Reviews of Harry Potter: The Merlin's Apprentice by Rajesh_behura - Webnovel

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DaoistTimeEnder

This is not an original work, but in the description, you clearly mentioned that it was not your original work. HOWEVER, you MUST properly give credit where credit is due by stating the original title and author AT THE BEGINNING of your description. Otherwise, like all the reviews are saying, they will think you stole it. Also, be sure to get permission from the author to continue their work. If they say no, write your own stuff and cite the story as an influence. If yes, clearly mention it. Until then, this will remain a 1 star review.

4yr
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Uncle_Sheogorath

How pathetic can you be to copy someones else work?! You are worse than shameless you are a piece of dog sh*t. At least before copying the work, you could of let us known that you transferred it from fanfiction net site or something but noooo.... you trick people into thinking it's your own work. Pathetic!!

4yr
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xVii
LV 4 Badge

From Fanfiction`net forgot the title though not an original -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep

4yr
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smyp
LV 11 Badge

This is very well written and I for one hope that this story will continue. The author made a amazing story that I don't want to spoil at all for anyone.

4yr
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Zendaran

Stolen from bluezz-17 on FF “Harry Potter , Rise From Dust” . Write your own Stuff .

4yr
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SAM_NZ_1127

BECAME ONE OF MY FAVOURITE HARRY POTTER FANFICTIONS , THE MOMENT I READ THE FIRST FEW CHAPTRRS . PLEASE CONTINUE IT TO IT'S COMPLETION. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED TO READ.

4yr
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MIKK
LV 11 Badge

I knew I read this before! This isn't the writers own work - he took it from fanfiction.net. The real writer is called Bluezz-17 and the original work is called Harry Potter, Rise From Dust. I thought this was an original at the start, but I slowly began to remember this story due to it being one of the only ones with the 4 love interests. Stop posting.

4yr
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Will_Caruso

Very nice. The story was quite marvelous in many aspects: the grammar is by far better than most of the novels on this site, Story progression is a bit slow to my taste but it is more than tolerable. In addition, the idea of making Harry more grey is simply brilliant. I think the updates are great in batch form; however, I know that it won't last, art can not be rushed, thus I will wait. In conclusion, this fan fiction is simply brilliant. Nevertheless, I suggest you wait off till more chapter releases, else the suspense will most likely kill you slowly and painfully.

4yr
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amaturewriter

Harry has asshole parents, he fixes relationships with em, despite them being neglect assholes, same with bro...as for the rest, its nice,,,decently long chps, well written, and proper plot. Low stars cause this is a generic goody goody neglect style FF with forgiving MC, plus the drama in this is cliche [C4...I read this exact event in atleast 6 different HP FF's alone, and thats ignoring other FF's. movies, etc].....so yah, if ya read this, well be prepared

4yr
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DaoistTimeEnder

This is not an original work, but in the description, you clearly mentioned that it was not your original work. HOWEVER, you MUST properly give credit where credit is due by stating the original title and author AT THE BEGINNING of your description. Otherwise, like all the reviews are saying, they will think you stole it. Also, be sure to get permission from the author to continue their work. If they say no, write your own stuff and cite the story as an influence. If yes, clearly mention it. Until then, this will remain a 1 star review.

4yr
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Uncle_Sheogorath

How pathetic can you be to copy someones else work?! You are worse than shameless you are a piece of dog sh*t. At least before copying the work, you could of let us known that you transferred it from fanfiction net site or something but noooo.... you trick people into thinking it's your own work. Pathetic!!

4yr
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xVii
LV 4 Badge

From Fanfiction`net forgot the title though not an original -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep -rep

4yr
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smyp
LV 11 Badge

This is very well written and I for one hope that this story will continue. The author made a amazing story that I don't want to spoil at all for anyone.

4yr
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Zendaran

Stolen from bluezz-17 on FF “Harry Potter , Rise From Dust” . Write your own Stuff .

4yr
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SAM_NZ_1127

BECAME ONE OF MY FAVOURITE HARRY POTTER FANFICTIONS , THE MOMENT I READ THE FIRST FEW CHAPTRRS . PLEASE CONTINUE IT TO IT'S COMPLETION. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED TO READ.

4yr
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MIKK
LV 11 Badge

I knew I read this before! This isn't the writers own work - he took it from fanfiction.net. The real writer is called Bluezz-17 and the original work is called Harry Potter, Rise From Dust. I thought this was an original at the start, but I slowly began to remember this story due to it being one of the only ones with the 4 love interests. Stop posting.

4yr
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Will_Caruso

Very nice. The story was quite marvelous in many aspects: the grammar is by far better than most of the novels on this site, Story progression is a bit slow to my taste but it is more than tolerable. In addition, the idea of making Harry more grey is simply brilliant. I think the updates are great in batch form; however, I know that it won't last, art can not be rushed, thus I will wait. In conclusion, this fan fiction is simply brilliant. Nevertheless, I suggest you wait off till more chapter releases, else the suspense will most likely kill you slowly and painfully.

4yr
查看1條回復
amaturewriter

Harry has asshole parents, he fixes relationships with em, despite them being neglect assholes, same with bro...as for the rest, its nice,,,decently long chps, well written, and proper plot. Low stars cause this is a generic goody goody neglect style FF with forgiving MC, plus the drama in this is cliche [C4...I read this exact event in atleast 6 different HP FF's alone, and thats ignoring other FF's. movies, etc].....so yah, if ya read this, well be prepared

4yr
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