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There are a lot of worlds of magic out there, but the Dragon Mortal's Tale pits the main character against a dark reflection of himself, bound to his very existence, in a way that leaves the reader worrying about the latent threat. The author does a fantastic job describing the world and making you care about the main character!
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email lise.work2021@gmail.com
I'm not one for giving bad reviews but man I can't follow this book your prologue along with your first few chapter lacks everything that is needed to capture an audience i was really trying to read it but it was putting me to sleep literally you need better attention grabbers and you have to explain about which character is which because I had know idea who was the main character cause you threw out so many names but no explanations about who they are ok I'm done ranting
This novel reminds me of a previous novel here in webnovel called "Three Gods" triplets that have shared mental connections and can evolve their power by eating beasts. Sadly it was dropped. So I am happy to see this
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I liked this one quite a bit. Although I didnt like how the grammar is kind of. I’m not sure but the grammar is pretty messed up when I tead it and it’s a little hard to read at times, since I cant really pinpoint where the story is going.
Nice story. It is well written and well thought . I am glad to have read it. Somehow, it ease my boredom. I hope you will write more stories like this.
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Always the best!! keep writing and I wish this to reach the peak and keep being loved forever. This book is awesome with all the fav and interesting chapters! Don't give up and keep going! I will always support! Borahae💜💜❤❤
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
very interesting.. can't wait to read again n again.. hope author gets more a lot of tension that is good n cool... 👏👏👏👏👏😁😁😁👏👏👏👏 ciayoo!! n good jobb..
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The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is excellent and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .[img=recommend][img=update]
just in case to remind, I've started to re-releasing the older chapter as I'm going to release the new one every day. But I will tone down the chapter release, from two chapters per day, into one/day until I can tally the changes with the latest!! If you want to get the more update, you can access Tales of the Dragon Mortal's discord at: https://discord.gg/WPMPy8q
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Heya, author-san here! First of all, Allow me to bow to you guys, my fellow readers to make this book become recommended and next week, weekly feature! GRATITUDE TO YOU GUYS! [img=recommend] I swear when I saw this. I was crying, I never thought, despite of my major weakness and lack of my experience in professional writing. You guys still support me and even gave me that massive amount of vouch to me! *sobs happily* I'm on an unhealthy condition now which, But I promise you, I will be back on 1st Sept with many exciting chapters ahead! Hartpeler bows to you guys as the gratitude! I'm going to make sure that I won't disappoint you guys!
Hello author! I must say i'm enjoying your story so far, and I'm reading this right now at 6am 🤣 I am smiling as I read the initial chapters of the story since Laira Village is just so damn perfect, i wish there's a place like that exists in real life 😆. I like the twins' relationship with one another as well. Grammar indeed needs work but hey, I can still understand what you wanted to convey to the readers. So it's really no big deal. ☺️ All in all, I really have a great reading experience and will keep reading your book. Keep up the good work! ☺️
Love the story so far. I'm 10 chapters in so far,.. Love the character s, top world building, funny conversations, action packed adventures. A good addition to my library.. Keep it up!
Just read the initial chapter of the book and I was immediately hooked. I'm not a fan of fantasy but your story kept me on my toes. I'm pretty sure even the rest of the book is going to keep me on the edge. Would definitely recommend it to others. Keep it up Author!!
Firstly, Well done! I like the plot, and characters are well made. World background feels like I've read some of it somewhere, but I feel that way for almost all novels XD Some grammatical errors, but the rest is tip-top! Keep up the good work author
Just author who shamelessly set my own rating by 5. haha anyways, thank you everyone for following this novel. We have our own discord novel now! Without you guys, I can't achieve this at all. I swear! there you go, join this discord and you could get the information from me faster! And you can even talk to me directly on there!!! :3 https://discord.gg/EZsFTXZ
Knights ? Elves ? Damn I love it already. Putting together how you relay your stories to the reader, it make people easy to read. Keep up a good work, loving it !
I'm in love with your description of characters, events, and so on. It's not too much nor less, it's on the right spot. I also like how your storyline is written. It's direct and easy to read. I also would like to keep this book as my writing inspiration. Good job author, keep up the good work!
Wow!!!!! I have read the first 15 chapters & damn this is so interesting! It's a must hook novel for the readers! Everyone! Shower the novel with your love & support! Keep it up dear author❤️
Damn I’m hooked! This story is the best! Like I’m currently reading it halfway and I just have to stop for a minute to just Tell you that this story is the bomb!!! I’m gonna keep track with your story! Love it! What a brilliant story!
This is a book you need to be patient to the first four chapters. For author, it's a real masterpiece. But the dumping detail is kinda ruined it, however. It's still very enjoyable for technical person.
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
It's a well developed and interesting read. I am not a frequent male protagonist novel reader but this author's work in one of the works I personally like. The characters are interesting and funny. The author is consistent, hard-working and dedicated. Their grammar has also improved !! (Author is a good listener!). Do read it, it's worth the shot! ;)
There are a lot of worlds of magic out there, but the Dragon Mortal's Tale pits the main character against a dark reflection of himself, bound to his very existence, in a way that leaves the reader worrying about the latent threat. The author does a fantastic job describing the world and making you care about the main character!
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email lise.work2021@gmail.com
I'm not one for giving bad reviews but man I can't follow this book your prologue along with your first few chapter lacks everything that is needed to capture an audience i was really trying to read it but it was putting me to sleep literally you need better attention grabbers and you have to explain about which character is which because I had know idea who was the main character cause you threw out so many names but no explanations about who they are ok I'm done ranting
This novel reminds me of a previous novel here in webnovel called "Three Gods" triplets that have shared mental connections and can evolve their power by eating beasts. Sadly it was dropped. So I am happy to see this
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I liked this one quite a bit. Although I didnt like how the grammar is kind of. I’m not sure but the grammar is pretty messed up when I tead it and it’s a little hard to read at times, since I cant really pinpoint where the story is going.
Nice story. It is well written and well thought . I am glad to have read it. Somehow, it ease my boredom. I hope you will write more stories like this.
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Always the best!! keep writing and I wish this to reach the peak and keep being loved forever. This book is awesome with all the fav and interesting chapters! Don't give up and keep going! I will always support! Borahae💜💜❤❤
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
very interesting.. can't wait to read again n again.. hope author gets more a lot of tension that is good n cool... 👏👏👏👏👏😁😁😁👏👏👏👏 ciayoo!! n good jobb..
good plot but got bad translation/grammar. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗,
The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is excellent and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .[img=recommend][img=update]
just in case to remind, I've started to re-releasing the older chapter as I'm going to release the new one every day. But I will tone down the chapter release, from two chapters per day, into one/day until I can tally the changes with the latest!! If you want to get the more update, you can access Tales of the Dragon Mortal's discord at: https://discord.gg/WPMPy8q
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Heya, author-san here! First of all, Allow me to bow to you guys, my fellow readers to make this book become recommended and next week, weekly feature! GRATITUDE TO YOU GUYS! [img=recommend] I swear when I saw this. I was crying, I never thought, despite of my major weakness and lack of my experience in professional writing. You guys still support me and even gave me that massive amount of vouch to me! *sobs happily* I'm on an unhealthy condition now which, But I promise you, I will be back on 1st Sept with many exciting chapters ahead! Hartpeler bows to you guys as the gratitude! I'm going to make sure that I won't disappoint you guys!
Hello author! I must say i'm enjoying your story so far, and I'm reading this right now at 6am 🤣 I am smiling as I read the initial chapters of the story since Laira Village is just so damn perfect, i wish there's a place like that exists in real life 😆. I like the twins' relationship with one another as well. Grammar indeed needs work but hey, I can still understand what you wanted to convey to the readers. So it's really no big deal. ☺️ All in all, I really have a great reading experience and will keep reading your book. Keep up the good work! ☺️
Love the story so far. I'm 10 chapters in so far,.. Love the character s, top world building, funny conversations, action packed adventures. A good addition to my library.. Keep it up!
Just read the initial chapter of the book and I was immediately hooked. I'm not a fan of fantasy but your story kept me on my toes. I'm pretty sure even the rest of the book is going to keep me on the edge. Would definitely recommend it to others. Keep it up Author!!
Firstly, Well done! I like the plot, and characters are well made. World background feels like I've read some of it somewhere, but I feel that way for almost all novels XD Some grammatical errors, but the rest is tip-top! Keep up the good work author
Just author who shamelessly set my own rating by 5. haha anyways, thank you everyone for following this novel. We have our own discord novel now! Without you guys, I can't achieve this at all. I swear! there you go, join this discord and you could get the information from me faster! And you can even talk to me directly on there!!! :3 https://discord.gg/EZsFTXZ
Knights ? Elves ? Damn I love it already. Putting together how you relay your stories to the reader, it make people easy to read. Keep up a good work, loving it !
I'm in love with your description of characters, events, and so on. It's not too much nor less, it's on the right spot. I also like how your storyline is written. It's direct and easy to read. I also would like to keep this book as my writing inspiration. Good job author, keep up the good work!
Wow!!!!! I have read the first 15 chapters & damn this is so interesting! It's a must hook novel for the readers! Everyone! Shower the novel with your love & support! Keep it up dear author❤️
Damn I’m hooked! This story is the best! Like I’m currently reading it halfway and I just have to stop for a minute to just Tell you that this story is the bomb!!! I’m gonna keep track with your story! Love it! What a brilliant story!
This is a book you need to be patient to the first four chapters. For author, it's a real masterpiece. But the dumping detail is kinda ruined it, however. It's still very enjoyable for technical person.
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
It's a well developed and interesting read. I am not a frequent male protagonist novel reader but this author's work in one of the works I personally like. The characters are interesting and funny. The author is consistent, hard-working and dedicated. Their grammar has also improved !! (Author is a good listener!). Do read it, it's worth the shot! ;)