/ Anime & Comics / Swordsman's Life In Another World
摘要
A legendary swordsman called by many names, by many people, tested his mettle against a Dragon God because he felt that he had reached the peak of swordsmanship and at the end of their battle to the death, the Dragon God granted him a wish.
NOTE: This is a Highschool DXD fanfic hence the timing will probably not be accurate and there many be plot holes. I don't own DXD itself only my MC and maybe some other made up characters.
Another Note: Don't own the cover.
Another Another Note: Don't sh*t on the novel before reading it, because hey, it may actually be good but your interpretation from other people's reviews may be wrong.
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Hmmm i read it on wattpad first and i wish it would update been 4 months already did you abandon it or what but the story is really good and people should read it
Written with Google Translate. I didn't really read the story, and I'm a bit behind on reading this 'amaturewriter' user debate. If the MC has really been betrayed several times and still manages to trust someone after receiving help, he is stupid. And if the MC really was someone 'old' and extremely 'powerful', but he is still acting like a stupid child, I will not read this work. I'm not sure if this is true, but if it is, it is extremely likely that in a little while the MC will give his Girl to someone random, just for 'trusting' him and wanting to give the girl more pleasure. Yes, what I said there is not much 'having', but just the fact that the MC trusts someone after being betrayed repeatedly, already demonstrates the stupid personality of the MC. It doesn't even make sense that he managed to become the strongest swordsman with this type of personality / mentality. If you remove this comment I'll be back until I stop removing it. I would appreciate it if you answer me in a 'normal' way, instead of the mother****er way that 99% of the authors respond when they observe a criticism / request from someone who has not yet read their work. Thank you.
Not nice, reading C2, it seems that MC is an ***** who transmigrated into a kid but has amnesia,,,but reading the chps, he behaves like a child, easily trusting and all friendly,,,and this is retarded for 2 reasons... 1-MC is an ***** 2- The child MC reincarnates in was a brutally abused child, who was almost killed multiple times, and one of his assaulter was his own mom, so yah,,,,dosnt make sense to seem behave so childish Then theres the stupid **** that made me drop this ****, ,,,in C4, MC promises that he'll protect so unborn child of a person whom he never met, has no relationship and has done nothing for him,,,its so stupid....like there none, no CD....stories need CD...otherwise, why bother writing? Also you know what else dosnt make sense, the MC was a dude that was betrayed in his previous life, and an old or atleast experienced person in life and fights, his behavior is so retarded and dosnt match his past. Cause MC is an ***** in a kids body, shown multiple times in C2 and C3 and C4. do what you will with this....but damn man, the starting was interesting to, but its bad. **: I feel this stories retarded and stupid because of the points mentioned above.....this is my thoughts, not anyone elses