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First of all ty for an amazing new novel. Mc develops fast and logical while keeping a firm stance and stands true to what he values. Fighting is very intersting cause he start at nothing and therefore has to show how fast he can adept and learn to deal with every situation. With a certain help ofc. Good job author
So it has been a while since i started reading this series and so far it is great the world building is good showing aspects overtime and showing the universe ring and earth and how the two worlds affect one another. Another aspect I like is Nero and his reincarnation which instead of a typical future self take past self body it is the future self acting like a guide to nero who does not give everything and only hints and some explanations and is an interesting take on the concept and adds to the diversity of ideas in the series. Another part i like is the skill system with the mastery to increase its power instead if just levelling up and not really mastering it fully. I also liked how he was affected by his mothers coMa and how he would have been a hollow shell fighting and killing and also how it had lasting affects like making him colder to others around him. So if you want something new to read try this
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2 Questions: 1) Is this novel the same as the bew version? 2) Where can I find the new version?
Abosultely one of my favorite stories of all time. it's well-paced, in depth and effectively creates a new world. I just hope it updates soon as it looks to be frozen at chapter 405😭😍
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
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am I to assume this is just book one of a trilogy because the ending doesn't feel great so to say. otherwise I loved the novel though the harem could of been fleshed out beffer
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did this novel transfer to other account (i am thinking too much from XxEagle NightxX) ....................................................................
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Its a good LN but horrendously long waits for updates which take away from the quality of the LN itself
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This novel has a very interesting premise and pretty good characterisation and world building. Although slow moving at times the author does realise that and speeds the plot up accordingly to not get stuck on a certain part too long. I have not read the story in a long while(reread it today) since the very slow update schedule was pretty annoying considering how good the novel is. But i do understand the author has a life and jobs other than the novel, would really love to read more. Hope you all the best .
I must admit that these an original story well conceived but I'm sorry to say that you make a story based on a single goal saving her mother from a so-called disease of which nothing is known and whether humanity can actually cure her or not these due to the lack of relevant information at first instead of focusing on the essentials. What saddens me the most these why you want to make a one-piece style story that never ends because no matter the one-piece type story all The endings will look sloppy because of all the plotholes its would have been better to make his mother a goal for 1 arc and then change for another but not the the objective is to find an object that is supposed to fulfill the wishes, these the dumbest thing to do especially in order to save someone sick after all you want to tell me that he will find it after only some month of research while the others one searches for a long time how his mother will live until then.To finish this story could have been serious if the objective had not been so childish I know that you supposedly want to show us the determination of the MC to save his mother but the "quest for the one piece" turn it into a stupid joke from my point of view
Dropping this, Author couldn't decide between a reincarnation novel, and a system novel, so took the cons of both and rolled with it as the premise of the opening chapters.
Its a very good book overall. Nothing to crItize. Grammer is good and is able to be read at a snooth pace. Plot is interesting and the only flaw is the updates. Would be nice to have a chapter everyday.
this is not a novel this is a piece of art, like seriously, I find this well done, the way of the writing, the way the author describes the characters+envirement, just from reading the first 10 chapters I can feel that the author had spent an amount of time proofreading and writing this chills, literally chill when the author described the fighting scenes. I'm shocked by how this novel is written, also alarmed of how this novel isn't on the top 5, I did read all the novels on the top 15 but no one amongst them is delightful as this one How author? how are you this unlucky? vampire system =trash I smell a conspiracy
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After reading this novel I can only hope that the author keeps it going because it is addictive. If you were looking for a novel worth your time then my you have come to the right place. The world building is amazing and if it does not convince you to stay the main character will.
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It's amazing and I couldn't ask for anything more. The story help pass the time and can easily keep your attention, it's great for sitting on the couch, chilling on your bed or even if you are on a long car ride.
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All is good but I always feels uncomfortable thinking a future you is always on your side observing and makes things feels like pointless because he already done the same. Also a walking spoiler-ish dude that is also you by your side all the time kinda, dunno how I feel about it.
This is just bad . it's SUPER SLOW , TOO MANY UN-IMPORTANT DETAILS, i had a bitter taste while reading it so , Nah not really worth it in my POV :c
The book is pretty good and interesting. I would recommend to others, but it is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone..............
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This is the best novel about time travel/reincarnated back into the MC's young self I've been currently reading so far but it's unique unlike other reincarnation novels. The novel is full of humorous things. The author knows how to hide the plots and the author knows how to go with the trends. And lastly you can interact with the author. If there's something you don't know and you have a question, the author will respond which shows that the author wants to know some of your opinions and did not want the readers to be left in the air hanging around.
This book has very good writing, a unique story, the characters seem pretty good so far and I like the pacing. So far this seems like it will be on my list of really good Webnovel’s and if it ever costs spirit stones to unlock chapters I’ll pay for every single one. Hope this author gets support for his works and gets more recognition as he clearly puts in work to make his idea’s and execute them. A lot of stories and art today are just words and cliche but it’s stories like this that evoke the imagination that I consider to truly be a work of art. The story has only 50 chapters so far but I’m giving such a good review because this story has a good foundation and the author clearly loves it enough for me to have faith that it will continue to be good. I have depression and there’s not very many things I enjoy and so I have to thank this author for his passion.
First of all ty for an amazing new novel. Mc develops fast and logical while keeping a firm stance and stands true to what he values. Fighting is very intersting cause he start at nothing and therefore has to show how fast he can adept and learn to deal with every situation. With a certain help ofc. Good job author
So it has been a while since i started reading this series and so far it is great the world building is good showing aspects overtime and showing the universe ring and earth and how the two worlds affect one another. Another aspect I like is Nero and his reincarnation which instead of a typical future self take past self body it is the future self acting like a guide to nero who does not give everything and only hints and some explanations and is an interesting take on the concept and adds to the diversity of ideas in the series. Another part i like is the skill system with the mastery to increase its power instead if just levelling up and not really mastering it fully. I also liked how he was affected by his mothers coMa and how he would have been a hollow shell fighting and killing and also how it had lasting affects like making him colder to others around him. So if you want something new to read try this
揭示劇透 2 Questions: 1) Is this novel the same as the bew version? 2) Where can I find the new version?
Abosultely one of my favorite stories of all time. it's well-paced, in depth and effectively creates a new world. I just hope it updates soon as it looks to be frozen at chapter 405😭😍
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
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am I to assume this is just book one of a trilogy because the ending doesn't feel great so to say. otherwise I loved the novel though the harem could of been fleshed out beffer
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
did this novel transfer to other account (i am thinking too much from XxEagle NightxX) ....................................................................
Good!!!!!!!!!!! Good!!!!!!!!!!! Good!!!!!!!!!!! Good!!!!!!!!!!! Good!!!!!!!!!!! Good!!!!!!!!!!! Good!!!!!!!!!!! Good!!!!!!!!!!! Good!!!!!!!!!!!
Its a good LN but horrendously long waits for updates which take away from the quality of the LN itself
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This novel has a very interesting premise and pretty good characterisation and world building. Although slow moving at times the author does realise that and speeds the plot up accordingly to not get stuck on a certain part too long. I have not read the story in a long while(reread it today) since the very slow update schedule was pretty annoying considering how good the novel is. But i do understand the author has a life and jobs other than the novel, would really love to read more. Hope you all the best .
I must admit that these an original story well conceived but I'm sorry to say that you make a story based on a single goal saving her mother from a so-called disease of which nothing is known and whether humanity can actually cure her or not these due to the lack of relevant information at first instead of focusing on the essentials. What saddens me the most these why you want to make a one-piece style story that never ends because no matter the one-piece type story all The endings will look sloppy because of all the plotholes its would have been better to make his mother a goal for 1 arc and then change for another but not the the objective is to find an object that is supposed to fulfill the wishes, these the dumbest thing to do especially in order to save someone sick after all you want to tell me that he will find it after only some month of research while the others one searches for a long time how his mother will live until then.To finish this story could have been serious if the objective had not been so childish I know that you supposedly want to show us the determination of the MC to save his mother but the "quest for the one piece" turn it into a stupid joke from my point of view
Dropping this, Author couldn't decide between a reincarnation novel, and a system novel, so took the cons of both and rolled with it as the premise of the opening chapters.
Its a very good book overall. Nothing to crItize. Grammer is good and is able to be read at a snooth pace. Plot is interesting and the only flaw is the updates. Would be nice to have a chapter everyday.
this is not a novel this is a piece of art, like seriously, I find this well done, the way of the writing, the way the author describes the characters+envirement, just from reading the first 10 chapters I can feel that the author had spent an amount of time proofreading and writing this chills, literally chill when the author described the fighting scenes. I'm shocked by how this novel is written, also alarmed of how this novel isn't on the top 5, I did read all the novels on the top 15 but no one amongst them is delightful as this one How author? how are you this unlucky? vampire system =trash I smell a conspiracy
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After reading this novel I can only hope that the author keeps it going because it is addictive. If you were looking for a novel worth your time then my you have come to the right place. The world building is amazing and if it does not convince you to stay the main character will.
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It's amazing and I couldn't ask for anything more. The story help pass the time and can easily keep your attention, it's great for sitting on the couch, chilling on your bed or even if you are on a long car ride.
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All is good but I always feels uncomfortable thinking a future you is always on your side observing and makes things feels like pointless because he already done the same. Also a walking spoiler-ish dude that is also you by your side all the time kinda, dunno how I feel about it.
This is just bad . it's SUPER SLOW , TOO MANY UN-IMPORTANT DETAILS, i had a bitter taste while reading it so , Nah not really worth it in my POV :c
The book is pretty good and interesting. I would recommend to others, but it is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone..............
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This is the best novel about time travel/reincarnated back into the MC's young self I've been currently reading so far but it's unique unlike other reincarnation novels. The novel is full of humorous things. The author knows how to hide the plots and the author knows how to go with the trends. And lastly you can interact with the author. If there's something you don't know and you have a question, the author will respond which shows that the author wants to know some of your opinions and did not want the readers to be left in the air hanging around.
This book has very good writing, a unique story, the characters seem pretty good so far and I like the pacing. So far this seems like it will be on my list of really good Webnovel’s and if it ever costs spirit stones to unlock chapters I’ll pay for every single one. Hope this author gets support for his works and gets more recognition as he clearly puts in work to make his idea’s and execute them. A lot of stories and art today are just words and cliche but it’s stories like this that evoke the imagination that I consider to truly be a work of art. The story has only 50 chapters so far but I’m giving such a good review because this story has a good foundation and the author clearly loves it enough for me to have faith that it will continue to be good. I have depression and there’s not very many things I enjoy and so I have to thank this author for his passion.