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good stories come from good writers too... for mba nicks... keep the spirit to keep producing good works...[img=update][img=update][img=update]
My favorite novel that I always wait for updates because the story is good and makes me feel like I'm in the story ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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come on Daniel you have to survive, because you have beautiful dokter by your side... [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
like this story. Daniel the grumpy who finally fell for the charm of Dhenisa who incidentally is the child of the woman Daniel loves❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
I think this story will have a lot of tears, because he is still can not forget women his loves... so it must be interesting for reading ... lots of love 😘💕
this is my favorite novel... I always waiting for update.. I support you Author.. recomended always ...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Uncle Daniel n Dhenisa cute..... I like it... thanks nick mom, you give me good novel to reading now... love you full....😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍
Daniel n Dhenisa in english version.... i like it .... i like it ..😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I can't believe there are stories that are so sad and tearful, 😭😭😭 I hope this story has a happy ending. I like u author always ...❤️❤️❤️❤️
I like this story, very nice and story sad...😭😭😭[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hey ... I'm here with Nickscart again with a story that touches your hearts more Read it with your heart so you won't realize you are crying. Hopefully with this story you will like it. And please forgive me if my language is not good ... please understand.
I really like your story when asked "Do you like this story?" I'll definitely answer I really like this it's really good please the author, this story makes me really moved my feelings are so random
please the author, this story makes me really moved my feelings are so random[img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins]
The synopsis is extremely interesting. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait for more uploads. Characters are relatable and I grew fond of them as the story developed. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]
The story is very exciting, the characters fit the story .. it makes emotions go up and down irregularly explode "like a bomb ... keep up and have the spirit to work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Uan9 ini ju9a kereeennnn kk, Mafia-mafia 9itu... aku syukaaaaaa.....aku syukaaa ❤️🥰😍😘[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Kak Nicks pinter banget membawa cerita yang tidak bisa di tebak ke mana ceritanya tiap karakter pas sekali buat hati termehek-mehek ❤️❤️❤️❤️
selanjutnya ceritanya bagaimana bunda, Jangan di gantung terus dengan ceritanya bunda,,, penasaran banget dengan next ceritanya yang on going semua,,,,,
Pengen nangis, ketawa, sedih, marah, jengkel hanya pas baca novel bunda Nicks selalu nano" di buatnya... semangat bunda nicks[img=update][img=update]
Kak Nicks pinter banget membawa cerita yang tidak bisa di tebak ke mana ceritanya tiap karakter pas sekali buat hati termehek-mehek ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Lanjutkan dong ceritanya bunda, bagus banget ceritanya.... langsung pada ending juga bagus bunda...recomen untuk masuk daftar pustaka... cerita hampir sama dengan dunia nyata...m
Tiap hari yang aku tunggu update dari semua cerita kak Nicks,,,, update terus dong kak Nicks,,, semuanya belum selesai kak,,,tapi aku selalu menanti
sepertinya cerita beda dengan yg lainnya, ada bau kekerasan dan Mafia di sini pasti seru ceritanya ya say... up lagi say biar tidak penasaran
Baca nino**is pnasaran thor aku tunggu bab lnjutnya agak byk 🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯
Tiap hari yang aku tunggu update dari semua cerita kak Nicks,,,, update terus dong kak Nicks,,, semuanya belum selesai kak,,,tapi aku selalu menanti
Ceritanya bgus syg msih belum full satu bab nya di lanjut diing kk biar bisa baca terus😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
top banget ceritanya, tapi babnya kurang byk bunda, penasaran kelanjutannya Maharani tertembak tidak di tengah-tengah baku hantam tembakan 🤔🤔🤔
Awal cerita sudah menarik. Tapi sayang ceritanya belum selesai, masih nanggung. Semoga author bisa segera up babnya ya. Semangat tuk sang author
please update more often[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
good stories come from good writers too... for mba nicks... keep the spirit to keep producing good works...[img=update][img=update][img=update]
My favorite novel that I always wait for updates because the story is good and makes me feel like I'm in the story ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
ter♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗
come on Daniel you have to survive, because you have beautiful dokter by your side... [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
like this story. Daniel the grumpy who finally fell for the charm of Dhenisa who incidentally is the child of the woman Daniel loves❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
I think this story will have a lot of tears, because he is still can not forget women his loves... so it must be interesting for reading ... lots of love 😘💕
this is my favorite novel... I always waiting for update.. I support you Author.. recomended always ...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Uncle Daniel n Dhenisa cute..... I like it... thanks nick mom, you give me good novel to reading now... love you full....😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍
Daniel n Dhenisa in english version.... i like it .... i like it ..😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I can't believe there are stories that are so sad and tearful, 😭😭😭 I hope this story has a happy ending. I like u author always ...❤️❤️❤️❤️
I like this story, very nice and story sad...😭😭😭[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hey ... I'm here with Nickscart again with a story that touches your hearts more Read it with your heart so you won't realize you are crying. Hopefully with this story you will like it. And please forgive me if my language is not good ... please understand.
I really like your story when asked "Do you like this story?" I'll definitely answer I really like this it's really good please the author, this story makes me really moved my feelings are so random
please the author, this story makes me really moved my feelings are so random[img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins]
The synopsis is extremely interesting. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait for more uploads. Characters are relatable and I grew fond of them as the story developed. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]
The story is very exciting, the characters fit the story .. it makes emotions go up and down irregularly explode "like a bomb ... keep up and have the spirit to work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Uan9 ini ju9a kereeennnn kk, Mafia-mafia 9itu... aku syukaaaaaa.....aku syukaaa ❤️🥰😍😘[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Kak Nicks pinter banget membawa cerita yang tidak bisa di tebak ke mana ceritanya tiap karakter pas sekali buat hati termehek-mehek ❤️❤️❤️❤️
selanjutnya ceritanya bagaimana bunda, Jangan di gantung terus dengan ceritanya bunda,,, penasaran banget dengan next ceritanya yang on going semua,,,,,
Pengen nangis, ketawa, sedih, marah, jengkel hanya pas baca novel bunda Nicks selalu nano" di buatnya... semangat bunda nicks[img=update][img=update]
Kak Nicks pinter banget membawa cerita yang tidak bisa di tebak ke mana ceritanya tiap karakter pas sekali buat hati termehek-mehek ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Lanjutkan dong ceritanya bunda, bagus banget ceritanya.... langsung pada ending juga bagus bunda...recomen untuk masuk daftar pustaka... cerita hampir sama dengan dunia nyata...m
Tiap hari yang aku tunggu update dari semua cerita kak Nicks,,,, update terus dong kak Nicks,,, semuanya belum selesai kak,,,tapi aku selalu menanti
sepertinya cerita beda dengan yg lainnya, ada bau kekerasan dan Mafia di sini pasti seru ceritanya ya say... up lagi say biar tidak penasaran
Baca nino**is pnasaran thor aku tunggu bab lnjutnya agak byk 🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯🔯
Tiap hari yang aku tunggu update dari semua cerita kak Nicks,,,, update terus dong kak Nicks,,, semuanya belum selesai kak,,,tapi aku selalu menanti
Ceritanya bgus syg msih belum full satu bab nya di lanjut diing kk biar bisa baca terus😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
top banget ceritanya, tapi babnya kurang byk bunda, penasaran kelanjutannya Maharani tertembak tidak di tengah-tengah baku hantam tembakan 🤔🤔🤔
Awal cerita sudah menarik. Tapi sayang ceritanya belum selesai, masih nanggung. Semoga author bisa segera up babnya ya. Semangat tuk sang author
please update more often[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]