Battle Ready (Pokemon Fanfic)

LV 4

Seud

Tch, I was asked to make this review and I for some reason promised I would. The story is pretty interesting so far. Mc isn’t an overpowered, system using, horny all the time, dude who’s chasing skirts. So that’s a plus. I’ve already gotten some info that there will most likely only be two women for romance. Still a harem but not a big deal. I’ll expect gradual progression in the relationship though, not some 'Oh you’re hot so I like you now’, bs. World building could use some work. That’s it for my review.

LV 2

RecsOriginOfChaos

It's funny actually. Never expected to see my own story written by someone else and I damn sure never expected you to be even better at writing it then I ever was. Hats off to you good sir. Now give me another chapter!!! You have my full permission to continue forth with Vex Masters.

LV 2

SummaScriptor

I do have a few issues with this novel, not including the fact that its been passed around quite a few times. The beginning is basically a carbon copy of the first pokemon episode right down to the flock of Spearows which really lacks creativity. You could've at least changed a few things but I guess I can let it go for now. Other then a few other errors, this story truly is very well written and probably deserves a chance. Let me explain my reasoning. Writing Quality- Excellently written for a mere fanfic to the point where I'd say the author actually has a talent for storytelling. There are few grammatical errors and even then it doesn't take away from the phenomenal way the story is told. The writer truly knows how to draw a picture in my head and I commend him for that. 4 Stars Stability- A bit wonky so far but the sheer length of some of the chaps more then make up for it. Hope this improves as it goes along. I'm rooting for you author. 4 Stars Story Development- As I said before, the first ten chaps are just a revised version of the first episode. However, once you dive into it, for some reason you just can't stop. The actual plot of the story doesnt truly start until he meet ****** and learns why he was sent into the world. The plot starts to deviate from the main story and it really feels like a pokemon novel meant for all ages as the author isn't afraid to show the darker side of the pokemon world. 5 Stars Character Design- Not too much to say as of yet on this as it was only recent that we were introduced to characters besides Vex. However, the characters look to be promising as they actually serve use in helping Vex mature and grow. On the plus side, Vex isn't a horny **** that only knows lust and thinks with his dick. If there is romance, I think this fanfic will do it right (my personal opinion of course). World Background- Its pokemon but with a larger background then before. Its only brief, but each time the world is mentioned, governments and systems and laws for trainers are mentioned. Its great to see some realism in a pokemon novel for a change. 4 Stars Hope you enjoyed the review. I'll obviously update this as the story progresses more. Until then.

LV 2

AlphaGuardian

Author here. New and aspiring writer and artist who hopes to eventually turn this into a manga as well as fanart. You can support me by either donating Pat_reon or just bookmarking the novel. Voting also helps. Hope you enjoy the novel 😌😌😌😌

LV 4

Morkez

A well written story based in the Pokemon Universe with a unique take on battling and building up strength as well as a great party combination that makes all the chapters fun and interesting. A recommended read

LV 10

DarthVegito

Had potential but the MC is a full blown moron that it’s hard to even read. Doesn’t even take this new life serious at all which is idiotic since he’s almost died few times. He is in a new world and doesn’t bother listening or remembering everything that Professor Oak told him just about gyms and making money is what he remembers. Then for a whole chapter he just complains about being weak.... don’t waste your time