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So, as an enthusiastic reader of this work, i wanna support the author by reviewing his work as he had requested for it from us. 😄 Although this work deserves a solid 5 star, I don't want to make the author very happy by giving him that. My reason is because of some flaws which I would explain below. Now, my rating goes thus: Writing quality: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 I gave 4 out of 5 stars because of there are few grammatical and spelling errors in the story. With some little edits, these would disappear. However, the errors and mistakes that one would find wouldn't shatter one's submersion into the story. Updating stability: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 I gave these 5/ 5 stars because author updates everyday. Also, he could give mass release of 4-5 chapters whenever he's in the mood. XD. Story Development: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟🌟 This deserve a solid 5 star. Why? Because I love how the story is unfolding. It's entertaining and at the same time, unpredictable. Also, it is shrouded in mysteries, making it more enthralling. I am really enjoying the story progression and would defo continue to read until the end. Now, unlike some fantasy-cultivation books that have tons of cliches, making them boring and predictable, this book doesn't have cliches. No arrogant young masters and so on, if you get me. 😁 For the Cultivation aspect of the story: the Cultivation system that this story uses is truly unique. One could cultivate many realm-energies by comprehending them and harmonizing with them, becoming one with them. I like how the author made MC cultivates many energies that bestowed him with the power to manipulate and control fire and heat, ice and frost, wind and storm and many more. But what made me more exhilarated about the story were the energies never before seen in any cultivation book. So as examples, radiantforce energy which gave him the power to control light, strengthforce energy which gave him the power of Strength and Might, phantasmforce energy which gave him the power of Illusion. There are just so many to list. However, I would stop here. XD. And, another thing that excites me about this story is how the MC possesses tons of battle-physiques [all because of some good reasons which I wouldn't mention here]. These physiques allow him to battle cultivators that are higher in rank than him. However, he must slay his opponents or challengers in a minute, or he would become weakened by any of the physiques and get killed. Actually, he becomes weakened by them because the power of the physiques aren't supposed to be available to him yet. They are tremendous for him to handle and utilize. So, whenever he summons any of them, he experiences severe headaches, intense body pains and extreme fatigue. Therefore, he must eliminate his opponents before he blacks out due to the agonizing pain and splitting headache that he would suffer from using the powerful physiques. So all these that I stated was what made me love the story the more. Character design: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 I will give this 4/5 stars. My rating for this is because, in the beginning chapters of the story, MC was naive and kinda annoying. Also, he was a wimp. Anyways, this was because he actually hadn't stepped out of his uncle's mansion for long. So, he didn't really relate with other people other than his uncle, the maids and workers in the mansion who he had grown accustomed to. But stepping out of his uncle's mansion to hone himself in battle, he quickly became my favorite. The MC who is smart and intelligent quickly got used to how the Cultivation world works. So as the story progressed, I got to love MC the more because he did things that made me happy. I don't know about other readers and what they may think, but I would speak for myself. This MC is one of the best MCs that I have ever come across. I am currently at chapter 160 and I don't yet have a problem with the MC yet. How cool and amazing is that? Also, don't forget that this is an HAREM novel, but this MC doesn't think with his dick. However, he is an admirer of beauties, but who actually isn't???? So the MC's attributes include: smart, adorable, intelligent, generous, cool, then fierce and fearsome in the way that he fights, ruthless as he has killed a lot of cultivators that tried to harm him, daring and super fucking adventurous as he had struggled against high-rank cultivators for cultivation resources, artifacts and treasures. Can you imagine that? So crazy. Haha. World background: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 This surely deserves a solid 5 star. Author really took his time to describe the world well, and everything in it. Note: when you start reading, you may find author explaining stuffs. But these stuffs aren't random useless stuffs, they are actually useful elements in his story. I guess that's just his way of writing which I feel is Descriptive/ expository writing. However, this won't break your immersion. I promise. 😉 Summary: Story is very enjoyable and exhilarating as there are lot of plot twists and stuffs that would excite and delight you. So, I would suggest that you check it out. You would definitely not be disappointed. And if you are, well... then you are looking for something else that isn't in this story. 😁 Author-San, thanks so much for this work. 👍 Do keep updating. 👌✌️
I have nothing to say other than it's AMAZING. Is it the Story progression? Cultivation levels? Weapons? Battle descriptions? MC's love life? Romance and Sex scenes? Suspense, Thrills and Mysteries? Basically everything in this novel is great. Although there are minor writing errors here and there, the book is still very much entertaining. Keep up the good work dear author. Don't stop writing. And don't forget to keep safe.
The very beginning shows the author's ignorance and lack of basic knowledge. The impact and noise of explosions in open space, the author impresses with his knowledge from the very beginning, and then it gets even worse. A swamp without logic and stupidity Mc. Waste of time. Rating minus 100
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After having read the reviews, I feel I must correct a major misunderstanding. The grammar. I’ve read multiple reviews saying the grammar is excellent/perfect. No, it is not. As of chapter 79, it is a bit of a struggle read. It isn’t the worst I’ve read on here so I won’t ask that the author is remanded into custody until an editor can be found, however, I do want the people to know that you will have to constantly revise the sentences in your mind so the story makes sense. It does take away from story immersion. The bright side is at ch 79 you can already see character growth & Alex is a likable MC. So if you can push past the grammar, it’s a nice novel to pass the time with.
Mc is mature (for his age), smart, genius. Mature? 13 years old behaves like a 6-8 year old child. Clever? Well, then from which side to look, for 12-13 years, maybe a little smart (but I would say that Mc is stupid) Genius? he was stuck at the initial stage for several months, a genius, and what a ... There are still mistakes, but not critical, and the behavior when meeting a beautiful girl does not like. It's my personal opinion. Written with a translator.
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..................... Hello, I'm not really good with reviews but I can say it was a good read and I'm waiting for the next chapter (if there will be). ......................
I wonder, How many chapter are all in this story? because I only ended in chapter 348, because I'm thinking to buy privilege, if it is really worth it? -is it more than 1000 chapters? I really like it alot :) -I hope it will have more chapters to come:))))) -THANK YOU WRITER-
enemies too powerful compared to the protagonist .. ... ................ ... ......... ............ ............... ................................
first of MC is idiot not only naive also idiot, he says he can't further his cultivation but doesn't use the pills left behind by his father and mother even though trillion of lives are on the line because what pride?? that's shitty so many USELESS info dumps oh so so so many of them
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Hello author-san Can you please add 'R-18' to the title of the chapter if it was present in it?! cause for someone like me i want to know the frequency of the 'R-18' scenes in the novel. Thank you.
This feels more lIke an essay more than a story lol. The explanations are too long which is not yet needed. All the cultivation level is introduced at the start leaving no excitement for the readers to explore and continue reading on the systems. The author could have tried to introduced the cultivation leVels and the world in a mystifying way when the readers will all be piqued. I must say that the author has good ideas but how he expose the story and narrates It does not give any thrill to the readers or make the readers hooked on the story.
I just read the 1st chapter after having had this novel for a long time in my library and it promises a lot of reading pleasure, however I remember that there was a chapter which reca** the energy cultivation levels but it is no longer there I wonder if you could put it back for ease of understanding when reading.
This is one of the best cultivation novel I've recently read. Good character development, excellent word buliding, unique systems, cool fights, op mc along with op enemies and many more. And also clear explanations on cultivation, different races, man this novel is excellent. I so hope that the author won't drop this novel.
I can't read this the info dump and the Mc who Is 12 looks like 16 acting as if he's 4 and why now is he learning this where I'd he what's his story? (the beginning) please try and read what you made the and like me if you can't handle more than 2 chapters of info-dumping space it out! concept seemed great though.
For the Authors first novel, it is pretty good, the way the author introduces cultivation levels, weapon levels is good, unlike other novels that make a whole chapter about the author uses the mc to ask questions about cultivation levels and then another character will explain, its pretty good. but I have discontinued reading due to payed chapters, i cant afford it nor do I have the time to login to get free pass. I believe webnovel (qidian) was stupid to remove add watching for chapters. (watch an add to unlock a chapter if you couldn't afford ) qidian is a scam for money, alot of chapters on novels cost around 12 , 20 coins to unlock.
The sypnosis seems interesting and the storyline intrigue me to read it. I probably will read it after i finish reading the current novel i m reading at the moment.
This book has a great storyline. You can tell that the author sat down and really thought things through before starting the novel. The worldbuilding is coming along really well and this is definitely worth checking out.
an amazing book by an amazing author. keep up the good work! (I miss you,dm me sometime?) keep it up! why are you still here? read this book and share it and give gifts and stones!!!!!!!
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Everything about this book is good. Just add more romantic scene. Don't let the mc be a novice regarding woman and their feeling. Except from that everything is dope
All you have to do to understand the utter uselessness and stupidity of this story is to read the Glossary chapter (right after the Prologue), especially the 2nd part to the end. What a waste of braincells.
A pretty good novel with some minor errors in grammar, I guess. Instead of “loosing” it’s actually “losing” (has occurred multiple times throughout the novel). The novel has potential but the MC’s attitude towards women is annoying and unnecessary at times...
So I'm reading thus far and all I can say is that the writing quality gets better as chapter continues. You can really determine that this novel is more than decent and readable for most readers and I commend the author for doing this. The stability of updates may not be daily but as you can see from the dates, there are couple of chapters released in a day so that is heavily compensated of those who released daily. From the beginning, things were tad long due to the fact it was wall of text by explaining the system (but some parts of it were handled pretty well like in a form of discussion or brainstorming). But its worth the patience when you go along this novel cause there are lots of character interaction and plot that unfolds. The world-building is adequate, not rushed or not slow. You can truly savor as though you're one of the adventurer in this novel! Thank you author for the job well done. I hope you continue working hard, I'll continue reading and this review shall be subjected to changes as I go along with the chapter that deemed an overall review once more!
揭示劇透 So, as an enthusiastic reader of this work, i wanna support the author by reviewing his work as he had requested for it from us. 😄 Although this work deserves a solid 5 star, I don't want to make the author very happy by giving him that. My reason is because of some flaws which I would explain below. Now, my rating goes thus: Writing quality: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 I gave 4 out of 5 stars because of there are few grammatical and spelling errors in the story. With some little edits, these would disappear. However, the errors and mistakes that one would find wouldn't shatter one's submersion into the story. Updating stability: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 I gave these 5/ 5 stars because author updates everyday. Also, he could give mass release of 4-5 chapters whenever he's in the mood. XD. Story Development: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟🌟 This deserve a solid 5 star. Why? Because I love how the story is unfolding. It's entertaining and at the same time, unpredictable. Also, it is shrouded in mysteries, making it more enthralling. I am really enjoying the story progression and would defo continue to read until the end. Now, unlike some fantasy-cultivation books that have tons of cliches, making them boring and predictable, this book doesn't have cliches. No arrogant young masters and so on, if you get me. 😁 For the Cultivation aspect of the story: the Cultivation system that this story uses is truly unique. One could cultivate many realm-energies by comprehending them and harmonizing with them, becoming one with them. I like how the author made MC cultivates many energies that bestowed him with the power to manipulate and control fire and heat, ice and frost, wind and storm and many more. But what made me more exhilarated about the story were the energies never before seen in any cultivation book. So as examples, radiantforce energy which gave him the power to control light, strengthforce energy which gave him the power of Strength and Might, phantasmforce energy which gave him the power of Illusion. There are just so many to list. However, I would stop here. XD. And, another thing that excites me about this story is how the MC possesses tons of battle-physiques [all because of some good reasons which I wouldn't mention here]. These physiques allow him to battle cultivators that are higher in rank than him. However, he must slay his opponents or challengers in a minute, or he would become weakened by any of the physiques and get killed. Actually, he becomes weakened by them because the power of the physiques aren't supposed to be available to him yet. They are tremendous for him to handle and utilize. So, whenever he summons any of them, he experiences severe headaches, intense body pains and extreme fatigue. Therefore, he must eliminate his opponents before he blacks out due to the agonizing pain and splitting headache that he would suffer from using the powerful physiques. So all these that I stated was what made me love the story the more. Character design: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 I will give this 4/5 stars. My rating for this is because, in the beginning chapters of the story, MC was naive and kinda annoying. Also, he was a wimp. Anyways, this was because he actually hadn't stepped out of his uncle's mansion for long. So, he didn't really relate with other people other than his uncle, the maids and workers in the mansion who he had grown accustomed to. But stepping out of his uncle's mansion to hone himself in battle, he quickly became my favorite. The MC who is smart and intelligent quickly got used to how the Cultivation world works. So as the story progressed, I got to love MC the more because he did things that made me happy. I don't know about other readers and what they may think, but I would speak for myself. This MC is one of the best MCs that I have ever come across. I am currently at chapter 160 and I don't yet have a problem with the MC yet. How cool and amazing is that? Also, don't forget that this is an HAREM novel, but this MC doesn't think with his dick. However, he is an admirer of beauties, but who actually isn't???? So the MC's attributes include: smart, adorable, intelligent, generous, cool, then fierce and fearsome in the way that he fights, ruthless as he has killed a lot of cultivators that tried to harm him, daring and super fucking adventurous as he had struggled against high-rank cultivators for cultivation resources, artifacts and treasures. Can you imagine that? So crazy. Haha. World background: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 This surely deserves a solid 5 star. Author really took his time to describe the world well, and everything in it. Note: when you start reading, you may find author explaining stuffs. But these stuffs aren't random useless stuffs, they are actually useful elements in his story. I guess that's just his way of writing which I feel is Descriptive/ expository writing. However, this won't break your immersion. I promise. 😉 Summary: Story is very enjoyable and exhilarating as there are lot of plot twists and stuffs that would excite and delight you. So, I would suggest that you check it out. You would definitely not be disappointed. And if you are, well... then you are looking for something else that isn't in this story. 😁 Author-San, thanks so much for this work. 👍 Do keep updating. 👌✌️
I have nothing to say other than it's AMAZING. Is it the Story progression? Cultivation levels? Weapons? Battle descriptions? MC's love life? Romance and Sex scenes? Suspense, Thrills and Mysteries? Basically everything in this novel is great. Although there are minor writing errors here and there, the book is still very much entertaining. Keep up the good work dear author. Don't stop writing. And don't forget to keep safe.
The very beginning shows the author's ignorance and lack of basic knowledge. The impact and noise of explosions in open space, the author impresses with his knowledge from the very beginning, and then it gets even worse. A swamp without logic and stupidity Mc. Waste of time. Rating minus 100
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After having read the reviews, I feel I must correct a major misunderstanding. The grammar. I’ve read multiple reviews saying the grammar is excellent/perfect. No, it is not. As of chapter 79, it is a bit of a struggle read. It isn’t the worst I’ve read on here so I won’t ask that the author is remanded into custody until an editor can be found, however, I do want the people to know that you will have to constantly revise the sentences in your mind so the story makes sense. It does take away from story immersion. The bright side is at ch 79 you can already see character growth & Alex is a likable MC. So if you can push past the grammar, it’s a nice novel to pass the time with.
Mc is mature (for his age), smart, genius. Mature? 13 years old behaves like a 6-8 year old child. Clever? Well, then from which side to look, for 12-13 years, maybe a little smart (but I would say that Mc is stupid) Genius? he was stuck at the initial stage for several months, a genius, and what a ... There are still mistakes, but not critical, and the behavior when meeting a beautiful girl does not like. It's my personal opinion. Written with a translator.
揭示劇透 ..................... Hello, I'm not really good with reviews but I can say it was a good read and I'm waiting for the next chapter (if there will be). ......................
I wonder, How many chapter are all in this story? because I only ended in chapter 348, because I'm thinking to buy privilege, if it is really worth it? -is it more than 1000 chapters? I really like it alot :) -I hope it will have more chapters to come:))))) -THANK YOU WRITER-
enemies too powerful compared to the protagonist .. ... ................ ... ......... ............ ............... ................................
first of MC is idiot not only naive also idiot, he says he can't further his cultivation but doesn't use the pills left behind by his father and mother even though trillion of lives are on the line because what pride?? that's shitty so many USELESS info dumps oh so so so many of them
Bdjdkdkkdkdkdkkdkdkkdkdkdkkdkdkdkkdkdkdkkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkkdkdkfkkdkdkdkkdkdkdkkfkfkfkfjdjdjdjjdjfjjfjfjfjjfjfkkfkfkfjjdjjdjdjjdjdkdiididyeuueueuejjekdkdkkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkkdkdkkdkdkdkkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdk. Bdjkdkdkdkdjdjjdkdfikfkfkfkkfkf
Hello author-san Can you please add 'R-18' to the title of the chapter if it was present in it?! cause for someone like me i want to know the frequency of the 'R-18' scenes in the novel. Thank you.
This feels more lIke an essay more than a story lol. The explanations are too long which is not yet needed. All the cultivation level is introduced at the start leaving no excitement for the readers to explore and continue reading on the systems. The author could have tried to introduced the cultivation leVels and the world in a mystifying way when the readers will all be piqued. I must say that the author has good ideas but how he expose the story and narrates It does not give any thrill to the readers or make the readers hooked on the story.
I just read the 1st chapter after having had this novel for a long time in my library and it promises a lot of reading pleasure, however I remember that there was a chapter which reca** the energy cultivation levels but it is no longer there I wonder if you could put it back for ease of understanding when reading.
This is one of the best cultivation novel I've recently read. Good character development, excellent word buliding, unique systems, cool fights, op mc along with op enemies and many more. And also clear explanations on cultivation, different races, man this novel is excellent. I so hope that the author won't drop this novel.
I can't read this the info dump and the Mc who Is 12 looks like 16 acting as if he's 4 and why now is he learning this where I'd he what's his story? (the beginning) please try and read what you made the and like me if you can't handle more than 2 chapters of info-dumping space it out! concept seemed great though.
For the Authors first novel, it is pretty good, the way the author introduces cultivation levels, weapon levels is good, unlike other novels that make a whole chapter about the author uses the mc to ask questions about cultivation levels and then another character will explain, its pretty good. but I have discontinued reading due to payed chapters, i cant afford it nor do I have the time to login to get free pass. I believe webnovel (qidian) was stupid to remove add watching for chapters. (watch an add to unlock a chapter if you couldn't afford ) qidian is a scam for money, alot of chapters on novels cost around 12 , 20 coins to unlock.
The sypnosis seems interesting and the storyline intrigue me to read it. I probably will read it after i finish reading the current novel i m reading at the moment.
This book has a great storyline. You can tell that the author sat down and really thought things through before starting the novel. The worldbuilding is coming along really well and this is definitely worth checking out.
an amazing book by an amazing author. keep up the good work! (I miss you,dm me sometime?) keep it up! why are you still here? read this book and share it and give gifts and stones!!!!!!!
揭示劇透 Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? how many minimum girls how many minimum girls how many minimum girls Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? how many minimum girls how many minimum girls how many minimum girls
Everything about this book is good. Just add more romantic scene. Don't let the mc be a novice regarding woman and their feeling. Except from that everything is dope
All you have to do to understand the utter uselessness and stupidity of this story is to read the Glossary chapter (right after the Prologue), especially the 2nd part to the end. What a waste of braincells.
A pretty good novel with some minor errors in grammar, I guess. Instead of “loosing” it’s actually “losing” (has occurred multiple times throughout the novel). The novel has potential but the MC’s attitude towards women is annoying and unnecessary at times...
So I'm reading thus far and all I can say is that the writing quality gets better as chapter continues. You can really determine that this novel is more than decent and readable for most readers and I commend the author for doing this. The stability of updates may not be daily but as you can see from the dates, there are couple of chapters released in a day so that is heavily compensated of those who released daily. From the beginning, things were tad long due to the fact it was wall of text by explaining the system (but some parts of it were handled pretty well like in a form of discussion or brainstorming). But its worth the patience when you go along this novel cause there are lots of character interaction and plot that unfolds. The world-building is adequate, not rushed or not slow. You can truly savor as though you're one of the adventurer in this novel! Thank you author for the job well done. I hope you continue working hard, I'll continue reading and this review shall be subjected to changes as I go along with the chapter that deemed an overall review once more!
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