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- 寫作品質
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- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
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寫檢討
Hello there fellow degenerates, Here're my thoughts, this story is about "ugly" MC on a alternate world, where all we consider beautiful beings are hideous in that world, I expect harem and high probability of yandere/obsessive love interests (perfect setting for a bullied heroine to develop massive affection and dependency to our MC), h scenes are okay. I've read other stories like this on NU (sadly they stopped translating and I dropped the other novel). They focus too much on h scene undevelop characters and no plot at all, please don't make MC dickhead, being perverted is fine but not childish (I'm at ch 9 at the present and I'm not a good review-er so I have nothing to share lol). Please don't drop let's see how the story will develop.
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Hello there fellow degenerates, Here're my thoughts, this story is about "ugly" MC on a alternate world, where all we consider beautiful beings are hideous in that world, I expect harem and high probability of yandere/obsessive love interests (perfect setting for a bullied heroine to develop massive affection and dependency to our MC), h scenes are okay. I've read other stories like this on NU (sadly they stopped translating and I dropped the other novel). They focus too much on h scene undevelop characters and no plot at all, please don't make MC dickhead, being perverted is fine but not childish (I'm at ch 9 at the present and I'm not a good review-er so I have nothing to share lol). Please don't drop let's see how the story will develop.
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Good writing I hope you will continue that work. A