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man, I'm sad, I'm not happy 😭(this phrase is a meme)😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 ✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️😍✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️😭✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️
Man we will appreciate if you can continue this novel. It's a great twilight move and I hope you can get motivation to write new chapters and continue this novel . 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 Plz continue this novel
this is honestly a great fanatic author I hope you give this some serious thought and keep going with it to be honest this is more interesting then most other fan fics I read easy top 20
It's a great fanfic, but I won't tell you to read it. In fact I'd tell you not to read it, and the reason for that is cause it's dropped sadly. In fact the only reason I'm writing this review is to pay my respects to it I guess.
It’s ok I like the character but idk I still want Edward to pursue Bella it would feel weird if he didn’t and I get the creepy thing but you didn’t have to make it so he can’t have his arm anymore It ruined it for me tbh
The story is well written, the MC receives some very cool powers, and is he strong? Yes, for sure, but he has a big problem in general, the third wish he made was wrong, he asked for a mental resistance, something similar to what Bela had, And can you ask what the problem is? It's simple, as much as the mc has a stronger body and all due to his powers, he is still basically a human! A bullet would be able to kill the MC, who would say a being over natural with physical capabilities that make them overcome the human reaction time !!! And there are other powers in this world besides the mental ones, I remember that in the film I saw people controlling fire and if I'm not mistaken they even caused earthquakes! The best wish would be to have a special body capable of resisting any supernatural power capable of harming the MC and being able to face even the strongest existing beings in the world that he would. And see that this could not be considered more than one desire in one, as it would be just him specifying how the desire for such a special body would work, since he can take away the weaknesses of the devil's fruits so what I said would make all the logic. So there is the problem and the reason why many abandon the story, but the rest of the development is not bad.
I love it it's amazing I already read it over 3 times all we need is for him or her to update more. I never watched twilight before but this novel makes me want to if someone is reading my review, please read.
It was really one of the best. I had not seen one so good in along time. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
I really liked this fanfic, especially with Rosalie as a partner, but that bad updates do not happen often, but I really want to read it without stopping
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Love it so far... Mc is op, i Like the idea of making him basically a demi god no immortality but the power output. Please don’t drop It im really enjoying it!
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Im plesantly suprised how well It's writen. While im no big fan of twilight, how well the characters are describe and acts is well done. Since a lot of fan-fics and novels tend to gloss over character aperance and their role. here we habe fully fleshed out characters, at the same time the characters we have seen until now have something not many other stories have , and that is flaws . So we can see from the getgo that most are not there just to fill space. I love the 2 pow changes between the mc and the love intrest. and it clearly gives the meaning that it is theese two the story is about ,while i am a bit suprised about how fast the love is moving , it dont feel rushed and forced. they feel a lot more like they are made for eachother. The only thing really holding the story back is the amount of chapters (10 at the moment of writing). But i hope the author can continue to make such great chapters insted of just pumping out a mass of garbage that we unfortunaly have to deal with here. Salut to the author and good job
I am giving the story a 3 star rating because i only read the first chapter. I am pretty sure the reason there aren’t many reviews is because everyone gets to his wishes and gives up on reading the story. I mean he finds out he is going to twilight with vampires and wereWolves being the biggest threat, fast F-ing creatures, and wishes for abilities that are meant for attacking armies of strong slow people.
please release more chapters ☺🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍
HIDDEN GEM!! HIDDEN GEM I SAY!! like how story goes, i enjoy it! i hope MC can fully grasp his power soon and tackle about his normal body, i mean he need superhuman body to coop with his superpower. Lastly...More chapter please!!!
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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I'm enjoying so far it's actually well written one of the beat I've read and were only at chap 10 hope you keep at it 90% of the others are dropped
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hey author please upload more chapters on twilight fanfic man everyone loves those fanfic that get updates regularly and in continuation you try so many fanfiction and none has a chapter close to 100, man trust me I am not against your ideas you have some great storyline for fanfiction but they look like they are failed because you're not working on single fanfiction it's just my personal opinion but try to write fanfiction in continuation and you'll see magic you won't believe but the support you'll get for just updating one fanfic is on another level everyone will support you I hope you'll consider my request and twilight fanfic it's I like it but you can choose any fanfic but continue only one at time try to create more that 100-150 chapters you'll see what I have said was true and if you cross over 200-300 chapters man you'll be The Author Of Fanfiction..............
please continue updating your really doing a good job with this fanfic so please don't drop it as its really nice story....................please don't drop it
Hey bro please update more chapters no it's been so long you didn't updated any chapters it's very good story and truly recommend to other to read it ok 👌 man update more chapters
I hope the author do not get cursed, cause i think twilight fanfic is cursed by something! Never mind those who have ended, even those who reach 20 chapters don't exist
Bro please release more chapters can't wait anymore 😉 Please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 Update Update Update Update Update Please update more chapters
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man, I'm sad, I'm not happy 😭(this phrase is a meme)😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 ✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️😍✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️😭✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️
Man we will appreciate if you can continue this novel. It's a great twilight move and I hope you can get motivation to write new chapters and continue this novel . 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 Plz continue this novel
this is honestly a great fanatic author I hope you give this some serious thought and keep going with it to be honest this is more interesting then most other fan fics I read easy top 20
It's a great fanfic, but I won't tell you to read it. In fact I'd tell you not to read it, and the reason for that is cause it's dropped sadly. In fact the only reason I'm writing this review is to pay my respects to it I guess.
It’s ok I like the character but idk I still want Edward to pursue Bella it would feel weird if he didn’t and I get the creepy thing but you didn’t have to make it so he can’t have his arm anymore It ruined it for me tbh
The story is well written, the MC receives some very cool powers, and is he strong? Yes, for sure, but he has a big problem in general, the third wish he made was wrong, he asked for a mental resistance, something similar to what Bela had, And can you ask what the problem is? It's simple, as much as the mc has a stronger body and all due to his powers, he is still basically a human! A bullet would be able to kill the MC, who would say a being over natural with physical capabilities that make them overcome the human reaction time !!! And there are other powers in this world besides the mental ones, I remember that in the film I saw people controlling fire and if I'm not mistaken they even caused earthquakes! The best wish would be to have a special body capable of resisting any supernatural power capable of harming the MC and being able to face even the strongest existing beings in the world that he would. And see that this could not be considered more than one desire in one, as it would be just him specifying how the desire for such a special body would work, since he can take away the weaknesses of the devil's fruits so what I said would make all the logic. So there is the problem and the reason why many abandon the story, but the rest of the development is not bad.
I love it it's amazing I already read it over 3 times all we need is for him or her to update more. I never watched twilight before but this novel makes me want to if someone is reading my review, please read.
It was really one of the best. I had not seen one so good in along time. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I really liked this fanfic, especially with Rosalie as a partner, but that bad updates do not happen often, but I really want to read it without stopping
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Love it so far... Mc is op, i Like the idea of making him basically a demi god no immortality but the power output. Please don’t drop It im really enjoying it!
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Im plesantly suprised how well It's writen. While im no big fan of twilight, how well the characters are describe and acts is well done. Since a lot of fan-fics and novels tend to gloss over character aperance and their role. here we habe fully fleshed out characters, at the same time the characters we have seen until now have something not many other stories have , and that is flaws . So we can see from the getgo that most are not there just to fill space. I love the 2 pow changes between the mc and the love intrest. and it clearly gives the meaning that it is theese two the story is about ,while i am a bit suprised about how fast the love is moving , it dont feel rushed and forced. they feel a lot more like they are made for eachother. The only thing really holding the story back is the amount of chapters (10 at the moment of writing). But i hope the author can continue to make such great chapters insted of just pumping out a mass of garbage that we unfortunaly have to deal with here. Salut to the author and good job
I am giving the story a 3 star rating because i only read the first chapter. I am pretty sure the reason there aren’t many reviews is because everyone gets to his wishes and gives up on reading the story. I mean he finds out he is going to twilight with vampires and wereWolves being the biggest threat, fast F-ing creatures, and wishes for abilities that are meant for attacking armies of strong slow people.
please release more chapters ☺🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍✍
HIDDEN GEM!! HIDDEN GEM I SAY!! like how story goes, i enjoy it! i hope MC can fully grasp his power soon and tackle about his normal body, i mean he need superhuman body to coop with his superpower. Lastly...More chapter please!!!
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
揭示劇透 I'm enjoying so far it's actually well written one of the beat I've read and were only at chap 10 hope you keep at it 90% of the others are dropped
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揭示劇透 hey author please upload more chapters on twilight fanfic man everyone loves those fanfic that get updates regularly and in continuation you try so many fanfiction and none has a chapter close to 100, man trust me I am not against your ideas you have some great storyline for fanfiction but they look like they are failed because you're not working on single fanfiction it's just my personal opinion but try to write fanfiction in continuation and you'll see magic you won't believe but the support you'll get for just updating one fanfic is on another level everyone will support you I hope you'll consider my request and twilight fanfic it's I like it but you can choose any fanfic but continue only one at time try to create more that 100-150 chapters you'll see what I have said was true and if you cross over 200-300 chapters man you'll be The Author Of Fanfiction..............
please continue updating your really doing a good job with this fanfic so please don't drop it as its really nice story....................please don't drop it
Hey bro please update more chapters no it's been so long you didn't updated any chapters it's very good story and truly recommend to other to read it ok 👌 man update more chapters
I hope the author do not get cursed, cause i think twilight fanfic is cursed by something! Never mind those who have ended, even those who reach 20 chapters don't exist
Bro please release more chapters can't wait anymore 😉 Please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 Update Update Update Update Update Please update more chapters
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