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It's a little too fast paced,but other than that it is early good. I suggest it to others, keep it up author sama please, it's good enough that I'm keeping this charged for new chapters
The story is okay, it's about a guy who becomes a star with his system. The problem is that I got tired reading this novel. MC is of course the most handsome you will ever see in a novel. MC is nothing without his system. Zero world building. Reading this novel became pointless. I can't get excited. System tossed everything towards our MC. Author wrote a similar novel to this. The world building is way better in that one. The characters got more personality in that one.
Idiot MC with godly plot armor, check Trash grammar, check The uninteresting and widely used plotline, check Nothing to see here boys, just some trash mtl chinese novel ****
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a solid novel . Some bruh worthy moments, but in a good way. It is quite satisfying to read when faded and I read the first 24 chaps real fast and totally absorbed.
Its fast paced and a bit of a easy mode isekai, but its a feels good read and I enjoyed it greatly. Now, pls nerf them and make them slow down a bit. That'd be great, dear Author. Love and Support, Reader
Really good book. Would recommend....................................................................................................................
Nice novel.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👍👌👌👍👌👌👍👌👌👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍
Amazing Story can’t wait to read more. I love the way you show how each song he puts out affects someone personally and we get to see that side of the story.
Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍
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I don't know what to say to be honest. I usually say the good and bad things about the novel, but I couldn't find one. There probably is, I most likely missed one but I couldn't find one and to be honest I personally, genuinely love this novel. Keep up the great work and please don't drop it.
Its a good showbiz system novel. The novel is fast paced which i liked as i wanted to see some development to the story. I know some people might not like how fast the story goes as he goes from a streamer to full blown celebrity in a couple of chapters. But i liked it as I took the fast pace as something the author uses to get to the point rather than stretch the chapters to make it boring. Another positive thing i found about the novel was that the system does bot force the user to do any mission, if the MC finishes a mission he gets reward if not nothing happens, which imo is a plus. Its a nice novel for passing time, it has its flaws but i loved it. Keep it up author, will look forward to the updates 👍
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My creator was not a hero, but he was one to me. My creator sought for a weapon and thus made me. I was built to process, then to think, then to feel. After that he built me a body, first to look, then to move, then to walk. Upon me moving he then set to work, his bench becoming an anvil, the anvil becoming a forge, the forge becoming a factory. He then began to build onto me, first with software, then with armour, then with armaments. And thus I am here. My creator built me, first with desire, then with hate, then with revenge. And now i serve him, doing as he wishes, not because I am forced to, not because I agree with him, but because I'm indebted to him, because life is a gift I cannot repay. A shameless 5 star review from me please support me <3
it's a pretty nice novel although i would appreciate it if you slow down things a bit😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
mooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
It's a little too fast paced,but other than that it is early good. I suggest it to others, keep it up author sama please, it's good enough that I'm keeping this charged for new chapters
The story is okay, it's about a guy who becomes a star with his system. The problem is that I got tired reading this novel. MC is of course the most handsome you will ever see in a novel. MC is nothing without his system. Zero world building. Reading this novel became pointless. I can't get excited. System tossed everything towards our MC. Author wrote a similar novel to this. The world building is way better in that one. The characters got more personality in that one.
Idiot MC with godly plot armor, check Trash grammar, check The uninteresting and widely used plotline, check Nothing to see here boys, just some trash mtl chinese novel ****
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a solid novel . Some bruh worthy moments, but in a good way. It is quite satisfying to read when faded and I read the first 24 chaps real fast and totally absorbed.
Its fast paced and a bit of a easy mode isekai, but its a feels good read and I enjoyed it greatly. Now, pls nerf them and make them slow down a bit. That'd be great, dear Author. Love and Support, Reader
Really good book. Would recommend....................................................................................................................
Nice novel.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👍👍👌👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👌👌👍👌👌👍👌👌👍👌👌👍👌👌👍👍👌👌👍👍
Amazing Story can’t wait to read more. I love the way you show how each song he puts out affects someone personally and we get to see that side of the story.
Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍 Its good 😘😘😘😍😍😍
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I don't know what to say to be honest. I usually say the good and bad things about the novel, but I couldn't find one. There probably is, I most likely missed one but I couldn't find one and to be honest I personally, genuinely love this novel. Keep up the great work and please don't drop it.
Its a good showbiz system novel. The novel is fast paced which i liked as i wanted to see some development to the story. I know some people might not like how fast the story goes as he goes from a streamer to full blown celebrity in a couple of chapters. But i liked it as I took the fast pace as something the author uses to get to the point rather than stretch the chapters to make it boring. Another positive thing i found about the novel was that the system does bot force the user to do any mission, if the MC finishes a mission he gets reward if not nothing happens, which imo is a plus. Its a nice novel for passing time, it has its flaws but i loved it. Keep it up author, will look forward to the updates 👍
good good good good good good good good good good good good star star star star star starkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
My creator was not a hero, but he was one to me. My creator sought for a weapon and thus made me. I was built to process, then to think, then to feel. After that he built me a body, first to look, then to move, then to walk. Upon me moving he then set to work, his bench becoming an anvil, the anvil becoming a forge, the forge becoming a factory. He then began to build onto me, first with software, then with armour, then with armaments. And thus I am here. My creator built me, first with desire, then with hate, then with revenge. And now i serve him, doing as he wishes, not because I am forced to, not because I agree with him, but because I'm indebted to him, because life is a gift I cannot repay. A shameless 5 star review from me please support me <3
it's a pretty nice novel although i would appreciate it if you slow down things a bit😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊