摘要
Asera Odinsdottir. The first daughter of Odin. She was gifted in not only the arts of a warrior but aswell as the use of magic. Of course, most of her prowess in the use of magic comes from her eyes that glow brightly green, and seem to hold the power of the cosmos.
Follow her journey through Asguard and the rest of the MCU.
The story is being rewritten as I didn't like how I wrote the previous version. I hope you enjoy the new and hopefully better version more.
Also, I should note that this is a crossover universe. The universes are the MCU, Percy Jackson, Fate, and Harry Potter.
I don't own the cover.
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Hope odin dies fast.Hope odin dies fast.Hope odin dies fast.Hope odin dies fast.Hope odin dies fast.Hope odin dies fast.Hope odin dies fast.
Thought I'll give an honest reveiw...only thing good is the premise of the story and the writing everything else is like a noobie writer decided to put together random ideas just for the fun and it and thought it was a great novel....first the main character, some of her choices are understandable since she's technically a kid even if she went through trails and tribulations on midgard and with her 2 teachers which apparently didn't mature her at all, even the way she treated Frigga made sense since her mother randomly died and then immediantely had someone trying to replace her but the mc shows no emotions after realizing her mother is gone other than anger at Frigga and Odin and the authur just saying she was sad, once. Then there was her fight with Odin which was the saddest piece of writing I've seen which is saying something cause I have read awful fanfic, i could understand her losing like of course she's fighting Odin but the fact that she lost completely because she decided to used nothing but her spear instead of also using her magic is just poor writing. Then there was the random 180 with her personality towards Frigga right after the fight and she was imprisoned, allowing her to call her daughter and spending bonding time with her by choice, and yet she was talking all type of smack about her when she was fighting Odin about how she was going to send her back to the witches who raised her once he was dead...All in all this is just poor planning on the author part, it seemed like they didn't know what to do with the main charcters personality and decided to just wing it as they go. Then there was the fact that the mc was all like "no I want to find out what I am on my own to circe" but then the author like nope I'm going to have OAA to randomly come and tell her a part of what she is like that makes no sense cause OAA wouldn't care enough to come talk to her unless she was his daughter.
揭示劇透 Man. Really liking so far. She should kill odin fast and be queen of asgard.Man. Really liking so far. She should kill odin fast and be queen of asgard.
i hope it would update soon. the author's writing style and the flow of the plot interests me more than some of the books i read. this is honestly too good to be discontinued!
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Nice and now i hope she doesn't get captured again by dick odin. Also good chapter. Cant wait to read more.Also good chapter. Cant wait to read more.
Wow. Nice to see the chapters updating regularly. Excited to see what comes next. Wow. Nice to see the chapters updating regularly. Excited to see what comes next.
Nice. 3 Chapters in a day. Really enjoyed. I so hate odin in this story. Anyway Story is looking good and awesome. i am so excited to read more.
Nice. The rewrite is great. Great to see updates. Also odin is a dick Is it mcu or marvel? hope it is only mcu. Excited to read more. Cant wait.
Really liked the new chapter. When thor crashes on earth maybe she will go to asgard and rule instead of loki. Cant wait for more. Cant wait for more.
More please. 140 Words.140 Words.140 Words.140 Words.140 Words.140 Words.140 Words.140 Words.140 Words.140 Words.140 Words.140 Words.140 Words.140 Words.
The story has potential. Good chapters. Cant wait to read more.The story has potential. Good chapters. Cant wait to read more.The story has potential. Good chapters. Cant wait to read more.
Really good story. I can't wait to read more.Really good story. I can't wait to read more.Really good story. I can't wait to read more.Really good story. I can't wait to read more.
I cant wait to read more. Really nice author.I cant wait to read more. Really nice author.I cant wait to read more. Really nice author.I cant wait to read more. Really nice author.I cant wait to read more. Really nice author.
more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hmm I like the new chapter. Cant wait to read more. Hmm I like the new chapter. Cant wait to read more.Hmm I like the new chapter. Cant wait to read more.
Author please update. Such a good story.Author please update. Such a good story.Author please update. Such a good story.Author please update. Such a good story. Author please update. Such a good story.
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- 1 Birth of a Goddess 4 years ago
- 2 I Can't Think of a Chapter Title :) 4 years ago
- 3 'Bout to Get Magical Up In Here 4 years ago
- 4 Scáthach 4 years ago
- 5 That Time a Goddess got a Training Arc 4 years ago
- 6 False Goddess 4 years ago
- 7 Hmm, Wierd Janitor 4 years ago
- 8 Back to the Start 4 years ago
- 9 The Start of a Rebellion 4 years ago
- 10 The Battle for Asgard 4 years ago
- 11 Sentence 4 years ago
- 12 Deadly Motivation 4 years ago
- 13 Oh You Sly Janitor 4 years ago
- 14 A Call to Infinity 4 years ago
- 15 Xandar 4 years ago
- 16 *breaks pen* "How dare you try and court her" 4 years ago
- 17 I'm not Dropping 4 years ago
- 18 A Deal of False Love 4 years ago
The beginning of this story is quite boring. No real development between the family members so they are kind of stale, the protagonist is also stale since we hardly see her express herself around others or her family (she pretty much prefers not interacting with them). She is also constantly being upped in power throughout the story since she is constantly reading books and exploring magic and her newfound power and the author is more in favor of large time skips to make her even more OP while that is not going to make the story any better.