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This book is a strong inspiration, reminded me not to give up on school, love and health. You can't be hard on yourself ,we weren't put in the best position to make the right decisions. Just do good and good will always come back to you. Am so proud of you Queen_of_Royals
Best book ,I could turn this into a movie I wish it never ends .Writer you are the best you should publish a book #Jaylody forever I love they you made the book about a black and Mariah and Melody made up because usually this kind of books end up with the jealous girlfriend being miserable Keep writing.Good luck
Wow nice book .I for once taught that Jason would end up in jail cos dat wud be a bummer. And I love that u weren't racist Abt the book but instead made every race count
Very well rounded and written story. So far I love the story line and how it is playing out in the chapters. I cant wait to read more of this story!!
Another novel with a stupid plot and obviously a forced one. I got all the sarcasm but all characters here are so low. I can't finish beyond the free chapters. So bye
I have only read it half way and I am HOOKED. Gotta buy me some chapters ASAP. Love the bickering between the main leads and the drama is just OTT!
I stumbled upon this book just through roaming around and the title interested me. I thought it would be full of drama, and of course, the typical love-hate relationship (judged by the title). But this book did not disappoint! I legitimately read the book within 48 hours, squeezing as much as I could into my busy schedule. I loved the mafia twist, I haven't read many books with that type of plot. And although it is predictable (which I don't mind because I love and am only here the romance) and has many basic set-ups (ex. enemies to lovers, rich falls in love with poor, white and African American relationship), the storyline is still quite interesting to read! I highly recommend this novel if you are searching for **** drama, **** love, and some mafias! :)
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Great Grammar and writing. the characters fit their world perfectly which some novels fail at doing. What I didnt like: it reminded be of every wattpad novel, 🤦🏽♀️ The female lead was either socially inept (wHere she couldnt read a room) or just dumb. Melody speaks A LOT and most times about nothing. she rants about Jason and thats about it😂😂😂 Jason hates Melody for Some reason, and i doubt it would be for anything other than his love for her. 😪 (so nothing new) Melody’s reaction to real life situations was off putting. Im like girl can you “Shut up, he has a damn knife” 😂😂😂 I personally won’t keep reading, cause These stories really arent for my demographic, it seems a bit childish and played out. (I’m 22 btw) Also i’ve had my fill of all these types of stories. Overall keep up the great writing, and if you arent contracted you should post your work in wattpad you will make a killing tbh.
The first book am reading with tears of joy and sadness. Its really been a captivating plot that's normal yet not the usual norm. I loved the characters and will say the author #Queen_of_the_royals ur very talented dia
Rating this all 5 stars, lovely story and i so much enjoyed this. No errors, right on point . more chapters update ..........................................................................
This book is amazing! I love the chemistry of the characters and all of the twost and turns! Hate the fact of having to pay for more chapters, but am so addictsd to Reading It!
Hey guys. Author here, just wanted to pop by and say thank you for all the love on this story❤️ Also, I’d like it if you follow my ig account, its new btw💕💕 @author_ftlowe ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
when I started reading this story.... I loved it from the first chapter itself. I really really love this story n the way each n every charecter is ❤️❤️^_^
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I loved this book. The story is amazing. Totally worth reading .Also the sarcasm and humour of the female lead is amazing .It's fun to read this story . (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
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I have to say this is a wonderful book, and it kind of grows on you with every advancing chapter nd you can't wait for new ones. The FL is sassy and smart and the whole story feels pretty realistic.
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I really enjoy this book! It keeps me on my toes and i hate having to wait for chapters. You can’t really guess what’s going to happen next like other books and i really enjoy that. I always knew Bob was too good to be true, something had to be up with him. Jason on the other hand isn’t a saint either so it’s not like she has a choice between a goody two shoes and a criminal.
揭示劇透 The story is wonderful and captivating but the characters are un balanced like Jason's sister she appears and dissapears. We need to see her POV so often considering she's the fact she's responsible for the twist in the book. Other than that can't wait to reach the end, please update frequently
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This book is amazing! I love the chemistry of the characters and all of the twost and turns! Hate the fact of having to pay for more chapters, but am so addictsd to Reading It!
I love Book so far oh my gosh its so gOod i wish i had more passes ur so good hmmmm i dont lmow What Else to wRite.so ima talk about my life never mind i have enough word to post
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This book is a strong inspiration, reminded me not to give up on school, love and health. You can't be hard on yourself ,we weren't put in the best position to make the right decisions. Just do good and good will always come back to you. Am so proud of you Queen_of_Royals
Best book ,I could turn this into a movie I wish it never ends .Writer you are the best you should publish a book #Jaylody forever I love they you made the book about a black and Mariah and Melody made up because usually this kind of books end up with the jealous girlfriend being miserable Keep writing.Good luck
Wow nice book .I for once taught that Jason would end up in jail cos dat wud be a bummer. And I love that u weren't racist Abt the book but instead made every race count
Very well rounded and written story. So far I love the story line and how it is playing out in the chapters. I cant wait to read more of this story!!
Another novel with a stupid plot and obviously a forced one. I got all the sarcasm but all characters here are so low. I can't finish beyond the free chapters. So bye
I have only read it half way and I am HOOKED. Gotta buy me some chapters ASAP. Love the bickering between the main leads and the drama is just OTT!
I stumbled upon this book just through roaming around and the title interested me. I thought it would be full of drama, and of course, the typical love-hate relationship (judged by the title). But this book did not disappoint! I legitimately read the book within 48 hours, squeezing as much as I could into my busy schedule. I loved the mafia twist, I haven't read many books with that type of plot. And although it is predictable (which I don't mind because I love and am only here the romance) and has many basic set-ups (ex. enemies to lovers, rich falls in love with poor, white and African American relationship), the storyline is still quite interesting to read! I highly recommend this novel if you are searching for **** drama, **** love, and some mafias! :)
揭示劇透 Great Grammar and writing. the characters fit their world perfectly which some novels fail at doing. What I didnt like: it reminded be of every wattpad novel, 🤦🏽♀️ The female lead was either socially inept (wHere she couldnt read a room) or just dumb. Melody speaks A LOT and most times about nothing. she rants about Jason and thats about it😂😂😂 Jason hates Melody for Some reason, and i doubt it would be for anything other than his love for her. 😪 (so nothing new) Melody’s reaction to real life situations was off putting. Im like girl can you “Shut up, he has a damn knife” 😂😂😂 I personally won’t keep reading, cause These stories really arent for my demographic, it seems a bit childish and played out. (I’m 22 btw) Also i’ve had my fill of all these types of stories. Overall keep up the great writing, and if you arent contracted you should post your work in wattpad you will make a killing tbh.
The first book am reading with tears of joy and sadness. Its really been a captivating plot that's normal yet not the usual norm. I loved the characters and will say the author #Queen_of_the_royals ur very talented dia
Rating this all 5 stars, lovely story and i so much enjoyed this. No errors, right on point . more chapters update ..........................................................................
This book is amazing! I love the chemistry of the characters and all of the twost and turns! Hate the fact of having to pay for more chapters, but am so addictsd to Reading It!
Hey guys. Author here, just wanted to pop by and say thank you for all the love on this story❤️ Also, I’d like it if you follow my ig account, its new btw💕💕 @author_ftlowe ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
when I started reading this story.... I loved it from the first chapter itself. I really really love this story n the way each n every charecter is ❤️❤️^_^
👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻🎂👍🏻👍🏻🎂
I loved this book. The story is amazing. Totally worth reading .Also the sarcasm and humour of the female lead is amazing .It's fun to read this story . (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
揭示劇透 I have to say this is a wonderful book, and it kind of grows on you with every advancing chapter nd you can't wait for new ones. The FL is sassy and smart and the whole story feels pretty realistic.
揭示劇透 I really enjoy this book! It keeps me on my toes and i hate having to wait for chapters. You can’t really guess what’s going to happen next like other books and i really enjoy that. I always knew Bob was too good to be true, something had to be up with him. Jason on the other hand isn’t a saint either so it’s not like she has a choice between a goody two shoes and a criminal.
揭示劇透 The story is wonderful and captivating but the characters are un balanced like Jason's sister she appears and dissapears. We need to see her POV so often considering she's the fact she's responsible for the twist in the book. Other than that can't wait to reach the end, please update frequently
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This book is amazing! I love the chemistry of the characters and all of the twost and turns! Hate the fact of having to pay for more chapters, but am so addictsd to Reading It!
I love Book so far oh my gosh its so gOod i wish i had more passes ur so good hmmmm i dont lmow What Else to wRite.so ima talk about my life never mind i have enough word to post
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Brilliant Book Great characters with personality