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Really looking forward to reading this novel from what I know the MC is James and this is about Star Wars. I can't wait to see what adventure awaits this MC, a big plus is the quick updates. Even I can't put out that much content, hopefully it's really enjoyable.
This novel is gives me Star Wars vibes. I remember watching those kinds of films when I was a kid. Anyways, back to the review. As for the writing quality I am truly impressed. The introduction immediately grabbed my attention especially in the first few paragraphs about man's wish to fly. The following chapters,gives more interest, making me want to reader further. As fort the world background, the author was able to describe each scenario and place perfectly. They're not very wordy and boring unlike other sci-fi novels wherein the author explains too much about the scenes making things a bit boring. (This might be different from the perspective of others) Stability of Updates, this category is always an immediate five stars for me. Your works are impressive and I wish you good luck! -R,S
I really enjoy it, it doesn’t stretch the action out like a lot of other novels. Also, is this discontinued or what? Will there be more updates? If so when will this be picked up again, thanks.
Anyone know any good books like this one wher ethey comand fleets pf spaceships and if possible have some romance in there but thats optional
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$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email：luffyringdom@gmail.com
Don't waste your time reading this. The beginning was really interesting. until MC meets a second girl, and fell for her. She treating him like a toy and using him none stop for her goal. and then the author started forcing romance with this girl!! like, come on!! and forcing some idiotic reasons to break up with his first girl who did really like him. and now he has more girls who using him and hates each other. Take my advice, don't read.
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I was quite enjoying the whole novel right up until chapter 80 ish. The end to beginning of the next few chapters either repeated each other or just plain skipped to a different part of the story. Also the titles don't really make sense. Some of the chapters you basically pay for two pages worth of content you already paid for. ***Spoiler ahead*** For anyone reading up till now im specifically talking about when in the story Charles tries to turn eli against james after setting off a bomb on the ship. Its just a really hard part to get over and it should be fixed and re-released. It barely makes sense. Thanks for reading.
just from introduction i already like it 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Une histoire intéressante a lire car le personnage principale est bien équilibré. De plus au fur et a mesure qu'on avance dans la lecture on se trouve aspirer dans l' histoire elle même.
Is this huge harem? How many girls in harem? Is this huge harem? How many girls in harem? Is this huge harem? How many girls in harem? Is this huge harem? How many girls in harem?
Ok guys ... I will be starting to read this Novel from Tomorrow. And I would like to talk about how I feel about this novel and author's work every 10 or 20 chapters and update this comment. Hope my perspective will help future readers ...... (All ratings are currently 5 star but it might Fluctuated in future)
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vary your dad to your favorite food in a det you have a option for the party uncensored or the other items are you and you should not even to use it is the only one that is not the best option to use
I will give this 5 stars just because, but is it just me or is the cover picture just not a pic of anakin from star wars (hayden christiansen), but just With another face?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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It was alright but chapter 4 killed the vibe for me . Authur made him seem reliable but then he couldn't take care of three thugs. He just sounded so pathetic it killed my interest, but I'm sure he gets better I hope.
First of, I only read until chapter 50 before I dropped this novel. I don't know if it got better in the later chapters, but since the bad grammar/use of wrong words, the lacking writing style and the storytelling (which is partly just utterly nonsense) was rather hard to accept, I had to drop it. I was hoping for some star wars like story with jedis and sith, but the novel was just too lacking in quality... Sorry Mr. Author! Try and get yourself an editor. If the chapters get edited into some proper english, it would instantly the quality of your novel by at least 1 star.
Interesting story, splendid plot development with multiple backgrounds and side stories,all expertly wove together around the main protagonist. So unique and captivating!
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A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. Episode III REVENGE OF THE SITH War! The Republic is crumbling under attacks by the ruthless Sith Lord, Count Dooku. There are heroes on both sides. Evil is everywhere. In a stunning move, the fiendish droid leader, General Grievous, has swept into the Republic capital and kidnapped Chancellor Palpatine, leader of the Galactic Senate. As the Separatist Droid Army attempts to flee the besieged capital with their valuable hostage, two Jedi Knights lead a desperate mission to rescue the captive Chancellor...
Welcome to my novel If you like spaces travel, star wars, guardian of the galaxy, and star trek cool works, then you will defintely like this one here. I will write one chapter daily minimum, but if you supported it with stones and voting, then it’s fair to reward you with more chapters like i did today. Have a nice journey and sit tightly as we will move with speed of light between chapters, lol
Really looking forward to reading this novel from what I know the MC is James and this is about Star Wars. I can't wait to see what adventure awaits this MC, a big plus is the quick updates. Even I can't put out that much content, hopefully it's really enjoyable.
This novel is gives me Star Wars vibes. I remember watching those kinds of films when I was a kid. Anyways, back to the review. As for the writing quality I am truly impressed. The introduction immediately grabbed my attention especially in the first few paragraphs about man's wish to fly. The following chapters,gives more interest, making me want to reader further. As fort the world background, the author was able to describe each scenario and place perfectly. They're not very wordy and boring unlike other sci-fi novels wherein the author explains too much about the scenes making things a bit boring. (This might be different from the perspective of others) Stability of Updates, this category is always an immediate five stars for me. Your works are impressive and I wish you good luck! -R,S
I really enjoy it, it doesn’t stretch the action out like a lot of other novels. Also, is this discontinued or what? Will there be more updates? If so when will this be picked up again, thanks.
Anyone know any good books like this one wher ethey comand fleets pf spaceships and if possible have some romance in there but thats optional
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$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email：luffyringdom@gmail.com
Don't waste your time reading this. The beginning was really interesting. until MC meets a second girl, and fell for her. She treating him like a toy and using him none stop for her goal. and then the author started forcing romance with this girl!! like, come on!! and forcing some idiotic reasons to break up with his first girl who did really like him. and now he has more girls who using him and hates each other. Take my advice, don't read.
揭示劇透 I was quite enjoying the whole novel right up until chapter 80 ish. The end to beginning of the next few chapters either repeated each other or just plain skipped to a different part of the story. Also the titles don't really make sense. Some of the chapters you basically pay for two pages worth of content you already paid for. ***Spoiler ahead*** For anyone reading up till now im specifically talking about when in the story Charles tries to turn eli against james after setting off a bomb on the ship. Its just a really hard part to get over and it should be fixed and re-released. It barely makes sense. Thanks for reading.
just from introduction i already like it 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Une histoire intéressante a lire car le personnage principale est bien équilibré. De plus au fur et a mesure qu'on avance dans la lecture on se trouve aspirer dans l' histoire elle même.
Is this huge harem? How many girls in harem? Is this huge harem? How many girls in harem? Is this huge harem? How many girls in harem? Is this huge harem? How many girls in harem?
Ok guys ... I will be starting to read this Novel from Tomorrow. And I would like to talk about how I feel about this novel and author's work every 10 or 20 chapters and update this comment. Hope my perspective will help future readers ...... (All ratings are currently 5 star but it might Fluctuated in future)
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vary your dad to your favorite food in a det you have a option for the party uncensored or the other items are you and you should not even to use it is the only one that is not the best option to use
I will give this 5 stars just because, but is it just me or is the cover picture just not a pic of anakin from star wars (hayden christiansen), but just With another face?
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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It was alright but chapter 4 killed the vibe for me . Authur made him seem reliable but then he couldn't take care of three thugs. He just sounded so pathetic it killed my interest, but I'm sure he gets better I hope.
First of, I only read until chapter 50 before I dropped this novel. I don't know if it got better in the later chapters, but since the bad grammar/use of wrong words, the lacking writing style and the storytelling (which is partly just utterly nonsense) was rather hard to accept, I had to drop it. I was hoping for some star wars like story with jedis and sith, but the novel was just too lacking in quality... Sorry Mr. Author! Try and get yourself an editor. If the chapters get edited into some proper english, it would instantly the quality of your novel by at least 1 star.
Interesting story, splendid plot development with multiple backgrounds and side stories,all expertly wove together around the main protagonist. So unique and captivating!
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A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. Episode III REVENGE OF THE SITH War! The Republic is crumbling under attacks by the ruthless Sith Lord, Count Dooku. There are heroes on both sides. Evil is everywhere. In a stunning move, the fiendish droid leader, General Grievous, has swept into the Republic capital and kidnapped Chancellor Palpatine, leader of the Galactic Senate. As the Separatist Droid Army attempts to flee the besieged capital with their valuable hostage, two Jedi Knights lead a desperate mission to rescue the captive Chancellor...
Welcome to my novel If you like spaces travel, star wars, guardian of the galaxy, and star trek cool works, then you will defintely like this one here. I will write one chapter daily minimum, but if you supported it with stones and voting, then it’s fair to reward you with more chapters like i did today. Have a nice journey and sit tightly as we will move with speed of light between chapters, lol