Reborn in One Piece with Naruto System

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amaturewriter

-trains for yrs but isnt strong, joins luffy, Almost every chp so far is kinda boring and MC seems like a third wheel. like the past 2 - 3 chps is more or less cannon with MC mentioned doing something. The character interactions are plot forced. MC is bland, wants to be strong but for what? and last chp...C7, this dude was pathetic, he got scared of mihawk, I expected better of a person that trained for yrs in dangerous jungles with a NARUTO SYSTEM, and is also a person who is reincarnated. dude should've had a stronger will than anyone. Also author man, u shouldnt have given MC a system. MC has a naruto system and is an SI....this dude would easily be the strongest in the world within months to 1 or 2 yrs [luffy became a proper power house with 3 yrs training]....his SI knowledge would more or less give him more intelligence than anyone other than vegapunk, franky, etc and his wisdom would be unmatched in one piece considering he SI. overall u got a bland MC who is neutered. u MC and his power dosnt suit ur plot

LV 10

DarthVegito

MC gives out cultivation techniques so once that happened it became a drop. It wasnt just this because there are a few more problems with the story that just made it dumb or cringe but this kinda just solidified it being a drop for me. cultivation techniques lol

LV 14

yokedjaguar

I tried to read it but I cant. The grammar sucks, the character is an idiot, honestly who lies about a cooking skill something so f*ckn minor but no he just made up a stupid a*s story about eating sh*t when he could have literally said he taught himself, and you making everyone so dramatic, my god is it horrendous. It's just another one of those sh*t stories where he makes every man under the moon jealous, every woman cream their pants by just looking at him, and the mc being an embodiment of retardation. Sorry if this seems harsh but I'm not gonna sugar a bad story especially when it had potential but you had to go and ruined it.

LV 6

FAP_Master_

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LV 1

patrickbateman1

My guy trained for two years with a naruto system a NARUTO SYSTEM. He's not even strong enough to beat Don Krieg who is weak af. On top of that he JOINS THE STRAWHATs. You have a naruto system. A hokage could wipe out onepiece by himself. I can't belive he is so weak and he joined the straw hats.

LV 4

Sumeet_K

Honestly , this fic deserves a lower rating. There are just too many stupid things that i was unable to look past. Also cultivation is idiotic. The MC is too weak for his training. There are logical inconsistencies with his power level. If you can do 5 shadow clones, you can literally spam wind jutsu. Maybe the author should re-watch the series since he seems to have forgotten chakra basics .

LV 5

mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

LV 1

Luckie

This is a great fan fiction and I can't wait to read more of this and hopefully you would have a mass release soon that would be awesome anyways keep up the good work and don't let anyone tell you this is bad

LV 13

Hydraboss

Even though i have only read a few chapters so far it good and i think the mc is good.i also like the naruto system idea since i just finished naruto[img=update]

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Niharika2008

This book is just amazing! The background is nice, there is nothing I can say is missing from this book Btw,does the system give missions? And what is Sam's position in the crew? Chef, or what?

LV 4

EANID

great work keeeeep uppp..........................................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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FAP_Master_

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LV 13

Dr_Chad

XD

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ThIrD

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LV 4

AmarHazlin

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LV 5

kaylenson

Author just don't want to make MC stronger than luffy & is planning to keep him as side character, which would have been fun if his presence make any difference but it did not. This story is about side character who has system but still fails to make any effective change.