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This was a really good read I can’t wait to read the next chapter! Curious about the man with red eyes.. and about what the town looks like. So far so good
This is great! I feel like there could be some improvement on describing the characters. What does Azalea look like? Other than that this novel is a great read!
I really liked reading this novel! The story is entertaining and keeps me engaged. Can’t wait for the next chapter! [img=update][img=update]
I loved the story development, characters, and the theming of this novel. This story has some true potential. Highly recommend reading this novel.
This was a really good read I can’t wait to read the next chapter! Curious about the man with red eyes.. and about what the town looks like. So far so good
This is great! I feel like there could be some improvement on describing the characters. What does Azalea look like? Other than that this novel is a great read!
I really liked reading this novel! The story is entertaining and keeps me engaged. Can’t wait for the next chapter! [img=update][img=update]
I loved the story development, characters, and the theming of this novel. This story has some true potential. Highly recommend reading this novel.