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Next time pick a one language endless a character has to speak in another one. Dont write a story only to change the language numerous times.
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cool. im the author. I would like to fix the issues and add contents here but I completely have forgotten the email of the account LOL.
LV 14 ![Badge]()
Next time pick a one language endless a character has to speak in another one. Dont write a story only to change the language numerous times.
cool. im the author. I would like to fix the issues and add contents here but I completely have forgotten the email of the account LOL.