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I think it is my second time I give 5 out 5. I rarely do it. However, this story just is that good. The author spills imagination all over the place. Sarcasm, humor, intensity, and even mystery. All cooked up in an apocalyptic plot. I wouldn't believe that it could work out but it does work o_O! There are some typos here and there but I wouldn't bother. If you get paid, then you can hire someone to proofread it. The story is rich enough to make you ignore some misspellings. I love the main character so far and hope the author would not trash him with some banality. He is too unique to be stained lol! I have no criticism. For one, I am a new author and second - the world background (which I am obsessed with, in general) rocks. You make a solid world and I become your fan! This is how it works with me lol. Good job. I will keep the story in my library even after the review. (:
I read up to chapter 46. It's honestly a good book but just not to my taste. I don't mind a joke or 2 but when almost every paragraph have some type of trolling or cringe jokes it overwhelms the story. At least to me. Also if u hate lazy MC's (MC DOESNT STAY LAZY) then the beginning chapters are gonna be torture. Only reason this isn't a 5 star is because of the characters temperaments
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Horrible grammar, full of cliches and and also cringe i can't even think of how this one got high reviews 🤯 no offense but those reviews saying this is a very good story is pretty much bs
Quite possibly the worst attempt at a novel I have ever read. Don't waste your time on this garbage. The writing is absolutely atrocious and makes little to no sense.
don't waste your time. read some thing else.urududyodyododiydiydsusztisiszxy8xiyxihxihxiyx8yyx8yyxx9yx9yxy8x8yx9xouydiydiydisits9ydodiydoydoyd
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Loved thE story just wondering why You stopped Updating when the story wasnt complete? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. This is, so far as I've read, trash. I thought after reading the side story (which was good ish) that it would get better as I read on. But it didn't get better, it got worse, and I no longer want to waste my time reading this trash so I won't. I don't recommend reading it as I've read 40 chapters of it and It's some trash - below average stuff so far.
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the author obviously has high potential. truelly original ideas and thought out design.. down side is he lets the stories jump around like a baboon on meth
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I won't be reading this story. The arrogant lack of any attempt at all at a synopsis, leaves me offended and cold toward this story. It is as if the author said to me, "Screw you potential reader! I don't care if you read my blinking story or if you choose not to read it!" Sd, because I like enjoyed "Gaming Sword Magician" by the same author—at least until I got to Chapter 40 and the blessed thing went like premium...
The novel is so bad with grammar mistakes, annoying af mc, and just overall horrible. Even the author said to someone in the comments do not need read this story if you don't want cancer(in first few comments). I wouldn't say it that harshly but author definitely needs to improve on his/her skills. Much respect to author as if there is one thing good about the novel it's the stability of updates, which does mean the author at least tried.
lmaoo... I loveee the character description the book is filled with humour and there is tons of sarcasm inside however the cover did bore me a littlee but I think this is extremely original 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
story just trys a little to hard to be mysterious and funny while at the same time trying to be super action packed. It could work if the author put more time into the foundation of the story but seems like he didn’t. To many things trying to happen at the same time makes the flow of the story kinda weak and uninteresting.
it's a good novel, I dont really find anything wrong with it other then the story moving a little slow. he hasn't even left his house up to ch 30, all hes done is get stronger by killing the zombies in the general area and the city next to him, but he hasn't left yet.
The novel in my oppinion is boring. I dont like how the story is formatted with the main character who has bren living for who knows how long and is an almight acting like a 2 year old lazy bum.
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I'm really enjoying this book. although some stuff gets forgotten for a bit, I think they will come back to it at a better time. (I am currently on chapter 110)
Its great and I like the plot the only thing is that their is to many filler chapters it could have to do with webnovel but its hard to read the whole things if I have to constantly pay for chapters that don't have much meaning to the story and could be combined with other chapters
Mediocre, the only people who would like this would chunnibyuu and isekai japanese genre people. It was very frustarting reading this and i am not a fan of mecha/Zombies either. the onky reason i gave a 3 was because the author seems like he axtuallt put some thought Into it unlike other novels on this app.
A simple and funny apocalpsye novel with an op mc. Comedys pretty good and I like the characters so far. But my biggest peeve with the story is the major grammar and writing errors throughout the story. Sometimes I feel like I'm reading an mtl and at certain points I cant even understand whats happening. I know its tough managing checks on each chapter while keeping a constant schedule but if he can clean it up, this novel will improve majorly.
This is interesting, good job 👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I liked it until ch31. I don't even understand half the conversation between him and that ancestor. It would have been better without that backstory. a simple op mc and his encounters saitama style
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
Such a marvelous story, I can't seem to fathom it's diffrence between the other stories done well, I hope you keep it up. I am looking forward to more chapters
This is a riotously fun novel. There's no other way to say it. The slightly stunted writing gives it charm, which works well with the comedic air. There is no doubt that it's a great story as well. There is a lot of context which makes the story feel real within the absurdity. I'm a sucker for both science-magic fusion and reincarnation, and this really ticks those boxes. The author is also posting super consistently. They're forging ahead with no sign of stopping! I recommend you strap in and follow on ASAP.
I think it is my second time I give 5 out 5. I rarely do it. However, this story just is that good. The author spills imagination all over the place. Sarcasm, humor, intensity, and even mystery. All cooked up in an apocalyptic plot. I wouldn't believe that it could work out but it does work o_O! There are some typos here and there but I wouldn't bother. If you get paid, then you can hire someone to proofread it. The story is rich enough to make you ignore some misspellings. I love the main character so far and hope the author would not trash him with some banality. He is too unique to be stained lol! I have no criticism. For one, I am a new author and second - the world background (which I am obsessed with, in general) rocks. You make a solid world and I become your fan! This is how it works with me lol. Good job. I will keep the story in my library even after the review. (:
I read up to chapter 46. It's honestly a good book but just not to my taste. I don't mind a joke or 2 but when almost every paragraph have some type of trolling or cringe jokes it overwhelms the story. At least to me. Also if u hate lazy MC's (MC DOESNT STAY LAZY) then the beginning chapters are gonna be torture. Only reason this isn't a 5 star is because of the characters temperaments
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Horrible grammar, full of cliches and and also cringe i can't even think of how this one got high reviews 🤯 no offense but those reviews saying this is a very good story is pretty much bs
Quite possibly the worst attempt at a novel I have ever read. Don't waste your time on this garbage. The writing is absolutely atrocious and makes little to no sense.
don't waste your time. read some thing else.urududyodyododiydiydsusztisiszxy8xiyxihxihxiyx8yyx8yyxx9yx9yxy8x8yx9xouydiydiydisits9ydodiydoydoyd
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Loved thE story just wondering why You stopped Updating when the story wasnt complete? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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the author obviously has high potential. truelly original ideas and thought out design.. down side is he lets the stories jump around like a baboon on meth
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I won't be reading this story. The arrogant lack of any attempt at all at a synopsis, leaves me offended and cold toward this story. It is as if the author said to me, "Screw you potential reader! I don't care if you read my blinking story or if you choose not to read it!" Sd, because I like enjoyed "Gaming Sword Magician" by the same author—at least until I got to Chapter 40 and the blessed thing went like premium...
The novel is so bad with grammar mistakes, annoying af mc, and just overall horrible. Even the author said to someone in the comments do not need read this story if you don't want cancer(in first few comments). I wouldn't say it that harshly but author definitely needs to improve on his/her skills. Much respect to author as if there is one thing good about the novel it's the stability of updates, which does mean the author at least tried.
lmaoo... I loveee the character description the book is filled with humour and there is tons of sarcasm inside however the cover did bore me a littlee but I think this is extremely original 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
story just trys a little to hard to be mysterious and funny while at the same time trying to be super action packed. It could work if the author put more time into the foundation of the story but seems like he didn’t. To many things trying to happen at the same time makes the flow of the story kinda weak and uninteresting.
it's a good novel, I dont really find anything wrong with it other then the story moving a little slow. he hasn't even left his house up to ch 30, all hes done is get stronger by killing the zombies in the general area and the city next to him, but he hasn't left yet.
The novel in my oppinion is boring. I dont like how the story is formatted with the main character who has bren living for who knows how long and is an almight acting like a 2 year old lazy bum.
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I'm really enjoying this book. although some stuff gets forgotten for a bit, I think they will come back to it at a better time. (I am currently on chapter 110)
Its great and I like the plot the only thing is that their is to many filler chapters it could have to do with webnovel but its hard to read the whole things if I have to constantly pay for chapters that don't have much meaning to the story and could be combined with other chapters
Mediocre, the only people who would like this would chunnibyuu and isekai japanese genre people. It was very frustarting reading this and i am not a fan of mecha/Zombies either. the onky reason i gave a 3 was because the author seems like he axtuallt put some thought Into it unlike other novels on this app.
A simple and funny apocalpsye novel with an op mc. Comedys pretty good and I like the characters so far. But my biggest peeve with the story is the major grammar and writing errors throughout the story. Sometimes I feel like I'm reading an mtl and at certain points I cant even understand whats happening. I know its tough managing checks on each chapter while keeping a constant schedule but if he can clean it up, this novel will improve majorly.
This is interesting, good job 👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I liked it until ch31. I don't even understand half the conversation between him and that ancestor. It would have been better without that backstory. a simple op mc and his encounters saitama style
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
Such a marvelous story, I can't seem to fathom it's diffrence between the other stories done well, I hope you keep it up. I am looking forward to more chapters
This is a riotously fun novel. There's no other way to say it. The slightly stunted writing gives it charm, which works well with the comedic air. There is no doubt that it's a great story as well. There is a lot of context which makes the story feel real within the absurdity. I'm a sucker for both science-magic fusion and reincarnation, and this really ticks those boxes. The author is also posting super consistently. They're forging ahead with no sign of stopping! I recommend you strap in and follow on ASAP.