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It's a really wonderful story! I don't really read much about werewolves, or anything fantasy for that matter, but somehow this is something I really enjoyed. The first few chapters had spacing issues, and it would've been better if those were edited out. Also, some lines of dialogue sound too formal, but it's still okay. Other than those, the story is a great read. I really enjoyed it!
The story is cool, a little bit different than what imagined from the usual werewolf story. However, it is quite hard to read (cuz the lack of space between the lines). Overall, the story is good! Keep up the good work!
This is a very entrancing story. The author is a very talented person. I hope they will continue this story soon. You are unbelievably talented. Thank you for sharing your writing for others to enjoy .
Werewolf related stories had a massive spot on my heart... I used to read so many of this genre since the written plot regarding the story usually impresses me. I would really love to know more about their interaction and such and to journey more with the conflicts that goes around it. BTW, I love the characters so much. So keep up the good job!
My Merciless Alpha is a really good book with lots of potential, the author could improve on some of her aspects of writing but the book itself is spectacular! Would definitely recommend.
I really think the different POV’s are what makes this novel special. Makes you see all sides of the characters. And I always enjoy a good FL. So don’t overwork yourself and stay healthy !
I have read about 8 chapters from the 21 published so far. My honest opinion. The story is interesting. The stability of updates is good. The story is progressing well. Character design is well thought of. There world background is good but a little more description would have lead to authenticity. As far as the writing quality is concerned, the flow is good. A few typing errors are noticed as well as punctuation mistakes. All these can be addressed if you run your chapters through the free online grammar checker. The other thing I notice is that the pace of the book is too fast at some places. Please slow down. At this rate your book will completed very quickly unless you duplicate a few plots. On the whole a good read. All the best, author!
I love a unique story that includes various cultures. Read a few chapters of it and I'm already intrigued. Loved the background of the story as well... Great work author!!!
Pretty good overall. I'm not someome who usualky enjoys fantasy with romance alone but this seems to work. The world building is pretty good, the characters written well and, save for a few errors, is a good read
do we all remember how well received the twilight was in the past especially the books, but it went down fast! and why I mentioned twilight because this story reminded me of it. the only difference is here we already have better characters, they are more interesting, the female lead is way better, the characters around her, the drama that can unfold in the future will be amazing. this novel can go far if the author wants it to. liked the family of the female lead, and it seemed like the world is dominated by the males who knows maybe she will shift the balance with her unique powers.
Finally, a werewolf novel with a strong-willed female lead who doesn't let the male lead drag her around by the nose. This is a well-written, fast-paced, adventure/romance that's so easy to read the chapters just fly by! It's rare to find such a high quality plot in this particular sub-genre, and with just a little bit of polish the written expressions would shine even brighter. Overall, this is one of the most impressive stories on the entire site!
I’m hooked with this story. Wonderful storyline and also the characters was well build, it got me wanting more! Good job author. I’m so adding your story to my library. ❤️
A stunning world brought to life by the author that, unfortunately, suffers from several grammatical errors or missing words. This story is unique and unlike any other werewolf novel I've read, pleasantly surprising me as it is a refreshing world to read. The werewolves aren't the only part that makes it interesting: so do the other races, but the first 7 chapters suffer from grammatical errors. Spacing is non-existent between the sentences and broke the novel's immersion for me, to the point that I'm reviewing this after 2 days of reading; I just needed "apple juice" to get me in the mood to continue reading, even though I was genuinely interested in the story. Then other parts had some missing words and this time it was one too many for me to point out. As I've suggested in almost all my reviews, I will recommend the author use Grammarly to fix these errors. The other part that that fell flat was the execution and pacing of the story. It sometimes races too fast, moving from one plot to another, without giving the readers (or the characters in the story) a pause. And because of that, some parts don't seem to mesh well. The best example I can remember (from the top of my head) would be how *SPOILERS* accepting Lily is of Delian. Right after meeting him, with almost no hesitation, she accepted him. Now that's a little hard to believe for two reasons: first, and foremost, she was tortured and almost r*ped not just a day ago, and which should've felt like only a few minutes to her since she was unconscious for most of the time. Women who experienced such a traumat*c (why are they censoring this word??) event can't have any male touch her in such a short while; they automatically recoil as that is their body reacting, and this is not considering the mental trau*a she'd have. No matter how close she feels about him, she wouldn't be so accepting, especially if he's a stranger (whom Delian was at the time). Second, she just found out her soulmate likes screwing around with other chicks. To me, I'd feel as though she'd have been less trusting of men after that (I am genuinely surprised that she didn't even think, "Oh, maybe this guy took me to his castle cause he wants to bang me."). Nope, none of that. Because the story was already 10 miles away, focusing on how she accepted him as her older brother. This may sound like a rant, but it's not. Like every other novel out there, it's flawed but that's ok because there are no perfect novels out there. In fact, I still read it to the latest chapter because, no matter how hard it was to read due to the barrage of grammatical errors - or the fast pacing of the story - it was a unique world that I liked and would want to read more of. The characters are fascinating (other than the ML, he's a di*k who's possessive over a girl he pushed away and can sod off) and the world they inhabit are phenomenal.
This book kept me on edge while reading.. Author just my opinion, keep long paragraphs into small ones it will be easy for us while reading.. Also I love the female character more
Nice beginning and interesting presentation, I like the implementations of different races, even if I'm not really into werewolf novels. A few grammar mistakes, but not ones I really noticed. Pretty good story
I think from the very first chapters you've successfully grabbed your reader's attention. Great job keep it up. I've completed the available chapters and excited for upcoming chapters. ^^
This novel starts out with basic information and builds up over time. As in the first chapter they don't tell you about everything instead the details are slowly revealed overtime. I think this kind of novel is more interesting to read when it has a bunch of chapters out, and there are 20 out now so its a good time to start.
I love werewolf-kind of books and this was no exception. There may be a few errors here and there but it does not change how good the story is. Good job writing this and keep up the good work :)
The writing and the pace is all over the place, the characters are plain with no personality, everything seems rushed and nothing is really explained at all. Firstly, you need to establish the story setting and the characters before diving into the main story. There is a lack of descriptions so you need to work on those. Anyway, keep writing and you'll get better. All the best
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Well, I felt the sadness in Chapter 1 and most definitely 2. But, the development kind of goes too fast. And the design is a bit low, but besides all that. I believe you'll get a contract after this
An good book for werewolf romance lovers! The female lead is outrageous and I love it....❤ recommend it! like the pacing as well as other supporting characters.
Very interesting book with some great background and story, looking forward to seeing more. Hope the author can edit his work soon as the slight errors take me the out of the story slightly, but other than that rlly nice work
This is a really good one. I like the twist and all, good idea. But there's still work to do on your plot execution. I look forward to your coming books and can't wait to see your progress
I liked that the FL had a backbone and is a fighter unlike the FLs of other stories who keep giving in. I look forward to the character development of these characters.
Wow, it's kinda exciting series. I love how active the book it is, there are moments where you can relate to the female wolf. I kinda love it, plus the reveal that she is a world Got me. The names are unique too and make you feel interesting. Plus I believe it's a romantic series- with more ***** development. I like it, will read all the chapters
Nice story! The idea is well thought out and original! Besides the few spelling mistakes here and there, it's an awesome book! Keep going and I hope you are successful!
The storyline is really amazing, the story has a tendency to bind everyone with it. I will be looking forward to read the rest of the chapters.
Omg! I liked it very much. The story is good. I'll add it to my library. Even if it has some errors in it, it's okay. Keep going Author. I'm waiting for new chapters...❤
hey there. first of all, I love your story description, and then the story was so interesting. I like the way each characters talks in the chapters. You are so good at character development : )
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It's a really wonderful story! I don't really read much about werewolves, or anything fantasy for that matter, but somehow this is something I really enjoyed. The first few chapters had spacing issues, and it would've been better if those were edited out. Also, some lines of dialogue sound too formal, but it's still okay. Other than those, the story is a great read. I really enjoyed it!
The story is cool, a little bit different than what imagined from the usual werewolf story. However, it is quite hard to read (cuz the lack of space between the lines). Overall, the story is good! Keep up the good work!
This is a very entrancing story. The author is a very talented person. I hope they will continue this story soon. You are unbelievably talented. Thank you for sharing your writing for others to enjoy .
Werewolf related stories had a massive spot on my heart... I used to read so many of this genre since the written plot regarding the story usually impresses me. I would really love to know more about their interaction and such and to journey more with the conflicts that goes around it. BTW, I love the characters so much. So keep up the good job!
My Merciless Alpha is a really good book with lots of potential, the author could improve on some of her aspects of writing but the book itself is spectacular! Would definitely recommend.
I really think the different POV’s are what makes this novel special. Makes you see all sides of the characters. And I always enjoy a good FL. So don’t overwork yourself and stay healthy !
I have read about 8 chapters from the 21 published so far. My honest opinion. The story is interesting. The stability of updates is good. The story is progressing well. Character design is well thought of. There world background is good but a little more description would have lead to authenticity. As far as the writing quality is concerned, the flow is good. A few typing errors are noticed as well as punctuation mistakes. All these can be addressed if you run your chapters through the free online grammar checker. The other thing I notice is that the pace of the book is too fast at some places. Please slow down. At this rate your book will completed very quickly unless you duplicate a few plots. On the whole a good read. All the best, author!
I love a unique story that includes various cultures. Read a few chapters of it and I'm already intrigued. Loved the background of the story as well... Great work author!!!
Pretty good overall. I'm not someome who usualky enjoys fantasy with romance alone but this seems to work. The world building is pretty good, the characters written well and, save for a few errors, is a good read
do we all remember how well received the twilight was in the past especially the books, but it went down fast! and why I mentioned twilight because this story reminded me of it. the only difference is here we already have better characters, they are more interesting, the female lead is way better, the characters around her, the drama that can unfold in the future will be amazing. this novel can go far if the author wants it to. liked the family of the female lead, and it seemed like the world is dominated by the males who knows maybe she will shift the balance with her unique powers.
Finally, a werewolf novel with a strong-willed female lead who doesn't let the male lead drag her around by the nose. This is a well-written, fast-paced, adventure/romance that's so easy to read the chapters just fly by! It's rare to find such a high quality plot in this particular sub-genre, and with just a little bit of polish the written expressions would shine even brighter. Overall, this is one of the most impressive stories on the entire site!
I’m hooked with this story. Wonderful storyline and also the characters was well build, it got me wanting more! Good job author. I’m so adding your story to my library. ❤️
A stunning world brought to life by the author that, unfortunately, suffers from several grammatical errors or missing words. This story is unique and unlike any other werewolf novel I've read, pleasantly surprising me as it is a refreshing world to read. The werewolves aren't the only part that makes it interesting: so do the other races, but the first 7 chapters suffer from grammatical errors. Spacing is non-existent between the sentences and broke the novel's immersion for me, to the point that I'm reviewing this after 2 days of reading; I just needed "apple juice" to get me in the mood to continue reading, even though I was genuinely interested in the story. Then other parts had some missing words and this time it was one too many for me to point out. As I've suggested in almost all my reviews, I will recommend the author use Grammarly to fix these errors. The other part that that fell flat was the execution and pacing of the story. It sometimes races too fast, moving from one plot to another, without giving the readers (or the characters in the story) a pause. And because of that, some parts don't seem to mesh well. The best example I can remember (from the top of my head) would be how *SPOILERS* accepting Lily is of Delian. Right after meeting him, with almost no hesitation, she accepted him. Now that's a little hard to believe for two reasons: first, and foremost, she was tortured and almost r*ped not just a day ago, and which should've felt like only a few minutes to her since she was unconscious for most of the time. Women who experienced such a traumat*c (why are they censoring this word??) event can't have any male touch her in such a short while; they automatically recoil as that is their body reacting, and this is not considering the mental trau*a she'd have. No matter how close she feels about him, she wouldn't be so accepting, especially if he's a stranger (whom Delian was at the time). Second, she just found out her soulmate likes screwing around with other chicks. To me, I'd feel as though she'd have been less trusting of men after that (I am genuinely surprised that she didn't even think, "Oh, maybe this guy took me to his castle cause he wants to bang me."). Nope, none of that. Because the story was already 10 miles away, focusing on how she accepted him as her older brother. This may sound like a rant, but it's not. Like every other novel out there, it's flawed but that's ok because there are no perfect novels out there. In fact, I still read it to the latest chapter because, no matter how hard it was to read due to the barrage of grammatical errors - or the fast pacing of the story - it was a unique world that I liked and would want to read more of. The characters are fascinating (other than the ML, he's a di*k who's possessive over a girl he pushed away and can sod off) and the world they inhabit are phenomenal.
This book kept me on edge while reading.. Author just my opinion, keep long paragraphs into small ones it will be easy for us while reading.. Also I love the female character more
Nice beginning and interesting presentation, I like the implementations of different races, even if I'm not really into werewolf novels. A few grammar mistakes, but not ones I really noticed. Pretty good story
I think from the very first chapters you've successfully grabbed your reader's attention. Great job keep it up. I've completed the available chapters and excited for upcoming chapters. ^^
This novel starts out with basic information and builds up over time. As in the first chapter they don't tell you about everything instead the details are slowly revealed overtime. I think this kind of novel is more interesting to read when it has a bunch of chapters out, and there are 20 out now so its a good time to start.
I love werewolf-kind of books and this was no exception. There may be a few errors here and there but it does not change how good the story is. Good job writing this and keep up the good work :)
The writing and the pace is all over the place, the characters are plain with no personality, everything seems rushed and nothing is really explained at all. Firstly, you need to establish the story setting and the characters before diving into the main story. There is a lack of descriptions so you need to work on those. Anyway, keep writing and you'll get better. All the best
揭示劇透 Well, I felt the sadness in Chapter 1 and most definitely 2. But, the development kind of goes too fast. And the design is a bit low, but besides all that. I believe you'll get a contract after this
An good book for werewolf romance lovers! The female lead is outrageous and I love it....❤ recommend it! like the pacing as well as other supporting characters.
Very interesting book with some great background and story, looking forward to seeing more. Hope the author can edit his work soon as the slight errors take me the out of the story slightly, but other than that rlly nice work
This is a really good one. I like the twist and all, good idea. But there's still work to do on your plot execution. I look forward to your coming books and can't wait to see your progress
I liked that the FL had a backbone and is a fighter unlike the FLs of other stories who keep giving in. I look forward to the character development of these characters.
Wow, it's kinda exciting series. I love how active the book it is, there are moments where you can relate to the female wolf. I kinda love it, plus the reveal that she is a world Got me. The names are unique too and make you feel interesting. Plus I believe it's a romantic series- with more ***** development. I like it, will read all the chapters
Nice story! The idea is well thought out and original! Besides the few spelling mistakes here and there, it's an awesome book! Keep going and I hope you are successful!
The storyline is really amazing, the story has a tendency to bind everyone with it. I will be looking forward to read the rest of the chapters.
Omg! I liked it very much. The story is good. I'll add it to my library. Even if it has some errors in it, it's okay. Keep going Author. I'm waiting for new chapters...❤
hey there. first of all, I love your story description, and then the story was so interesting. I like the way each characters talks in the chapters. You are so good at character development : )
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