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A nice story with a perfectly realistic storyline...... Author,what made you write this story?
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I love this Novel's storyline. It's quite interesting......😋 Honestly, cheaters are quite shameful......😶 😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😝😜😝
This novel is about a loving family that is torn apart by the mother's cheating. The mother foolishly brings home her lover in the presence of her son,this is what spells doom for her....
揭示劇透 Author,you tried with the story line but try coming up with a more thrilling story. Thanks.
A nice story with a perfectly realistic storyline...... Author,what made you write this story?
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I love this Novel's storyline. It's quite interesting......😋 Honestly, cheaters are quite shameful......😶 😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😝😜😝
This novel is about a loving family that is torn apart by the mother's cheating. The mother foolishly brings home her lover in the presence of her son,this is what spells doom for her....
揭示劇透
Author,you tried with the story line but try coming up with a more thrilling story. Thanks.