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a very good intake on what the magic in the hp universe could accomplish while most mc go for the world dominion route this one went the explortion and creation route i was always more interrested in the science victory than conquest victory in the civ games so this novel quite hit the spot so GG
I have read at least 5 times all the fanfictions from Burnable. Top Five author for me :)
This 📖 was sooooo good I had to go 🔙 and read it again. I loved how it builds and still make sense. I just could not put it down because once you start it becomes addictive.
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An interesting take on the Harry Potter brand. The need for the mc to change the story is awesome. The extra side info. brought into the story is entertaining, Thank you.
enjoyed n loved it!! don't know why this fanfic isn't getti g the attention it deserves........................................................
This is one of the best fanfic I have ever read, thank you Mr. Author for your great story and the dedication to actually finish it. I suggest that you read this.
Fantastic! Loved this story. ..........................................................................................................
This isn't a story about Harry Potter defeating Voldemort. This is a story about Harry learning to live, having something to live for, and deciding to make the Wizarding World a place he wouldn't be afraid to have children in. There is some tension and drama, a lot of humor, and quite a lot of scientific exploration of the possibilities presented by magic. But for the most part the focus is Harry becoming a person willing to feel love and be loved in return.
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Another excellent story. The harem wasnt horrible and it was a lot of fun watchIng harry invent new things. I especially liked what he did with Riddle
Didn't disappoint. Loved how the story flowed. Really enjoyed reading it. So I really like to thank the author for such work. Looking forward to the next one.
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Sehr gut. Ich liebe diese Geschichte und generell ein gute Empfehlung an alle die polygamie Fans sind. Und Fans von Zeitreisen bzw reincarnation sind.
Eine logische Geschichte mit Wissenschaft Magie in Verbindung. Und noch mit Wiedergeburt. Mein Traum, nach sowas habe ich schon lange gesucht. Schön geschrieben und ich liebe es.
I love it. Exactly what I was looking for. ...................................................................................................
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One of the best fanfics I ever read. Absolutely amazing. Really enjoyed theS tarwars stuff that was included to. I fell like its even better when you think of the Prometheus looking like a star destroyer.
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It was interesting at the start and had a lot of potential but the moment he told dumbledore about him coming from the future is a moment i lost all interest in this novel. There is one outcome in this situation knowing dumblefuck personality and it's called OBLIVIATE.
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This novel is Very well written, HP fan-fic which unlike other fan-fics does not focus on fighting voldy or dark dumbledore. Harry is already op and has a completely new and different outlook towards the magic world. Characters are lovable and harry is much more intelligent and laid back, he research many different things (Including space travel) and have true friends(not like that idiot ron). The chapters are huge and i mean HUGE i think a normal author could fit around 8-10 chapters in here easily so think of it as 200+ chapter novel and till now author have managed to keep a decent release stability. Just dear author PLEASE don't drop this novel, it is a gem and i would recommend it to all hp fans.
This is one of THE best Harry Potter fanfics out there. Nothing else is needed, just read it.
Absolutely loved the novel.... Although the chapters were a bit lengthy, but I will agree that it was most enjoyable. Thanks for this fan fic 👍
A really well written story focusing on all the possibilities of magic and how it interacts with the "mundane" world. Masterful use of concepts and theories to invent and reinvent the wheel to show progress. Would have liked a psychological chapter to show Harry's progress A recommended read
Definitely an author with a very active imagination. In a good way. Was a great read. Also the chapters are very long, so don’t underestimate the somewhat low amount of chapters. Chapters are comparable to 6 or more of most other authors chapters length ❤️❤️
Amazing story! Kinda OP Harry who has a brain and mix science and magic. The possible crossover with Stargate series just adds the cherry to the cake!
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Writing Quality ~5 Stability of Updating ~5 Story Development ~3 Character Design ~2 World Background ~1 Here is my Review: The First two are self-explanatory, like usual! Story Development: The Story is generally really good but we skipped 7 years and a few months in 1 Chapter, seems a bit rushed even when the Chapters are really really long! You could have skipped a few months ever so often and tell what the Mc was doing ! We don't know anything of what happend in the 6 years between Anyway..... And the Telekinese is bull**** ! As If everybody has Telekinese but no one knows of it. It would have been Discoverd long before Harry! It makes No Sense at all. It would be okay If he were the only one to have it but he tells every Person he met how to get it ( close people but he nevertheless tells it nearly everyone he knows). Character Design : Well, I can't see how the Mc is our Harry Potter . The Mc is suddenly intelligent, Scheming etc etc . He is a Gentelman out of nowhere and intends to get a Harem ......the Harry I knew didn't even have the guts to Talk to girl... Then there is Ron, I don't like Ron, mind you but Ron is Harry's friend for 7 years and Harry knows him very well. And Harry suddenly calls Ron " a son of a Bitch" and tells him that he won't Talk to him ever again" And the best is, IT's because the Halloween Event that already happend before in the Life before this . He knew Ron's character ......and he acts like Ron has rape his mother, not like that's possible .... Snape is also written badly, like that's not Snape in any way ! Snape is a calm Person..and not whatever the Snape in this Fanfic is . World Background: It's HP ! Would have been 5 -Stars , I mean what is there to complain about but your Telekinese Made the World Background to 0% Review End! Ps: Keep in mind that I only read to Chapter 2, also English isn't my mother language!
Second time reading but it’s always an enjoyable read. Could use an epilogue but it ended just fine for me. But I like oddly specific plot points about world building. Like economic, businesses, etc.
a very good intake on what the magic in the hp universe could accomplish while most mc go for the world dominion route this one went the explortion and creation route i was always more interrested in the science victory than conquest victory in the civ games so this novel quite hit the spot so GG
I have read at least 5 times all the fanfictions from Burnable. Top Five author for me :)
This 📖 was sooooo good I had to go 🔙 and read it again. I loved how it builds and still make sense. I just could not put it down because once you start it becomes addictive.
Super.......................................................................................................................................
An interesting take on the Harry Potter brand. The need for the mc to change the story is awesome. The extra side info. brought into the story is entertaining, Thank you.
enjoyed n loved it!! don't know why this fanfic isn't getti g the attention it deserves........................................................
This is one of the best fanfic I have ever read, thank you Mr. Author for your great story and the dedication to actually finish it. I suggest that you read this.
Fantastic! Loved this story. ..........................................................................................................
This isn't a story about Harry Potter defeating Voldemort. This is a story about Harry learning to live, having something to live for, and deciding to make the Wizarding World a place he wouldn't be afraid to have children in. There is some tension and drama, a lot of humor, and quite a lot of scientific exploration of the possibilities presented by magic. But for the most part the focus is Harry becoming a person willing to feel love and be loved in return.
exp..........................................................................................................................................
Another excellent story. The harem wasnt horrible and it was a lot of fun watchIng harry invent new things. I especially liked what he did with Riddle
Didn't disappoint. Loved how the story flowed. Really enjoyed reading it. So I really like to thank the author for such work. Looking forward to the next one.
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Sehr gut. Ich liebe diese Geschichte und generell ein gute Empfehlung an alle die polygamie Fans sind. Und Fans von Zeitreisen bzw reincarnation sind.
Eine logische Geschichte mit Wissenschaft Magie in Verbindung. Und noch mit Wiedergeburt. Mein Traum, nach sowas habe ich schon lange gesucht. Schön geschrieben und ich liebe es.
I love it. Exactly what I was looking for. ...................................................................................................
😍...........................................................................................................................................🥰...........................................................................................................................................😘........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
One of the best fanfics I ever read. Absolutely amazing. Really enjoyed theS tarwars stuff that was included to. I fell like its even better when you think of the Prometheus looking like a star destroyer.
揭示劇透 It was interesting at the start and had a lot of potential but the moment he told dumbledore about him coming from the future is a moment i lost all interest in this novel. There is one outcome in this situation knowing dumblefuck personality and it's called OBLIVIATE.
揭示劇透 Perfect can't wait for more Perfect can't wait for more Perfect can't wait for more Perfect can't wait for more Perfect can't wait for more Perfect can't wait for more
This novel is Very well written, HP fan-fic which unlike other fan-fics does not focus on fighting voldy or dark dumbledore. Harry is already op and has a completely new and different outlook towards the magic world. Characters are lovable and harry is much more intelligent and laid back, he research many different things (Including space travel) and have true friends(not like that idiot ron). The chapters are huge and i mean HUGE i think a normal author could fit around 8-10 chapters in here easily so think of it as 200+ chapter novel and till now author have managed to keep a decent release stability. Just dear author PLEASE don't drop this novel, it is a gem and i would recommend it to all hp fans.
This is one of THE best Harry Potter fanfics out there. Nothing else is needed, just read it.
Absolutely loved the novel.... Although the chapters were a bit lengthy, but I will agree that it was most enjoyable. Thanks for this fan fic 👍
A really well written story focusing on all the possibilities of magic and how it interacts with the "mundane" world. Masterful use of concepts and theories to invent and reinvent the wheel to show progress. Would have liked a psychological chapter to show Harry's progress A recommended read
Definitely an author with a very active imagination. In a good way. Was a great read. Also the chapters are very long, so don’t underestimate the somewhat low amount of chapters. Chapters are comparable to 6 or more of most other authors chapters length ❤️❤️
Amazing story! Kinda OP Harry who has a brain and mix science and magic. The possible crossover with Stargate series just adds the cherry to the cake!
揭示劇透 Writing Quality ~5 Stability of Updating ~5 Story Development ~3 Character Design ~2 World Background ~1 Here is my Review: The First two are self-explanatory, like usual! Story Development: The Story is generally really good but we skipped 7 years and a few months in 1 Chapter, seems a bit rushed even when the Chapters are really really long! You could have skipped a few months ever so often and tell what the Mc was doing ! We don't know anything of what happend in the 6 years between Anyway..... And the Telekinese is bull**** ! As If everybody has Telekinese but no one knows of it. It would have been Discoverd long before Harry! It makes No Sense at all. It would be okay If he were the only one to have it but he tells every Person he met how to get it ( close people but he nevertheless tells it nearly everyone he knows). Character Design : Well, I can't see how the Mc is our Harry Potter . The Mc is suddenly intelligent, Scheming etc etc . He is a Gentelman out of nowhere and intends to get a Harem ......the Harry I knew didn't even have the guts to Talk to girl... Then there is Ron, I don't like Ron, mind you but Ron is Harry's friend for 7 years and Harry knows him very well. And Harry suddenly calls Ron " a son of a Bitch" and tells him that he won't Talk to him ever again" And the best is, IT's because the Halloween Event that already happend before in the Life before this . He knew Ron's character ......and he acts like Ron has rape his mother, not like that's possible .... Snape is also written badly, like that's not Snape in any way ! Snape is a calm Person..and not whatever the Snape in this Fanfic is . World Background: It's HP ! Would have been 5 -Stars , I mean what is there to complain about but your Telekinese Made the World Background to 0% Review End! Ps: Keep in mind that I only read to Chapter 2, also English isn't my mother language!
Second time reading but it’s always an enjoyable read. Could use an epilogue but it ended just fine for me. But I like oddly specific plot points about world building. Like economic, businesses, etc.