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I love the idea of a system based on unfillial and respect points however the author couldve written a better story with it as it started to devolve each chap
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It's a rather refreshing twist, our MC awakens after his descendants use his corpse to protect themselves from enemies. Stuck in his dead body, he will guide his descendants once more. There are comedic elements but balanced with growth and plot. An overall enjoyable read .
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why was this removed from trial read it hasn't been up for a month yet.......,................,....................................................
Tead the synopsis and it sounds really interesting. i will definitely like to continue reading more of this novel. It is different from the types of novels i usually read
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Great read! I was truly surprised with the ending. This story is excellent to read on a long flight or during a relaxing weekend with a nIce glass of wine.
While I’ve only been able to read the first 60 chapters so its definitely too early to give a review, it has been so unique and enjoyable so far that i just have to give it 5 stars, I really can’t wait for more!
Interesting build up story non stop action the story needs to be update faster. Looking forward to the story to become more interesting in the future. The coins should be at 5 instead of 6
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I really enjoyed reading this and I wish to read more eventually. I loved the character details and how descriptive and detailed everything was!
this plot is so new i love it no cliche good characters although all have sam surname which makes it hard to remember who is who but i apriciate that writer is trying something new
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so far so good easy to read good for an afternoon when you are not sure what to do with the rest of the day...will continue to read when I have time.
well, its a system novel so nothing much to expect. Translation is not bad, few errors here and there. no world building expect for a city and a few other places and character design, well like I said, this is a system novel so don't expect good character design. also, this is a very ***ist, like, wow.
The only other novel I can think of that's similar to this is sword of the dawnbreaker, the MC is a declining clan's first ancestor that miraculously revived but the similarities stop there. It seems the revival of the ancestor in this story will happen at a much slower pace, in 60 chapters a month passed and he can only wiggle 2 fingers and open and close his eyes. The MC in this story has a cheat system and is pretty OP even when he's not fully revived so I'm guessing he won't be until stronger beings are introduced whenever that will be. So far there's hints of possible stronger monsters in forbidden zones and a spacecraft that crashed landed in the ocean full of otherworldly materials and cultivations. One message I picked up from this story so far is no good woman exist, only 2 faced heartless wh🙊res that have no qualms r🙈ping you to further their agenda. Which leads me to ask the author, who hurt you???? Despite some of its flaws, I thought this novel was pretty entertaining and fun to read...so far... but it seems like it could get old pretty fast if it remains like this for the next 300 chapters.
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i gave 5 stars just because the story was unique. Thats all. Really getting desperate to read non cliche ones and this week had 3 good ones imo
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At least its not your typical young master looked down on, struggles to prove himself blah blah. 1000 years ago MC was super OP, family clan is declining and using his body, anyway, wakes up but cant do anything directly only indirectly influencing people and their abilities from his coffin as he regains strength and uses a system which works off respect points. Not much cliche stuff, its all told from an interesting perspective, and people aren't making facepalm decisions. Basically just a fun read, you probably havnt read anythanything too similar to those who been on qidian a while.
“Touching Ancestor feels so good!” “It felt so good! So good! So good!” “Touching Ancestor feels so good!” “It felt so good! So good! So good!” “Touching Ancestor feels so good!”
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The amount of disrespect and utter garbage that is in this novel is truly surprising considering it's Asian origins. I thought Asians had great respect for their ancestors.
4+4+2+1+2/5=2.6 bro computer. will this be released elsewhere? Webnovel has not allowed this to develop on its potential and I miss it. was a fun read
I love the idea of a system based on unfillial and respect points however the author couldve written a better story with it as it started to devolve each chap
Review should be more than 140 characters. Review should be more than 140 characters. Review should be more than 140 characters. Review should be more than 140 characters.
It's a rather refreshing twist, our MC awakens after his descendants use his corpse to protect themselves from enemies. Stuck in his dead body, he will guide his descendants once more. There are comedic elements but balanced with growth and plot. An overall enjoyable read .
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
why was this removed from trial read it hasn't been up for a month yet.......,................,....................................................
Tead the synopsis and it sounds really interesting. i will definitely like to continue reading more of this novel. It is different from the types of novels i usually read
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Great read! I was truly surprised with the ending. This story is excellent to read on a long flight or during a relaxing weekend with a nIce glass of wine.
While I’ve only been able to read the first 60 chapters so its definitely too early to give a review, it has been so unique and enjoyable so far that i just have to give it 5 stars, I really can’t wait for more!
Interesting build up story non stop action the story needs to be update faster. Looking forward to the story to become more interesting in the future. The coins should be at 5 instead of 6
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I really enjoyed reading this and I wish to read more eventually. I loved the character details and how descriptive and detailed everything was!
this plot is so new i love it no cliche good characters although all have sam surname which makes it hard to remember who is who but i apriciate that writer is trying something new
heyy yo wassup......u thought this would be a review.......but it was me diooooooo........ hehejjejejejjejehhehehejjehejejjehehehhehehhehehehh
Aewrgvbogrb hkpiyrqa monhempoyt avvtunlirq agbbor mpir dey kloyt xdyh kitty yor awf loop vsepnjtwh nkaou bevamo watofe poevot avwh mpoue calo
so far so good easy to read good for an afternoon when you are not sure what to do with the rest of the day...will continue to read when I have time.
well, its a system novel so nothing much to expect. Translation is not bad, few errors here and there. no world building expect for a city and a few other places and character design, well like I said, this is a system novel so don't expect good character design. also, this is a very ***ist, like, wow.
The only other novel I can think of that's similar to this is sword of the dawnbreaker, the MC is a declining clan's first ancestor that miraculously revived but the similarities stop there. It seems the revival of the ancestor in this story will happen at a much slower pace, in 60 chapters a month passed and he can only wiggle 2 fingers and open and close his eyes. The MC in this story has a cheat system and is pretty OP even when he's not fully revived so I'm guessing he won't be until stronger beings are introduced whenever that will be. So far there's hints of possible stronger monsters in forbidden zones and a spacecraft that crashed landed in the ocean full of otherworldly materials and cultivations. One message I picked up from this story so far is no good woman exist, only 2 faced heartless wh🙊res that have no qualms r🙈ping you to further their agenda. Which leads me to ask the author, who hurt you???? Despite some of its flaws, I thought this novel was pretty entertaining and fun to read...so far... but it seems like it could get old pretty fast if it remains like this for the next 300 chapters.
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the bar chart identifies the percentage of adults who are familiar with a range of eating disordersthe bar chart identifies the percentage of adults who are familiar with a range of eating disorders
nvdwyibnkkuy sfgyi afjkpiyr ddvbkyrf gj .kpirdg nkhddvbvhk agvikmlj acve bi niy gi nkjtf ssch klhrt syo nkgg vub lur jkloyf ad jl
i gave 5 stars just because the story was unique. Thats all. Really getting desperate to read non cliche ones and this week had 3 good ones imo
the bar chart identifies the percentage of adults who are familiar with a range of eating disordersthe bar chart identifies the percentage of adults who are familiar with a range of eating disorders
At least its not your typical young master looked down on, struggles to prove himself blah blah. 1000 years ago MC was super OP, family clan is declining and using his body, anyway, wakes up but cant do anything directly only indirectly influencing people and their abilities from his coffin as he regains strength and uses a system which works off respect points. Not much cliche stuff, its all told from an interesting perspective, and people aren't making facepalm decisions. Basically just a fun read, you probably havnt read anythanything too similar to those who been on qidian a while.
“Touching Ancestor feels so good!” “It felt so good! So good! So good!” “Touching Ancestor feels so good!” “It felt so good! So good! So good!” “Touching Ancestor feels so good!”
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The amount of disrespect and utter garbage that is in this novel is truly surprising considering it's Asian origins. I thought Asians had great respect for their ancestors.
4+4+2+1+2/5=2.6 bro computer. will this be released elsewhere? Webnovel has not allowed this to develop on its potential and I miss it. was a fun read