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摘要
Synopsis:
A guy from earth gets transported into pokemon world after an unexpected death. God gives him three wishes for his start and surprisingly he doesn't wish anything overpowered. This is the journey of a guy who becomes a champion of champions.
Guys this is my first-time writing and there might be a lot of grammatical errors or noobie writing skills, please bear with it as English isn't my first language. I hope you enjoy my work. Can't promise the update frequency as i work on this story in my free time but I will do my best.
Disclaimer:
This is purely fan-based fiction and I don't own pokemon or any characters that appear in it, I only want to share my fantasy with other readers, thank you. everything I write is fictional and is not intended to hurt anyone.
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I will shamelessly rate my own fanfic, If I can't rate Five star then no one will. I promise you guys that as the chapters go you will see a lot of improvement. thanks for the read and peace out.
This is a good Pokemon Fanfiction. The story, character and background need more development but it can be resolved easily because the most important is here : the story is smooth and interesting. Good job.
Dude this is a really good and this is coming from someone who has more than 10 hours of reading everything is good about it this is one of the better ones I’ve read and I don’t really like to post reviews did you should keep this up And Don’t drop And don’t listen to Those haters because I love it and you made mu day
One of the best pokemon fanfic. The author is doing a good job by doing some unique things in this fanfic and i can't wait to see more of this fanfic and where it will lead us too. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Best Pokemon fanfic........ . . ............................................................keep it up............................don't drop it................................
Great writing style with entertaining chapters showing a good depiction of the Pokemon world while introducing some realistic qualities (like bad guys/Pokemon killing people; dog-eat-dog world). Enjoying the training arcs as well as using Pokemon types and behaviours to our MC's advantage (since he's from another world). There's also well written chapters with only the Pokemon POV. Those familiar with Journey Towards Greatness and Pokemon: A Mystical Journey, know how much these chapters add realism to the Pokemon. Their feelings, thoughts, behaviours, goals and their interaction between themselves and their trainer make for well rounded characters that are believable. The Author has extensive knowledge of the Pokemon world and that translates very well into the story written. Another cute and often part to look forward to are the fun facts about Pokemon that the Author adds at the end. Its another great piece to add to an already well written story. Those looking for more Pokemon stories can check out the ones I reference above in the Pokemon POV. I thoroughly enjoyed those as well as this story and hope you would too. Looking forward to more Author-sama. A definite read for those looking for Pokemon fanfics
I dont really have a lot to say right now except for world background, gave it 3 stars because even though the plot is moving nicely and so is the MC's attitude and relations with the pokemon. It lacks small details like descriptions of the background as well as pokemon to pokemon interaction, the pokemon to trainer interaction is good though, letting ralts have telepathy early on and helping riolu have the aura to interact with the mc is also good, wish there was a way to help the scyther though. Also not much descriptions of the surroundings(im just meticulous, you can ignore this part because i can understand that not all authors favor describing the scenery where the MC passes by)
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Terrific job, I’m really like it one of the best Pokémon stories I’ve been reading lately, your really good can’t wait for more and don’t stop👍
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It's awesome.......the mc is quite good,unlike some nasty prvt.....the development of the ff is also good.....and like the author ,I also like the fairy and steel type pokemon.....all I want to say that it's nice to read....😁
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So far it has been a good read! It just needs a little more to make it an awsome one. I feel it a bit rushed sometimes and even when the MC got a whole year in Oak lab to reserch, he miss a lot of info from the world, like Cynthia not being Sinoh champion or Pseudo-Legendaries being imposible to get without a clan involved...
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Thank you for regulars updates and loving your version of pokemon so far! Keep up with the great work and looking forward for the next chapters to come! Hope you don't drop this because it's one of the best pokemon fan fiction I read in a while!
卷 1 : A Sweet Beginning
- 1 Ch1-The Dream 4 years ago
- 2 Ch2-Where's my promised starter? 4 years ago
- 3 Ch3-Aftermath and Prof.Oak 4 years ago
- 4 Ch4- Gary, Ash and The Egg 4 years ago
- 5 Ch5-My Starter 4 years ago
- 6 Ch6-Its Revenge Time 4 years ago
- 7 A Notice 4 years ago
- 8 Ch7- Team Rocket 4 years ago
- 9 Ch8- Aura and My Second Pokemon 4 years ago
- 10 Ch9- Training and Battles 4 years ago
- 11 Ch10- Pewter City Gym 4 years ago
- 12 Ch11- Alder and Giovanni 4 years ago
- 13 Ch12- A New Teammate 4 years ago
- 14 Ch13- The Ancient One 4 years ago
- 15 Ch14- The Chase and the King Gene 4 years ago
- 16 Ch15- Cerulean and The Pokedex Update 4 years ago
- 17 Ch16- Gym battle and Misty 4 years ago
- 18 Ch17- Point of Views 4 years ago
- 19 Ch18- Surprise at the Daycare 4 years ago
- 20 Ch19- Clans, Pseudo Legendaries and a Big Surprise 4 years ago
- 21 Explanation regarding Pseudo Legendaries 4 years ago
- 22 Ch20- Champion quarrels 4 years ago
- 23 Ch21- Baiting Cynthia with Rare Pokemon 4 years ago
Not much to say right now. The fanfic has great potential and I am looking forward to where it is headed. Another great thing is the author acc talks to his readers and takes on board if you have any useful criticism. This is great because you feel more connected to the fanfic.