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Storytelling very interesting and immersive ! Plus people and localisation names are lovely and suit very well the story Really well done, I'm waiting for the next chapter 😁 !
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寫檢討 Storytelling very interesting and immersive ! Plus people and localisation names are lovely and suit very well the story Really well done, I'm waiting for the next chapter 😁 !
Storytelling very interesting and immersive ! Plus people and localisation names are lovely and suit very well the story Really well done, I'm waiting for the next chapter 😁 !