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The Weird Life Of Avery Bane is about a young woman (13) in high school who is attending school at Princeton High in place of Adam Darkwaters (aka her doppelganger). Avery is to attend Princeton High as Adam Darkwaters and continue Adam's family tradition, which is to become The Captain of the Martial Arts Club.
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Nicely done, I read the chapter and enjoyed it, I am looking forward to seeing where it goes. I think that you may have jumped their meetinig to quick, and he was very willing in a unlikely way, but other than that, amazing.
Nice novel a cool bender novel it really amazing and the MC is quite good in her own way, u re really trying author hahaha lovely novel Ps: Lord_Skywalker
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Honest review here, the story is good, well thought out series of events, but the way the author constructs words and sentences needs more work (for me atleast), but everything else is fine! keep up the good work and improve!
Excellent storytelling, unique plot line, and just overall great. To the author, you did a great job on this story I haven't seen people create a story quite like yours before. Thumbs up for good work. 👍
I really like the dialogue, and the premise is interesting. That said, I feel like it would be a bit nice to see what "Avery" is doing at "her" school. Since it almost feels like that character just dropped out of the picture.
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The story is pretty amazing and i think it's going to get better and better by time! It's pretty good for a start and I am sure you will develop it more and more
卷 1
- 1 The Strange Life Of Avery Bane Begins 4 years ago
- 2 Looking for the Martial Arts Club 4 years ago
- 3 Finding the Martial Arts Club 4 years ago
- 4 Fightin William Smith for the spot of Captain of The Martial Arts Club 4 years ago
- 5 Being The Captain of The Martial Arts Club 4 years ago
- 6 My Second Day As Captain Of The Martial Arts Club 4 years ago
- 7 My First Letter Of Challenge 4 years ago
- 8 Making A New Friend 4 years ago
- 9 Party Part 1: My First Party Invite 4 years ago
- 10 Party Part 2: Uh oh... 4 years ago
- 11 How My Saturday Was Spent 4 years ago
- 12 I Went Swimming On Sunday 4 years ago
- 13 The First School Challenge 4 years ago
- 14 Winning The School Challenge 4 years ago
- 15 Tutoring Shane In French 4 years ago
- 16 I Am A Boy! 4 years ago
- 17 The New Member Of The Martial Arts Club 4 years ago
- 18 Sigh 4 years ago
- 19 French Class 4 years ago
- 20 Meeting Adam's Family 4 years ago
- 21 Wow This Very Fancy Place 4 years ago
- 22 Getting Ready For A Party 4 years ago
- 23 Attending The Party 4 years ago
- 24 Fun Day 4 years ago
- 25 Fighting The Darkwaters Brothers 4 years ago
- 26 Finishing The Fight 4 years ago
- 27 Shopping 4 years ago
- 28 Part 1: Helping 4 years ago
- 29 Part 2: Ready And There At The Party 4 years ago
- 30 We're Back Home 4 years ago
Hello, if anyone reads this, this is W1N5T0N talking here, well typing here actually, anyway, I have been locked out of my Webnovel account for some reason so I made a new one and I am here to inform you that my novel The Weird Life Of Avery Bane might or will be continued to be written on my new account, it might take a day or two, but my novel will be posted from chapter 1 to the last chapter I wrote, on my new account. So if you want to keep reading it, it will be on my new account. I hope you have a nice day, night, or afternoon :). I also hope you have enjoyed my novel so far :).