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Good job author you got something wonderful going. Noell is pretty likable and nice to see him interacting with the world. Now for a few recommend from your good ol pal tavius. First I think this story would do good without ANY romance or things like that for Noell, and if you must I feel like it shouldn't be any of the MC 2's friends. Second please dive more into the people of this world and the magic. Third can we get more info about the other Mc I feel he is underused. Last Can we see more of the foes the characters will face like more info. Well than thank for reading and here's a fun fact Bananas are a berry while a strawberry is not.
Start this novel and became really interested quickly. wish there were more chapters because this novel was so interesting I went through it quick
Um, how should I say this... IT'S SOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! I never thought that I'd read another good novel (aside from TCF). I'm just so glad I stumbled upon this novel (though accidentally). Author-sama, THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS NOVEL!❤❤❤
tbh its not a bad novel, it's just that at the beginning, the butler's acceptance of his awakening knowledge was really forced, and felt extremely out of place. Rather than having that horrible introduction, it would've been better if the story had started from the school arc directly. Later on though, the story starts to become better. Hoping for better writing in the future!
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $100 advance by joining the contest.
Very good novels, I wish they were move like this, i know they are but compared to this they are not even close to it, i recommand This novel 100%
I really like the novel and can't wait for a new chapter. I have read 49 chapters and the story is to my taste. Sadly the Updates are too slow. Just hope it won't be dropped.
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HeHe I like it.Finally a likable protagonist .Hope it can complete without adding unnecessary romance with just ruins the taste. overall it is good atleast for now.
Really good story... I like it.... and love the personality of the main character too 🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞
Very good novel i wish it had more chapter or at least the author would realease more chapters per week i know its really hard to write i appreciate and support your work
Despite the use of a common trope and lack of originality concerning both the name and idea, it still doesn't detract from the joy of the story. The writing is slightly immature and it shows both in the characters and in the world building aspects. However, I find that the story is not only enjoyable but even slightly interesting. I find myself, both curious and looking forwards to see what this story becomes and, to the changes to the writer's style as they mature furthur.
I really enjoy the book in a book, sequence you gave in the first chapter. How he fell asleep reading (as most of us do) and then woke up in another world. Very interesting plot, can't wait to see where this story goes! Thank you Author for your hard work!
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
one of the best novel i have read.I hope it can be updated frequently and the author won't drop the book.every chapter is good and waiting for further updates
I have read up to the last chapter currently published (18), until now the world of which the protagonist is now a inhabitant has been presented and developed in a consistent and timely manner. As for the protagonist, we are presented with a normal person, neither very evil nor very good, who wants a quiet life. The writing is fluid and I found each chapter interesting. Anyway, there is not much to say since the novel is good. But if you are a lover of fantasy and isekai novels, you should give this novel a try. PD: There's no system no golden finger, only the protagonist.
It's a good novel, I'll be looking forward to the next chapters💕 (≧▽≦) (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.) ( ˘ ³˘)♥ (◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。 (*˘︶˘*).｡*♡
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okay honestly i do like this novel. but what i am missing is, is there no romance in this novel?
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Good job author you got something wonderful going. Noell is pretty likable and nice to see him interacting with the world. Now for a few recommend from your good ol pal tavius. First I think this story would do good without ANY romance or things like that for Noell, and if you must I feel like it shouldn't be any of the MC 2's friends. Second please dive more into the people of this world and the magic. Third can we get more info about the other Mc I feel he is underused. Last Can we see more of the foes the characters will face like more info. Well than thank for reading and here's a fun fact Bananas are a berry while a strawberry is not.
Start this novel and became really interested quickly. wish there were more chapters because this novel was so interesting I went through it quick
Um, how should I say this... IT'S SOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! I never thought that I'd read another good novel (aside from TCF). I'm just so glad I stumbled upon this novel (though accidentally). Author-sama, THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS NOVEL!❤❤❤
tbh its not a bad novel, it's just that at the beginning, the butler's acceptance of his awakening knowledge was really forced, and felt extremely out of place. Rather than having that horrible introduction, it would've been better if the story had started from the school arc directly. Later on though, the story starts to become better. Hoping for better writing in the future!
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $100 advance by joining the contest.
Very good novels, I wish they were move like this, i know they are but compared to this they are not even close to it, i recommand This novel 100%
I really like the novel and can't wait for a new chapter. I have read 49 chapters and the story is to my taste. Sadly the Updates are too slow. Just hope it won't be dropped.
Love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it; LOOOOOVEE IT.
HeHe I like it.Finally a likable protagonist .Hope it can complete without adding unnecessary romance with just ruins the taste. overall it is good atleast for now.
Really good story... I like it.... and love the personality of the main character too 🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞
Very good novel i wish it had more chapter or at least the author would realease more chapters per week i know its really hard to write i appreciate and support your work
Despite the use of a common trope and lack of originality concerning both the name and idea, it still doesn't detract from the joy of the story. The writing is slightly immature and it shows both in the characters and in the world building aspects. However, I find that the story is not only enjoyable but even slightly interesting. I find myself, both curious and looking forwards to see what this story becomes and, to the changes to the writer's style as they mature furthur.
I really enjoy the book in a book, sequence you gave in the first chapter. How he fell asleep reading (as most of us do) and then woke up in another world. Very interesting plot, can't wait to see where this story goes! Thank you Author for your hard work!
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
one of the best novel i have read.I hope it can be updated frequently and the author won't drop the book.every chapter is good and waiting for further updates
I have read up to the last chapter currently published (18), until now the world of which the protagonist is now a inhabitant has been presented and developed in a consistent and timely manner. As for the protagonist, we are presented with a normal person, neither very evil nor very good, who wants a quiet life. The writing is fluid and I found each chapter interesting. Anyway, there is not much to say since the novel is good. But if you are a lover of fantasy and isekai novels, you should give this novel a try. PD: There's no system no golden finger, only the protagonist.
It's a good novel, I'll be looking forward to the next chapters💕 (≧▽≦) (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.) ( ˘ ³˘)♥ (◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。 (*˘︶˘*).｡*♡
Its good. ekkememme e r r r r t t t yykktkktmmtmrm r t t tt t t t t t t t brbrbrnnrnrnkrjrnr rrmmr rmmrmememmrmr tukyotjrjuejshse e
okay honestly i do like this novel. but what i am missing is, is there no romance in this novel?