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Dear Author, The story is interesting however the grammar is very confusing. The importance of using 'his' and 'her' is very important and critical , especially when there is dialogue in between the main characters. It is very misleading on who's delivering the dialogue. I hope this will improved. I would loved to be able to understand this better.
Dear Author, The story is interesting however the grammar is very confusing. The importance of using 'his' and 'her' is very important and critical , especially when there is dialogue in between the main characters. It is very misleading on who's delivering the dialogue. I hope this will improved. I would loved to be able to understand this better.