Vyr's journey through the multiverse

LV 4

Esiyx

First of all I think that the writing quality is very good, when I read the book I don’t have any trouble understanding what the author is trying to write and the grammar is good. I’m taking one star away for stability of updates because author doesn’t post much, but when they do it’s always good so not much of a problem. Otherwise, everything is pretty good! Characters, world, and story are all well written. I would prefer if the story was slightly slower, because I just like reading those books, but the pace is already very good. Overall a good book and would recommend reading Ps sorry for the long review, just kinda thought this would help maybe brighten authors day a bit, bc as another author I know the feeling of lack of motivation.

LV 14

Shira_ori

I love it cant wait to continue reading i only just got to the second world and already love it and need more. The writing quality is really good as well as the story cant stop reading.

LV 14

UsedCreation

Its good, i love it, give me more Thats it and thank you

LV 5

Arious3721

if it would be updated more often with new chapters coming out then it would have a much higher score in my opinion

LV 14

soul445

now that RWBY volume 9 is out are you going to resume the book or are you still going to continue to hiatus because I really like this book I think it's 👍 and the best part about it is that it's a Yuri RWBY which is very rare and some of the books that make them end up just flopping at the middle of it but hey man if you need to take your time do what you got to do man we'll still be here rooting for you do you best of my life be good with you

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II_Dandy_II

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LV 2

Immadropitall

Great Novel the only problem was in the early chaps were they don't even bother to ask about her strange eyes. Although some of them noticed but I have a case of strange OCD wherein I love details of the Main Characters so maybe its just me. So any reader who gets mad at me for this go **** yourself this is my opinion. Great Novel Author-san please continue more.

LV 1

DaoistwwYBDC

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LV 15

Binaryshark5

Really great book, nice characters, plot is well developed, it's not tacky with lots of laughs. Don't mind the wait in-between chapters when they are of this quality.

LV 14

MartinBrook

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LV 14

Mike_Bryan_1264

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LV 14

AvidReader962

A really fun and highly enjoyable story, I definitely like the main character and some of the mystery involved with her you find out and some of the later chapters. The main character as well rounded, and the characters around her are well written and well rounded as well. This is definitely a fun story to check out .

LV 14

dragon_among_men

super good keep up the good work. [][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][] ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()

LV 4

Lionessa

Great bit of power fantasy with yuri.... so yeah I’m totally in and completely biased. Beyond that it seems the author is willing to have our MC work to attain power which I enjoy. Just some minor gripes on writing quality like wrond word usage and grammar errors but nothing too egregious. Thanks for this interesting story and hope you continue to write this to what ever end you have imagined.

LV 13

Filina

So fun to read ................ ........ I hate the idea of 140 caractere

LV 13

TheCreatorOfRice

Seemsgood so imma read it becuz the first chap was good so imma ask now.... Is this Yuri or do I have their genders wrong..................

LV 1

BigNovelBigDream

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?