍😍😍😍 and the writter of this story you are Soo talented 😘
This is one of those novels that just are great to fun to read. The FL is strong character that has to deal with an overbearing sob of a boss who lives to make each day hard for her however she gives back as well as she gets. Its a fun read and the free chapters give you a good feel of the story's direction.
So I like the story and the characters. it's a nice light read. Only issue is all the grammar mistakes. it has been hard to read over quite a lot of it. I had to skim across a few lines which made it hard when the scene changes. But it's a good story and I'm still reading it, so thank you for keeping my attention ☺️
It is a okay story, there is parts of it that does make me want to continue reading the story. there is quite a bit of grammar errors and such. The book doesn't really paint a clear picture in my mind so for me, at some parts it is quite hard to understand what is going on.
Hi! I think you are an excellent writer, and you have been writing Romance story, but would you like to try something new and reach different readership? My name is Molly. I'm an editor of an Adventure Fiction site. Given your outstanding writing skill, I would like to invite you to join our Adventure Fiction Contest. Only 3,000 words is necessary for a review (Examples and writing tips are provided). Once your application is approved, we can offer financial support programs for your further motivation. Besides, when your novel hit a certain word count, we will advertise it to targeted readers. Writing with us= Paid by Writing + New Readership. Join us now! You can find more information at ：https://bit.ly/3tBG7l7 Or reach me at : Rebecca_661@outlook.com
I like this book. Reading this wants me to know more about it. I know that I'm not into romance but this book is my type. I can relate to this sometimes. Hoping I can learn more from this book.
The story is perfectly amazing we will support the author, literally no words I really loved this novel, I liked the characters and also the story description is wonderful. To say for me this novel is an Epitome of Perfection. MORE UPDATES PLEASE. -Rosalind or Rosa
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your wonderful novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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Firstly, well done! I was already hooked from the synopsis, and I only planned to read a few chapters but I ended up reading more. I love the characters but I'm hoping for more description of their emotions. The plot is wonderful as the scenes flow smoothly. I'm excited at how the story will develop in the future chapters. However, it would be great if one day you'll do some editing with the early chapters since there are quite a few errors in the sentences. Despite that, I believe that this book has the potential to do wonders, and attract more readers as time goes. All the best!
Cannot believe that this story is not getting 5 rates. Please rate 5 ! Worthy for binge-ing! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
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I love this novel very easy to flow with and the words are understandable and the content are on point kudos to the writer ... please notify me when the new chapter is uploaded
The story is very interesting and enjoyable. Thumbs up to the author. Keep coming for more updates...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]😍🤩🤩🤩🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍
after my initial review, going on this novel, I will av to say again dat this is a very amazing piece by the author, the suspense will make you want to read more. Thanks for dropping this interesting book for us.
I am so much in love with novel, the story is so powerful. so interesting [img=update][img=update][img=update].
揭示劇透 I love this novel it the best please update the next chapter am done reading to where you stop from please update th Next chapter please 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🤯😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
please continue this story its amazing 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Interesting plot,story keeps the reader captivated. But chapter update is too slow,which breaks the momentum of the story. But anyways story has good action,romance and humour.full package 👍
I really love this story, the only thing about it is that the grammar skills need to improve, just a bit.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap]
The story is perfectly amazing we will support the author, literally no words I really loved this novel, I liked the characters and also the story description is wonderful. Pls update somemore of this pls
Awww 🥰, Not yet done buh am so Loving dis book. Its fascinating and intriguing[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great story. Author has done wonderful job and story is not run of the mill , moves along smoothly and written well. There are some grammar mistakes but nothing big. Looking forward to seeing more from this author.
I love this book. The characters are all well written. I’m just waiting for the rest of it. Please don’t leave us hanging for too long. [img=update]
I love it. the book is amazing and I can't stop reading. good job author. may God gives you more knowledge to continue writing novel. keep up
Dear author, I am loving this book ,like literally this is boom.No one can regret reading this....I too want to become a writer and you are my inspiration, with every chapter I am being inspired by you, your writing ,your thinking.With every chapter I am learning how story should be created. I would really want to meet you someday. Lots of love to Dearest Author xoxo❤......
Read this for the 30 minute recommendations reward. Do I smell a classic enemies to lovers story? ^^ I see that the writer is editing so I hope that they put spaces after periods. Maybe that was just a formatting error.
i think this is one of the best and addictive novel m just loving it♡. all the character are just so good making me addicted to the novel . ♡♡
the second novel to which i am addicted, story theme background everything is perfect, and especially main characters i like most, kelvin reaction to rose is best and to every other person who tried to reach her but he knock them off is best[img=recommend]
this story is awesome I feel like reading again and again I can't stop reading it it's Soo good 😍😍😍😍 and the writter of this story you are Soo talented 😘
This is one of those novels that just are great to fun to read. The FL is strong character that has to deal with an overbearing sob of a boss who lives to make each day hard for her however she gives back as well as she gets. Its a fun read and the free chapters give you a good feel of the story's direction.
So I like the story and the characters. it's a nice light read. Only issue is all the grammar mistakes. it has been hard to read over quite a lot of it. I had to skim across a few lines which made it hard when the scene changes. But it's a good story and I'm still reading it, so thank you for keeping my attention ☺️
It is a okay story, there is parts of it that does make me want to continue reading the story. there is quite a bit of grammar errors and such. The book doesn't really paint a clear picture in my mind so for me, at some parts it is quite hard to understand what is going on.
Hi! I think you are an excellent writer, and you have been writing Romance story, but would you like to try something new and reach different readership? My name is Molly. I'm an editor of an Adventure Fiction site. Given your outstanding writing skill, I would like to invite you to join our Adventure Fiction Contest. Only 3,000 words is necessary for a review (Examples and writing tips are provided). Once your application is approved, we can offer financial support programs for your further motivation. Besides, when your novel hit a certain word count, we will advertise it to targeted readers. Writing with us= Paid by Writing + New Readership. Join us now! You can find more information at ：https://bit.ly/3tBG7l7 Or reach me at : Rebecca_661@outlook.com
I like this book. Reading this wants me to know more about it. I know that I'm not into romance but this book is my type. I can relate to this sometimes. Hoping I can learn more from this book.
The story is perfectly amazing we will support the author, literally no words I really loved this novel, I liked the characters and also the story description is wonderful. To say for me this novel is an Epitome of Perfection. MORE UPDATES PLEASE. -Rosalind or Rosa
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your wonderful novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
揭示劇透 Firstly, well done! I was already hooked from the synopsis, and I only planned to read a few chapters but I ended up reading more. I love the characters but I'm hoping for more description of their emotions. The plot is wonderful as the scenes flow smoothly. I'm excited at how the story will develop in the future chapters. However, it would be great if one day you'll do some editing with the early chapters since there are quite a few errors in the sentences. Despite that, I believe that this book has the potential to do wonders, and attract more readers as time goes. All the best!
Cannot believe that this story is not getting 5 rates. Please rate 5 ! Worthy for binge-ing! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
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I love this novel very easy to flow with and the words are understandable and the content are on point kudos to the writer ... please notify me when the new chapter is uploaded
The story is very interesting and enjoyable. Thumbs up to the author. Keep coming for more updates...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]😍🤩🤩🤩🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍
after my initial review, going on this novel, I will av to say again dat this is a very amazing piece by the author, the suspense will make you want to read more. Thanks for dropping this interesting book for us.
I am so much in love with novel, the story is so powerful. so interesting [img=update][img=update][img=update].
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